Freedom or a Concoction for the Masses? (Coruscant, open)

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This place is a maze. Never before have I ever been in a more confusing landscape. As far as my eyes can see, all there is, is more buildings! Do they ever stop? the Di-Malum thought as he traversed on foot through the city-planet of Coruscant. Aric Bogan Neris had been wandering around for a few days now, alone, just trying to get a feel for the place. So far, all he felt was this uncomfortable closeness of the metal jungle that surrounded him. Back on Kacur, things had been different. There were none of these metallic structures, and there were definitely fewer people. Coruscant was a melting pot, Aric had decided; where sentients of almost every species was thrown in and mixed with the others. It was impossible to keep track of how many different beings he had seen during his short stay on the planet thus far, and the number was only going to continue to grow.

Well, I'm hungry. Aric Bogan headed over to a nearby deli, tired of his long trek down the various side streets, as he had no vehicle to speak of, deciding that it was now time to eat.

He opened the door to the deli to noticed quite a few people already inside. It seemed that the place was backed. The Di-Malum brushed back his fiery red bangs, which revealed the sharp contrast of his emerald green eyes. He wore only simple clothes, a dark green vest and pants. Actually, the only other remarkable thing about him besides his red hair, was the laser sword attached to his belt, which he was unaware to be rare among the common people.

The first person he saw was a woman, with dirty blond hair, and stunning blue eyes. She was wearing this unfortunate-looking brown jumpsuit, and had a sullun expression on her face. Aric thought that perhaps she was once beautiful, but something had eaten away at her, not just physically, but emotionally as well. Something had happened to her, to cause her blue eyes to lose a portion of the fire they probably used to have. All this was just an assumption based on looks, but appraisal of the appearance, especially one's eyes, was something the Di-Malum exceeded at. Perhaps it was his Spirit that helped him identify with others, or maybe it was just empathy for having felt the pain of betrayal himself. Life had been cruel to him, and so he seemed to have this gift to spot the same in others.

Then he turned and saw this other woman, dirty blond hair, blue eyes, same deal. She was attractive, and standing next to a black-haired human male, who was sitting down at a table. Aric might have tried to catch her eye, maybe ask for directions, play the lost part, but she had this look to her. She was tough, plus her and the man seemed to be discussing something important, and Aric wasn't the type to listen in to peoples' conversations, so he just walked on past, and headed to the counter. He wasn't sure what else to do, really. He had never been in a deli before, nor any kind of store, actually.
 

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Hearing the woman she had been sitting next to, she tried to choke back a laugh at the comment. Raising an eyebrow and putting her hands upon her hips, she turned to face the poor woman again.

"Anyone who's anybody and could leave this heap would have already done so. Not even the bravest of smugglers would try to sneak through a blockade unless they had a death wish. They value their neck too much. The truth of the matter is we're stuck. If I were you, I'd find some hole to hide within the depths of Coruscant and risk the city collapsing on top of you. At least there you have a chance of survival...that is if you can survive gang territory," she offered with a sly grin.

Yet, as soon as her eyes caught sight of the newcomer her grin faded. There was something...odd...about him that she couldn't place. His clothing didn't bear the style of Coruscant...

"You there," she started, calling him out. "What say you about the blockade? You obviously are not from around here. Why have you not tried to leave?"
 

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Aleyn let out a small chuckle and paid for her meal. This women thought she knew everything. Aleyn had been surviving on the streets and in gang territory all her life, but it wasn't a fact she was going to share.

She didn't say anything else, but instead stood and walked out the doors, back to her life.
 

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Aric turned round the moment he heard "Hey you." Not because he necessarily thought someone was talking to him, but because it was spoken fairly loudly. It was the other blond woman, the tough looking one. And she was addressing him. Perhaps he wouldn't need to make the first move... maybe she was going to do it for him.

"What say you about the blockade? You obviously are not from around here. Why have you not tried to leave?"

Blockade? He knew nothing of any blockade. The Di-Malum had only arrived a few days ago, and everything had been fine then. "I don't know much about it, to be honest. I actually wasn't aware there even was one." True enough, he had been incredibly honest there, as per the usual. "But it doesn't bother me, I have no interest in leaving this planet just yet," he continued in a casual voice. "...I'm looking for some friends of mine."
 

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The hooded jedi stepped past the woman leaving the Deli and sat at a secluded table near the back, secluded mainly because of the bad view of what was the news. He waited quietly. Then after a few secounds a waitress droid came up and dropped off a small bun and a glass of orange liquid, he started to eat the bun as he watched the others speak
 
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Brushing off the woman walking out, she was mesmerized by the foriegner's casual brushing off of the blockade. Everyone was talking about the blockade and what it all meant, even going so far as to stock up on supplies before the stores ran out; yet, here he was as calm as the eye of a hurricane. Maybe...just maybe...but this was too easy. No, this man couldn't be one of the Alsakens, could he? He could, however, be her one true hope of a ticket offworld, or at least his means of transport. One could tell the wheels were turning in her head as she began to think of the the doors that could open.

"Perhaps, I could be of service,then," came her sly response, the harshness almost replaced with a sense of compassion.

Shifting her gaze to him again, her face blanched a little as she saw the Jedi in her peripheral vision. Iidesia felt a knot form in her throat and sickness overcome her. She needed out of here, fast.

"The offer's on the table," she said quickly, trying to fight the urge to flee, futile though it was. "But, it won't be there long," she added.

It was an offer she rarely made to anyone. Iidesia was a selfish creature only looking out for herself at all times. It was that very nature that had her now heading for the door, unable to take the four walls of the deli any longer.
 
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Overhearing the woman's offer almost as if he could tell the true meaning of what was behind the speech, "Emerald eyed stranger, i understand that you do not wish to leave as of yet but i myself have not seen the most of this great city. but even so when you are ready to leave, and if you can leave, i would wish to acompany you off world. For i wish to leave this planet and gain knowledge of this galaxy. I cant pay much but at this moment, because i do not have a ship of my own and because of the blockade, you if i may say, are my only option to leave this planet."
 

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He almost smiled, but managed to catch himself before doing so. She wasn't really making the first move, as he could tell by the tone of her voice that she wanted something else besides his company, but he would play along for now. Who knows where this mysterious woman would lead Aric, perhaps she knew something of the ones he was looking for, and could help him more than he knew. "Alright, I supposed you can help me," the Di-Malum said to her.

"Emerald eyed stranger [...]"

"I'm sorry," Aric responded, puzzled. "You must have misunderstood me; I said that I have no interest in leaving Coruscant just yet. I cannot help you." Something about the hooded figure seemed to unease Aric Bogan, but he couldn't quite put his finger on it. He could tell the man possessed power of the Spirit, but he wasn't sure how strong it was. The dirty blond woman also seemed immediately put off the moment she noticed him as well, which gave Aric the red flag.

"Miss, do you mind if we leave now? We can get on with the pleasantries of introductions in a more... secluded environment."
 

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The hooded figure grined slightly as the words left the mans mouth. "i shall wait untill another means of escape from this planet arrises", He finishes his glass of orange liquid and leans back on the chair.
 
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Darkness began to fall on Coruscant, the Alsakan fleet was still over Coruscant, and people weary people across the planet were panicking. It had been 10:00 p.m., many people had left the deli.

Ben was not one to worry. He had dwelled in the midst of Coruscant since he was born. If anything happened, Ben was smart enough to find his own way out of it.

"When or if the bombing occurs, we will all find our own way out of it. Once the first bolt of energy crashes into a building, we are all on are own."

"Everyone will begin riots, thieves will begin to steal items from stores, and Coruscant will go to waste before our very own eyes."

"Unless we are smart enough to find our own way out of it." He says this to everyone that is in the deli.

Some men disagree with him, "What if we DON'T have a way off?"

Ben sighs at this, he would not repeat what he had just stated.
 
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OOC: I don't think they're going to glass Coruscant...
 

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OOC: can someone fill me in on whats happening, i understand that theres a blockade, but not much more than that (so not to clog up the thread ill delete this after i get a reply through mail, please do not reply through the thread)
 

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looks towards the speaking man, "if they do bomb then anyone who owns a ship would proberbly attack the blockade, mainly to protect their homes, familys etc. so therefor i need not worry, even if they have a huge force over the planet, anyone that has something to protect, will. its living nature"

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"I thought you'd never ask," she answered him in a deep voice. "Just make sure you keep up. You'll be safe as long as you're with me. Wander where I'm taking you and it may be the end," she told him as she quickly slipped out of the door.

The harsh air already was welcoming to her, as she took deep breaths. What I'd do for a smoke right now, she thought as she turned around to make sure the man was following. Darkness would fall meaning the gang would be out in force tonight. Perhaps she'd be able to slip him in easily enough.
 

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"Hmm a smoke?" Jasper said walking out of a nearby doorway, funny how things always seemed to end up with perfect timing. He pulled out a small metal case containing a few cigarettes, mostly untouched, the opaque gliterstim packs were however behind them, it seemed to double as a container that if searched, the spice might not be noticed, due to the black packets matching the lining of the case.
 
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Ben decided to follow the two and ran out of the deli to meet up with them. "Well, if the Alsakan's attack us, I will defend Coruscant with my life, whatever the cost may be..."

As the group paced out of the diner, a couple of thugs were walking down the street. They had blaster pistols in their hand, and knives holstered onto their belts. What a nice time for a couple of weaklings to intervene.

It is 11:00 now, and it was pitchblack despite the streetlights over head.
 

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"If I don't keep up?" Aric asked as his new guide rushed out the door. "Women." He shook his head and followed her outside. The Di-Malum had finally made a potential ally on this planet, and even though he was still unsure about the "potential" part, he was set on giving her a shot. He wouldn't put his complete trust in her just yet, as he didn't even know her name, but he would give this woman the benefit of the doubt. Whether Aric would regret it or not, that remains to be seen.

As Aric Bogan stepped out into the night, he gave the blond woman a small smile, as he found it was always good to appear friendly, especially around those of the opposite sex. It's not that he thought if things went well he'd get a throw in the hay, just that he'd been alone for quite some time now, and even a bit of company from a female was comforting.

That smile quickly turned to a frown however, as the black haired man raced outside to follow them. What is this guy's problem? Wait--was this a trick to get me alone outside? Aric then turned back to blondie, then to blackie, as if they were in on this together. After all, you never could be too careful, this whole planet was filled with people who were strangers to Aric Bogan Neris, not just in appearance, but in custom as well. That's when he noticed the approaching thugs too. Oh great, they did set me up.
 

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As everyone left he sighed heavily and got up to leave himself
 

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She eyed the man who offered the smoke with suspicion and quickly moved further away from the door, wanting to distance herself from this gentleman. Opening her mouth, ready to tell the fellow where he could stick his death sticks, she was startled by the other man tearing out of the doorway.

"What the hell is this?" she asked, losing her patience with the dark-haired man. "I don't need kath hounds following me around! You want to fight? Good for you! Go join the Republic and take up arms," she told him, shooing him away in the process. "I'll have no part of it."

Turning her back on him, clenching her fists, daring him to follow her again, she smacked Aric's arm. "C'mon," she called impatiently, "before their craziness rubs off."

Iidesia knew full well that the gangs were about to make their rounds on the upper city tonight. She'd rather be far away than standing in the middle of the street. It was then that she caught a glimpse of the two thugs heading their way. Catching the glint of the metal and seeing the colors of her rivals, she knew the time to flee was now.

"We gotta go!"
 
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