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Darth Tak

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Please recommend a picture!
I have met the requirements, it is a WIP


NAME: Yolnta Gigasa
FACTION: Hutt
RANK: I don't know yet
SPECIES:Hutt
AGE: 645 (Adult)
GENDER: Hermaphrodite
HEIGHT: 187cm/5'10
WEIGHT: 1 ton
EYES: Goldeny/Browny
SKIN: Grey like a Hutt’s
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

STRENGTH:5/10
DEXTERITY:1/10
CONSTITUTION:6/10
INTELLIGENCE:8/10
WISDOM:9/10
CHARISMA:6/10

SKILLS:
Negotiations.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+Deals, Negotiations
-Extremely Lazy


GEAR:

DROIDS:
at least a half a dozen of B2 Battle Droids following him at all times.

PERSONALITY:
Yolnta is evil, untrusting, untrustworthy and not the person you should chat to or about. His deals are always in his favour, and gets angry easily. He is very harsh and ignorant, and barely likes anyone. DO NOT TRUST THIS HUTT! If you anger him, he will probably hire Mercenaries to kill you. 53 words.

BIOGRAPHY:
Not a very well known Hutt, Yolnta was born into a rich family with a lot of expectations of him, but he failed them and wished to get Acegik to continue the glorious Legacy. Throughout his career, Yolnta has organised three bank robberies (two of which where successful, the other not so much), seven jewelry stores (All successful, but most weren't worth it) and funded a hacking campaign (which barely got them more money then it costed) 67 Words.

KILLS:

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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No-one commented. Seems no-one likes cute things.
 

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I would like to see more from his bio. I understand that he is a baby, though he still has 10 years to cover. You say he was let out of the brooding pouch at a young age to experience the world...what did he experience? How was he spoiled and by who? Just a little more to flesh it out. I'm interested to see what you come up with.
 

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I would like to see more from his bio. I understand that he is a baby, though he still has 10 years to cover. You say he was let out of the brooding pouch at a young age to experience the world...what did he experience? How was he spoiled and by who? Just a little more to flesh it out. I'm interested to see what you come up with.

By 'expirence the world' I mean eat expensive food, sleep alot and do nothing but play. He is spoilt by his parent.
 

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WIP things aren't allowed on the forums...as I've been told by mods and stuff in my profiles. Even though it says that they are allowed in the character app area, the mods say otherwise so that may have changed.

If that's not true, sorry
 

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WIP things aren't allowed on the forums...as I've been told by mods and stuff in my profiles. Even though it says that they are allowed in the character app area, the mods say otherwise so that may have changed.

If that's not true, sorry

They are allowed so long as they meet the prerequisites beforehand.
 

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Pew pew baby slug man. Gonna rule the galaxy one planet at a time.
 

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They are allowed so long as they meet the prerequisites beforehand.

All of mine met the prerequisites >.< My bio had almost a thousand characters and my personality had probably close to the same amount...on...each...post D:

THEY LIED!

Thank you, now they will pay in hugs >:O
 

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Rotta was a ten year old huttlet and still a toddler, so unless you plan to RP this guy as a baby for the rest of the timeline I don't see much use for this character. Mind sharing exactly what you plan to experience with such a young character, that too with a species in which after 40 more years he'll be equivalent to a human ten year old. I know our concept of time is rather flexible here but that might be stretching it a little.
 

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That would be stretching it a lot, Wit.

Tak I really do suggest you rethink this character. I know the concept is cute, but you won't be contributing much of anything with a 10 year Hutt. I can tell Gaja probably won't want to lug the poor thing around.
 

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EVERYTHING IS REDONE!!! TWO CHARACTERS NOW!

Hallejuhah!
 

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I strongly recommend makings second profile for this second character.
It is disorganised, unsightly and really makes me just want to not bother reading it over at all.
 

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I strongly recommend makings second profile for this second character.
It is disorganised, unsightly and really makes me just want to not bother reading it over at all.
Not to mention the fact that the second character's profile does not meet the minimum requirements. The second character's profile is more or less non-existent. And on that point the original character's profile itself is just above the minimum word requirement as far as biography is concerned and I think doesn't meet that count in the personality section.
 

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Not to mention the fact that the second character's profile does not meet the minimum requirements. The second character's profile is more or less non-existent. And on that point the original character's profile itself is just above the minimum word requirement as far as biography is concerned and I think doesn't meet that count in the personality section.

Acegiks's word count of the Bio and Personality both surpass the minimum. I am treating them as one character.
 

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In one to two paragraphs (six sentences each), describe your characters personality. Be sure to update this section as the role-play continues. This section requires a minimum of 50 words upon the posting of the profile, even if the profile is a work in progress.

BIOGRAPHY:
In two to three paragraphs (six sentences each), describe your characters backstory up to the point you started RPing him/her. Be sure to update this section as the role-play continues. This section requires a minimum of 50 words upon the posting of the profile, even if the profile is a work in progress.

See?
 

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However, for the sake of organisation, and ease of access (bringing back to my point of it looking like crap) it'd be best for two.

And ynolta's personality does not meet the minimum of 50 anyway.
Split them up to save the hassle. It won't take you long to do.
 

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I'm just going to reiterate Fine Frenzy's comment:

Tak I really do suggest you rethink this character. I know the concept is cute, but you won't be contributing much of anything with a 10 year Hutt. I can tell Gaja probably won't want to lug the poor thing around.
 
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A few things:

1) This is two characters
2) You really should expand every single thing here, at the moment, all one knows is 'he is cute'.
3) 'Countless Guards': No, build up to that.
4) Hutt parents rarely love their children
 
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