Hakora

[Hakora]

NAME: Hakora
FACTION: Sith
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Mix Pureblood/Human (descibed more in personality)
AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'4"
WEIGHT: 185
EYES: Yellowish glow. As special made blue contacts to hide colour
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Redish tan
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Pureblood eyes
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: He is strong and can hold his own, but is not as strong as a brute and is not known for his strength.
DEXTERITY: Very agile. He is quick and uses this to his advantage through parkour and his fighting style Vaapad.
CONSTITUTION: His health is above average, but mainly due to his intelligence he can block out pain longer than most.
INTELLIGENCE: Genius level intelligence. Most people think he is a blood crazy killer and he uses that to his advantage. His intelligence along with his speed is what keeps him alive.
WISDOM: His intelligence is high, but his wisdom is not the greatest. He is young and inexperienced in war and thus his arrogance can make him act foolish.
CHARISMA: Usually low, but when he is undercover he will use an implant to highten his Charisma so he can play his part almost perfectly.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Push


SKILLS:
-Naturally gifted with a basic understanding of Vaapad.
-Great at Parkour
-Gifted in the force

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Vaapad

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths
-Speed (greatest strength)
-Force
-Combat
-Intelligence

Weakness
-Arrogance(greatest weakness)
-Charisma (without implant)
-Wisdom
-His lack of unity with anyone not his master

GEAR:
two broken purple lightsabers

SHIP:
Does not have one yet

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:

"He inherited his fathers hate, but his was greater." He was born a genius and growing up saw everyone as beneath him including his family. He is cold and uncaring most of the time, but as he ages he matures and gains social manners....kinda. He knows he was born to kill and so he does not deny that desire and that is all he cares to be is a weapon for the Sith. He is technically straight when it comes to love, but the odds of him acting on such a useless emotion is low to say the least. Most people. even sith, have a conscience, but Hakora has never had one. He serves only one motto, "Kill or be killed."

He does not always resort to straight bloodshed as he enjoys gaining someone's trust and then crushing it. He owns a pair of special contacts that change the colour of his eyes to a normal blue and hopes one day to beable to infiltrate the Jedi Order and kill from the inside. He killed his whole family, but this has no effect on him as he always saw them as nothing more than a obsticle to the dark side and as a weakness he could not afford.


BIOGRAPHY:
He was born at a very young age on the cold planet of Hoth. Some wonder if his place of origins has led to his cold personality. His father was a Sith Pureblood from Korriban and his mother was a Human from Naboo. His father served the sith from a young age, but always had issues with the way of the Sith. His mother also served from a young age, but the Jedi Order and like Hakora's father she found fault in the Jedi Order. During a battle where the Sith and Jedi met on the battlefield of the planet Ord Mantell. His father and mother clashed on the battlefield, but were both shot with the after effects of a cannon round from a Sith tank and sent flying away from the battlefield with broken weapons, unconscious. The sith won the battle and laid waste to the planet leaving no survivors except Hakora's parents. When both came to they found they were left behind with no way off and no weapons. Long story short they hated each other, but the conditions provided them with talk time and thus they fell in love and remained "dead" and left to start a home on Hoth.

This weakness to both ways (Jedi and Sith) made Hakora hate his parents and even though his father was a pureblood Hakora only received his father's eyes. Hakora always believed the reason of this was his father's weakness and resisting his own nature that he lost his own nature. He was a high functioning child and so everyone else seemed so slow. He did have one childhood friend growing up and they spent their days sword fighting. Hakora never really liked his friend, but never passed up a chance to fight. One day, Hakora brought real vibroblades that belonged to his parents. His friend was scared to use them, but Hakora insisted until he gave in. During the fight, Hakora went into his mind and lost himself in his fighting to where nothing existed, but the fight and the sound of steel against steel made it all the more real, he began to press his friend with offence and his friend became scared and dropped his gaurd and Hakora sliced him through the chest. As his friend died, Hakora came to and looked at him as his friend pleaded for help, but Hakora only watched and stood still until his friend was dead. Hakora did not feel remorse and knew from that day on that this was what he was made for; he is Sith. His parents refused to let him join the Sith as both saw them as pure evil and Hakora then knew that his only way to the Sith was through their deaths. After his parents left the Sith and Jedi they got in contact with their families, but his father's family saw him as a traitor, but out of love they did not turn them in; weakness. At the age of 13 Hakora's parents finally broke through to his father's family and they arranged a family reunion on Hoth. Hakora knew this was his time. The night before, he broke into his father's chambers and stole his old purple lightsabers which were now repaired and hid them in his clothing for the coming day. He left in the morning with parents to meet with both families and he did nothing for hours.

As the families mingled and mingled, Hakora waited. His father and mother then asked him to join them on stage as they gave a speech thanking the families in celebrating their 15th wedding anniversary. Hakora stood inbetween them and slightly behind them. As his mother began speaking a purple glow exploded from her chest as Hakora ignited the first lightsaber and before his father could react, Hakora used the force to send his father into a wall across the room. He then ignited the second lightsaber as some on his father's side of the family ignited lightsabers of his own. Hakora jumped into the crowd and began using a natural-born, but crude version of Vaapad which made him seem as if he was dancing among his falling family. Ten minutes passed and Hakora was finally down to his father's father who was a sith warrior and fought well against Hakora, but Hakora's hate was stronger. During the fight the man sliced and broke both lightsabers, but Hakora used one broken one to shove into his grandfather's neck.

Once Hakora's father began to come to and his vision return he looked around to see his whole family dead including his wife who lay dead in his father's arms. He then saw a lone survivor which was his son siting on a blood stained table. His father was in shock and could only ask why. Hakora did not answer right away, but stood and pinned his father against the wall using the force as Hakora answered with, "The deaths today are because of your weakness and I shall right your wrongs and like my family I will lay waste to the galaxy. I have seen cities burn and people knell to my power, the force has shown me." With these final words, his father died.

Hakora then let his actions make his name, but it was not enough to going the Sith's attention and so Hakora left for tatooine and where he served the Hutts as a freelance Bounty Hunter until he turned 18 and began to seek out the Sith...

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[darkpwns]

I'm new so I probably shouldn't comment on profiles, but this isn't a suggestion xD.

Just a general question.

Why Vapaad if you're Sith? What purpose does not succumbing to the dark side have for a sith who is supposed to embrace the dark side? I would think straight up Juyo is better for a sith >.<

Vapaad seemed to me to be the Jedi answer to controlling the aggression inherent in Juyo

 

[Gamov]

Why Vapaad if you're Sith? What purpose does not succumbing to the dark side have for a sith who is supposed to embrace the dark side? I would think straight up Juyo is better for a sith >.<

Vapaad seemed to me to be the Jedi answer to controlling the aggression inherent in Juyo

Why did Dooku use Makashi? Aggression isn't everything in a Sith. Sometimes control and restraint is just as important.

That being said, there are only a couple points I'd like to bring up:

1] What is this "implant" that gives him better charisma? Seems like a fishy idea to me that can be used when it's convenient.

2] How does being intelligent help him block out pain longer than most? The two ideas aren't really linked. I could be a super genius, but if you break my hand, It's still gonna hurt like hell.

 

[Hakora]

First I am very impressed you know that and I would be happy to answer.

First backstory: I have done other RPs like Bleach and Samurai based and in everyone of them I have used fighting styles that have been more then combat, but enact the mind and seem almost like a dance. Vaapad is made famous by Mace Windu and I don't care what most people say, the man was a dark jedi in denial. That is beside the point, vaapad and juyo are pretty much the same style excpet vaapad involves the mind. Yes the style is meant to be a sith style without subcoming to the darkside, but that they don't subcum to the dark side. My sith characters have always used Vaapad as it is almost the perfect reflection of the way of the samurai and in my opinion the ultimate style. Hakora sees the Vaapad the Jedi use as a weak version not getting up to it's full potinual and so he does embrace the dark side that comes with the style. Basically juyo is fine, but not completely what I am looking for in a style. If someone wants me to change it from Vaapad to Juyo it wouldn't ruin things, but there is my answer.

 

[Hakora]

1) If you look under gear, he doesn't have the implant yet. I do not plan for him to have it until later, I just put how he was going to use it and he would only care to use it if he is undercover and needs to fool someone. Usually he could careless about convincing people because he usually just wants to fight. I hope that answers it. As to abusing it, everything can be abused and thus he doesn't have it until I am trusted by you guys to not abuse it.

2) Some would argue that more then 50 percent of pain is in the mind. In a dream you can feel pain because the mind is strong. Also when someone's adrenaline begins pumping they can ignore pain and if you doubt this look into the drug meth and cases of how much pain someone can ignore under that. I do hope you have read the Princess Bride. In the princess bride when Wesley is being tortured his body screams, but he loses himself in the thought of his love and ignores the pain; same concept. Hakora knows that most pain is mental and thus focuses on the fight, on Vaapad and loses himself in the fight. Sure he is not super human and can ignore an arm being broken, but a rib or two broken or some slashes he can ignore. I can remove this if it seems to close to abuse, but I stay far away from god modding and in fact I do enjoy letting my character come close to death...a lot.

 

[Kaane]

It'll be hard finding a Sith charrie that can actually teach Vaapad at a high level considering its inherent Jedi-ness, and it also requires intense strength of mind to pull off correctly. So if your charrie easily gives into emotion, then it might not be the best path for 'im. But honestly, a rose by any other name would smell just as sweet. Juyo and Vaapaad, barring the mental mindset of the latter, are pretty much the same. Heck, you could even say he's developing a style of his own if you really wanted. My own charries can have insanely convoluted fighting styles at times, so really, just have fun with it XD.

Besides all that debate about the different ways to kill someone with a lightsaber and what Gamov stated, I think it looks good. However, choke isn't an Acolyte power, and the Kills section is reserved for PC charries. That's all I can see at first glance :P.

 

[Steel]

Please do not center everything, it hurts the eyes.

This character will most likely begin as an acolyte, and Force Choke is a power that acolytes may not use. You will have to remove it.

Resisting pain is mental, but it is not intelligence. Pain resistance would be based on willpower. Intelligence is the knowledge of your character and not at all related to their willpower. Gamov's point stands.

How does an implant boost charisma? You should probably explain this whether you plan to abuse it or not.

Why does he wear blue contacts? I am curious.

Other than that, pretty solid beginner profile, I hope you have a good time with him.

 

[TheSilentWind]

I like the character. He is balanced although what is the implant that helps his charisma?

 

[Wit]

Please do not center everything, it hurts the eyes.

You don't need to force your personal preferences on people, a lot of people use centre alignment on profiles.

 

[Flamjetxx]

Please do not center everything, it hurts the eyes.

Oh, you drama queen ;)

I actually like it. It's different front the common left alignment.

Btw, I like the profile! looks good so far.

 

[Hakora]

Why does he wear blue contacts? I am curious.

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Well if he is in with the Jedi pretending to be someone or anyone not sith the yellow eyes woul stand out.... Contacts hide his sith eyes.

 

[Omnis]

The only major issue I found here was the listing of Force Choke in the Force Powers section. Acolytes (and Force sensitives of similar power level) cannot learn or use Force Choke, as it is too advanced. Generally, Acolytes can only start with basic powers (Push/Pull/Jump/Speed, and a few others of that nature).

If you cut that power out of the profile, this character will be considered approved.

Cheers!

 

[Steel]

Well if he is in with the Jedi pretending to be someone or anyone not sith the yellow eyes woul stand out.... Contacts hide his sith eyes.

That makes sense, thanks.

 

[Marf]

Nobody is born without a conscience, that's very unrealistic and gives the character no real room for development. Especially when he's so young and of a low-rank. At that age and rank, he won't have good control at all and will be very suspectable to mistakes and emotional conflict of all kinds. Killing his family because he considered them weak, or an obstacle is way too simple and nowhere near good enough a motif for a child to commit such an major and dramatic act. Think about what could possibly drive you to kill your own family.

Similarly to how they develop their skills and powers through RP, Sith also develop psychologically. A 18 year old Acolyte is not going to behave like a 50 year old Darth. He will be immature, hormonal and have poor control over his emotions. It takes decades for character to lose their humanity and morality. Even then, I still greatly dislike high ranking Sith who behave like infallible Gods with no normality or human traits. Of course, this is just my recommendation, I'm not telling you to do anything ;)

 

[Hakora]

I will have to respectfully disagree with both points.

First that people are born without consciences is false. Unless you believe in God (I do, so don't take offence if you do) then without the existence of God there is no absolute morality and morality is what fuels a conscience. Also a conscience may not be the same for everyone as murder may be wrong for one person while for another it maybe right. Hakora sees himself as nothing more then a weapon of war and so you could say his conscience only tells him to kill and that is the only thing right to him.

I made killing his family so simple and meaningful to portray what it was like to him. He did it and didn't care. I think you will like the jedi I will creat more. I am first debating right now on whether making a human or a Yoda species Jedi. I am still looking into both and first need to see if yoda is allowed lol.

 

[Miz]

Morality like Beauty is subjective and up for debate. Something in his head has to justify why he thinks the of his parents murder is okay and needs a logical basis besides the fact that he felt they were weak. He needs a reason why he only sees himself to kill and why it overrides every other humanly urge, like lust, and empathy. According to your logic there's nothing stopping him from being a psychotic sociopath, who couldn't build basic human relations.

What I think Malice is trying to say is that Hakora does have a conscience, but his particular one justifies the murder of the weak.

 

[Hakora]

Morality like Beauty is subjective and up for debate. Something in his head has to justify why he thinks the of his parents murder is okay and needs a logical basis besides the fact that he felt they were weak. He needs a reason why he only sees himself to kill and why it overrides every other humanly urge, like lust, and empathy. According to your logic there's nothing stopping him from being a psychotic sociopath, who couldn't build basic human relations.

What I think Malice is trying to say is that Hakora does have a conscience, but his particular one justifies the murder of the weak.

I can expand on it, but in the words of Sherlock, "I am a high functioning sociopath."

 

[Joy Carleec]

First that people are born without consciences is false. Unless you believe in God (I do, so don't take offence if you do) then without the existence of God there is no absolute morality and morality is what fuels a conscience.

Not to start a debate, but you don't need to know God in order to have a conscience or deeper morality. You only need an understanding of right and wrong and an empathy for other people's feelings.

Also. I personally prefer center to left align. Left align looks sloppy or lazy in some circumstances.

 

[Hakora]

Not to start a debate, but you don't need to know God in order to have a conscience or deeper morality. You only need an understanding of right and wrong and an empathy for other people's feelings.

Also. I personally prefer center to left align. Left align looks sloppy or lazy in some circumstances.

Yes, this is true, but I find most people without God in the equation believe that morality is a social adaptation or a product of evolution and thus it isn't absolute and no one has an absolute right or wrong. That was my point.


I added a bit about Hakora killing a childhood friend and this was how Hakora discovered he was Sith and not Jedi. I feel I explained well why he is what he is. He is high functioning and like Sherlock Holmes he sees people who aren't high functioning as idiots and not worth his time, there will be exceptions. If you have any experence working with people with disabilities this may be easier to understand. Some autistic or people with disabilities are born with an almost crualty or lack of understanding for other people's pain. Hakora isn't autistic, but he just quite frankly doesn't care about other people or how they feel. He is born and breed to fight and kill nothing more. He is simple because I plan to kill him off down the road. When, I do not know. My jedi will be more indepth as I don't plan to kill the Jedi.