Pinto Agrafena

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An interesting young woman, who has experienced some bad times.​

Personality
Abrasive, Stubborn and Driven; she finds what she immediately wants and does not cease until she has achieved the desired effect, even if it was detrimental to her. Generally quiet and untalkative, she frequently holds long-lasting grudges that are difficult to forget for her. Especially given how much strife she has had to endure at the hands of owners. Pinto was a proud warrior-hunter and has little interest in socialising in this new universe open to her, she would rather return to her simplier home and life. While she might adhere to diplomacy and has a sense of honor - she much prefers the simplicity of violence and the quick results that come from it. Despite it all, she has quite a patient streak from being an ambush hunter.

Relationships
Father: Was old when she was abducted; possibly deceased.
Mother: similarly to her Father, however females tend to live longer / healthier lives. Possible she is kicking.

Pinto Agrafena
Rebellious Slave
rp3aHZR.png

Home: Chiron
dVuFaL1.png

Slave
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Name:Pinto Agrafena
Species:Chiron
Age:28 (Born ABY 995)
Family:Espan Agrafena
Mila Agrafena
Gender:Female
Height:7'4''
Weight:603lbs.
Eyes:Sky Blue
Skin:Tan
Fur:Grey
Hair:Reddish Brown
Force Sensitive:No

Attributes
3 Weak, 5 Average, 7 Great, 10 Olympian​
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Dexterity:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Intelligence:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Charisma:■■■■■■■■■■
Skills
3 Novice, 6, Adept, 10 Mastered​
Awareness:■■■■■■■■■■
Cardio:■■■■■■■■■■
Cold Tolerance:■■■■■■■■■■
Dancing:■■■■■■■■■■
Heat Tolerance:■■■■■■■■■■
Hiding:■■■■■■■■■■
Melee:■■■■■■■■■■
Ranged:■■■■■■■■■■

Biography
Born and Raised on Chiron, her peoples homeworld, in the year 995 ABY. She is the only daughter to an older couple, having formed their relationship later in life. Her childhood and young adult life was largely unimpressive, following her fathers footsteps as a markswoman with bows and similar weapons that used strength and accuracy in combination. She was very much a tomboy, getting into fist fights and being wholly involved in all kinds of sports and activities. Despite this simple life, it would all change in a heartbeat.

One evening while she was stalking prey - something large so she could skin and sell the meat to the villagers, she came across deep tracks that she had never encountered before. They were heavy and deep set, like walking stones. Curious, she tracked this beast until she came across the slumbering metal giant. Undiscouraged, she fired an arrow with a full draw at it, cracking the glass eye of it. It didn't seem to move. It was dead? Remaining in her hiding place for a second longer than needed, humanoids had heard the noise and came to investigate - immediately spotting her with their enhanced visual tech. Before she could notch an arrow, they turned a net gun on her and proceeded to ensnare the Chiron, dragging her as a group out of the forested concealment.

Upon losing her bow, she snapped an arrow head from her quiver and made use of it as a knife, weakening it enough to enable her some movement; but it was too late, They were looming over her. The arrow was quickly embedded into one of their stringy legs, causing a howl of pain while another saw fit to stun her with a blaster ring. Now unconcious, they stripped Pinto of her weapons and strung her up in the cargo belly of the mechanical beast to head back to their ship.

This would not be the end of her rebellion. Her value was quite exceptional, which is likely how she resisted her shock collar to bite the finger off a potiential buyer. All the more insulting that she actually swallowed it, too. Pinto has frequently dissuaded owners from keeping her around long, due to her disobidience or resiliance to being controlled. She even found herself in a fighting pit and managed to escape after gutting an opponent, using the body as a shield against enforcers and the knife as a means to force passage - only detained when she encountered a ray shield for the first time and rendered unconcious through electricution.

Now, the same people who have caught her have her back - shackled and restrained as best as they can. Not to mention muzzled. But who in their right mind would buy such a beast?

Distinguishing Features
Tribal Tattoos on her flanks, marking which village she belonged.
Shoulder and lower (Equine) back Tattoos to designate her Hunter-Warrior abilities.
Interestingly, despite her grey fur colour, her hair and tail are a reddish brown.
Pale blue coloured eyes.

Roleplay Development
Brand new girlie! :D



Roleplays
Dangerous Cargo Detected
Thread
Story
О
=: Delayed О: Ongoing ?: Completed ?: Abandoned​

Abilities
Exceptionally gifted as a unpredictable fighter - wild and strong, but could be bested by a particularly skilled opponent or one of the many races who are stronger than her kind. Interestingly, she is far better with manual ranged weapons, such as throwing knives, bows and similar. If she can find a suitable weapon in this advanced new world, she could be a fearsome thing indeed.
Surprisingly resistant to pain and nerve-based suppression, perhaps a feature of her race or a mutation, her nerves seem to be deeper in her muscle and grant her this interesting trait as a result.
Given her large body, she could technically smuggle objects, not that she has any experience or particular desire to do so.



Inventory
Primary Weapon
Credits
1,000
Armour
Nothing
Transportation
Nothing
Miscellaneous
Basic Translator implanted into the right side of her skull.

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Anyone wanna tame her? ;)

Also if anyone knows how to:

1) move the right hand table down so it slots nicer in the profile.
2) reduce all that unused space on the table at the bottom.

that would be great
 

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Joy Carleec said:
1) move the right hand table down so it slots nicer in the profile.
You could make a strip-like image, place it before the character name, and then colour it the same as the table background. It'd force everything else down, so you could just fiddle with the height until you got something you enjoyed. The width isn't really important, as long as it's thinner than the table. I think that's what you meant, at least.

Not the most elegant solution, but it'd get the job done easily enough. Hope I helped.
 
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Nah, here's what you do. This is just an example, you can arrange it however you like best, but I took everything from the Biography to the Abilities, and pasted it below the initial tables. You'll definitely want to fiddle with it to make it match the colors, but that's how it looks for now. Make sure you don't delete or move the "TD" (it'll be in brackets) tag from around your table(s). You'll cry tears of regret. But here's the best visual I can give so you understand what the hell I'm talking about:

7dyqVPP.jpg

An interesting young woman, who has experienced some bad times.​

Personality
Abrasive, Stubborn and Driven; she finds what she immediately wants and does not cease until she has achieved the desired effect, even if it was detrimental to her. Generally quiet and untalkative, she frequently holds long-lasting grudges that are difficult to forget for her. Especially given how much strife she has had to endure at the hands of owners. Pinto was a proud warrior-hunter and has little interest in socialising in this new universe open to her, she would rather return to her simplier home and life. While she might adhere to diplomacy and has a sense of honor - she much prefers the simplicity of violence and the quick results that come from it. Despite it all, she has quite a patient streak from being an ambush hunter.

Relationships
Father: Was old when she was abducted; possibly deceased.
Mother: similarly to her Father, however females tend to live longer / healthier lives. Possible she is kicking.
Pinto Agrafena
Rebellious Slave
rp3aHZR.png

Home: Chiron
dVuFaL1.png

Slave

Name:Pinto Agrafena
Species:Chiron
Age:28 (Born ABY 995)
Family:Espan Agrafena
Mila Agrafena
Gender:Female
Height:7'4''
Weight:603lbs.
Eyes:Sky Blue
Skin:Tan
Fur:Grey
Hair:Reddish Brown
Force Sensitive:No

Attributes
3 Weak, 5 Average, 7 Great, 10 Olympian​
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Dexterity:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Intelligence:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Charisma:■■■■■■■■■■
Skills
3 Novice, 6, Adept, 10 Mastered​
Awareness:■■■■■■■■■■
Cardio:■■■■■■■■■■
Cold Tolerance:■■■■■■■■■■
Dancing:■■■■■■■■■■
Heat Tolerance:■■■■■■■■■■
Hiding:■■■■■■■■■■
Melee:■■■■■■■■■■
Ranged:■■■■■■■■■■

Biography
Born and Raised on Chiron, her peoples homeworld, in the year 995 ABY. She is the only daughter to an older couple, having formed their relationship later in life. Her childhood and young adult life was largely unimpressive, following her fathers footsteps as a markswoman with bows and similar weapons that used strength and accuracy in combination. She was very much a tomboy, getting into fist fights and being wholly involved in all kinds of sports and activities. Despite this simple life, it would all change in a heartbeat.

One evening while she was stalking prey - something large so she could skin and sell the meat to the villagers, she came across deep tracks that she had never encountered before. They were heavy and deep set, like walking stones. Curious, she tracked this beast until she came across the slumbering metal giant. Undiscouraged, she fired an arrow with a full draw at it, cracking the glass eye of it. It didn't seem to move. It was dead? Remaining in her hiding place for a second longer than needed, humanoids had heard the noise and came to investigate - immediately spotting her with their enhanced visual tech. Before she could notch an arrow, they turned a net gun on her and proceeded to ensnare the Chiron, dragging her as a group out of the forested concealment.

Upon losing her bow, she snapped an arrow head from her quiver and made use of it as a knife, weakening it enough to enable her some movement; but it was too late, They were looming over her. The arrow was quickly embedded into one of their stringy legs, causing a howl of pain while another saw fit to stun her with a blaster ring. Now unconcious, they stripped Pinto of her weapons and strung her up in the cargo belly of the mechanical beast to head back to their ship.

This would not be the end of her rebellion. Her value was quite exceptional, which is likely how she resisted her shock collar to bite the finger off a potiential buyer. All the more insulting that she actually swallowed it, too. Pinto has frequently dissuaded owners from keeping her around long, due to her disobidience or resiliance to being controlled. She even found herself in a fighting pit and managed to escape after gutting an opponent, using the body as a shield against enforcers and the knife as a means to force passage - only detained when she encountered a ray shield for the first time and rendered unconcious through electricution.

Now, the same people who have caught her have her back - shackled and restrained as best as they can. Not to mention muzzled. But who in their right mind would buy such a beast?

Distinguishing Features
Tribal Tattoos on her flanks, marking which village she belonged.
Shoulder and lower (Equine) back Tattoos to designate her Hunter-Warrior abilities.
Interestingly, despite her grey fur colour, her hair and tail are a reddish brown.
Pale blue coloured eyes.

Roleplay Development
Brand new girlie! :D

Roleplays
First Story
Thread
Story
=
=: Delayed О: Ongoing ?:

Completed ?: Abandoned​

Abilities
Exceptionally gifted as a unpredictable fighter - wild and strong, but could be bested by a particularly skilled opponent or one of the many races who are stronger than her kind. Interestingly, she is far better with manual ranged weapons, such as throwing knives, bows and similar. If she can find a suitable weapon in this advanced new world, she could be a fearsome thing indeed.
Surprisingly resistant to pain and nerve-based suppression, perhaps a feature of her race or a mutation, her nerves seem to be deeper in her muscle and grant her this interesting trait as a result.
Given her large body, she could technically smuggle objects, not that she has any experience or particular desire to do so.


Inventory
Primary Weapon
Credits
1,000
Armour
Nothing
Transportation
Nothing
Miscellaneous
Basic Translator implanted into the right side of her skull.
 
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Srota

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I'm not sure yet, but I could imagine one of my two pirates might either buy her and free her, or keep her as a slave and ride her into combat (well, maybe not that...).

If you're interested in something like that, though, I'm sure something could be arranged.
 

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Nah, here's what you do. This is just an example, you can arrange it however you like best, but I took everything from the Biography to the Abilities, and pasted it below the initial tables. You'll definitely want to fiddle with it to make it match the colors, but that's how it looks for now. Make sure you don't delete or move the "TD" (it'll be in brackets) tag from around your table(s). You'll cry tears of regret. But here's the best visual I can give so you understand what the hell I'm talking about:


That looks pretty perfect to me, but i can't copy what you did because it's in the spoiler :(

Pirate life sounds pretty awesome, Srota. She'd want to return home without question if she was freed. Also might be safer to keep her chained up. Shes kind of tempermental.
 

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That looks pretty perfect to me, but i can't copy what you did because it's in the spoiler :(

Pirate life sounds pretty awesome, Srota. She'd want to return home without question if she was freed. Also might be safer to keep her chained up. Shes kind of tempermental.

I got rid of the spoiler, my bad, didn't realize that would affect being able to copy it. Glad I could be of help, and I'll definitely keep an eye out for Pinto in the future.
 

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Pirate life sounds pretty awesome, Srota. She'd want to return home without question if she was freed. Also might be safer to keep her chained up. Shes kind of tempermental.

Weellll, I think that can be arranged, the chains I mean...

Anyway, shoot me a PM and we can discuss plans in more detail there.
 

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I got rid of the spoiler, my bad, didn't realize that would affect being able to copy it. Glad I could be of help, and I'll definitely keep an eye out for Pinto in the future.

Still don't have the option to quote it o_0

Craziness!
 

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The issue was never with the spoiler, it was with the quote. The forum does not allow people to quote quotes in the same thread. Bit of a tongue twister, but that is what it is. The idea was fairly simple, so it was easy to re-create. Should be quotable this time.

7dyqVPP.jpg

An interesting young woman, who has experienced some bad times.​

Personality
Abrasive, Stubborn and Driven; she finds what she immediately wants and does not cease until she has achieved the desired effect, even if it was detrimental to her. Generally quiet and untalkative, she frequently holds long-lasting grudges that are difficult to forget for her. Especially given how much strife she has had to endure at the hands of owners. Pinto was a proud warrior-hunter and has little interest in socialising in this new universe open to her, she would rather return to her simplier home and life. While she might adhere to diplomacy and has a sense of honor - she much prefers the simplicity of violence and the quick results that come from it. Despite it all, she has quite a patient streak from being an ambush hunter.

Relationships
Father: Was old when she was abducted; possibly deceased.
Mother: similarly to her Father, however females tend to live longer / healthier lives. Possible she is kicking.

Pinto Agrafena
Rebellious Slave
rp3aHZR.png

Home: Chiron
dVuFaL1.png

Slave
[tr]

Name:Pinto Agrafena
Species:Chiron
Age:28 (Born ABY 995)
Family:Espan Agrafena
Mila Agrafena
Gender:Female
Height:7'4''
Weight:603lbs.
Eyes:Sky Blue
Skin:Tan
Fur:Grey
Hair:Reddish Brown
Force Sensitive:No

Attributes
3 Weak, 5 Average, 7 Great, 10 Olympian​
Strength:■■■■■■■■■■
Dexterity:■■■■■■■■■■
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■
Intelligence:■■■■■■■■■■
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■
Charisma:■■■■■■■■■■
Skills
3 Novice, 6, Adept, 10 Mastered​
Awareness:■■■■■■■■■■
Cardio:■■■■■■■■■■
Cold Tolerance:■■■■■■■■■■
Dancing:■■■■■■■■■■
Heat Tolerance:■■■■■■■■■■
Hiding:■■■■■■■■■■
Melee:■■■■■■■■■■
Ranged:■■■■■■■■■■

Biography
Born and Raised on Chiron, her peoples homeworld, in the year 995 ABY. She is the only daughter to an older couple, having formed their relationship later in life. Her childhood and young adult life was largely unimpressive, following her fathers footsteps as a markswoman with bows and similar weapons that used strength and accuracy in combination. She was very much a tomboy, getting into fist fights and being wholly involved in all kinds of sports and activities. Despite this simple life, it would all change in a heartbeat.

One evening while she was stalking prey - something large so she could skin and sell the meat to the villagers, she came across deep tracks that she had never encountered before. They were heavy and deep set, like walking stones. Curious, she tracked this beast until she came across the slumbering metal giant. Undiscouraged, she fired an arrow with a full draw at it, cracking the glass eye of it. It didn't seem to move. It was dead? Remaining in her hiding place for a second longer than needed, humanoids had heard the noise and came to investigate - immediately spotting her with their enhanced visual tech. Before she could notch an arrow, they turned a net gun on her and proceeded to ensnare the Chiron, dragging her as a group out of the forested concealment.

Upon losing her bow, she snapped an arrow head from her quiver and made use of it as a knife, weakening it enough to enable her some movement; but it was too late, They were looming over her. The arrow was quickly embedded into one of their stringy legs, causing a howl of pain while another saw fit to stun her with a blaster ring. Now unconcious, they stripped Pinto of her weapons and strung her up in the cargo belly of the mechanical beast to head back to their ship.

This would not be the end of her rebellion. Her value was quite exceptional, which is likely how she resisted her shock collar to bite the finger off a potiential buyer. All the more insulting that she actually swallowed it, too. Pinto has frequently dissuaded owners from keeping her around long, due to her disobidience or resiliance to being controlled. She even found herself in a fighting pit and managed to escape after gutting an opponent, using the body as a shield against enforcers and the knife as a means to force passage - only detained when she encountered a ray shield for the first time and rendered unconcious through electricution.

Now, the same people who have caught her have her back - shackled and restrained as best as they can. Not to mention muzzled. But who in their right mind would buy such a beast?

Distinguishing Features
Tribal Tattoos on her flanks, marking which village she belonged.
Shoulder and lower (Equine) back Tattoos to designate her Hunter-Warrior abilities.
Interestingly, despite her grey fur colour, her hair and tail are a reddish brown.
Pale blue coloured eyes.

Roleplay Development
Brand new girlie! :D



Roleplays
First Story
Thread
Story
=
=: Delayed О: Ongoing ?:

Completed ?: Abandoned​

Abilities
Exceptionally gifted as a unpredictable fighter - wild and strong, but could be bested by a particularly skilled opponent or one of the many races who are stronger than her kind. Interestingly, she is far better with manual ranged weapons, such as throwing knives, bows and similar. If she can find a suitable weapon in this advanced new world, she could be a fearsome thing indeed.
Surprisingly resistant to pain and nerve-based suppression, perhaps a feature of her race or a mutation, her nerves seem to be deeper in her muscle and grant her this interesting trait as a result.
Given her large body, she could technically smuggle objects, not that she has any experience or particular desire to do so.



Inventory
Primary Weapon
Credits
1,000
Armour
Nothing
Transportation
Nothing
Miscellaneous
Basic Translator implanted into the right side of her skull.

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Just out of curiosity, I don't notice any mention of horns. I do believe her species possess a set of horns. Is there no mention or does she not in fact have them?
 

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Just out of curiosity, I don't notice any mention of horns. I do believe her species possess a set of horns. Is there no mention or does she not in fact have them?

This i did not realize! The picture lacks them. So. Maybe she just lacks them.? Do they gain horns later in life?
 

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I did some reading on them. Apparently if their horns are removed before sprouting it can often be deadly. From my understanding, they grow their horns and shed them seasonally as if they were deer. Remember though this was me just doing a quick read through on wookiepedia. You may want to better examine. Just thought i'd bring the horns to your attention! :)
 

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I did some reading on them. Apparently if their horns are removed before sprouting it can often be deadly. From my understanding, they grow their horns and shed them seasonally as if they were deer. Remember though this was me just doing a quick read through on wookiepedia. You may want to better examine. Just thought i'd bring the horns to your attention! :)

Cheers. The other Chiron dude didn't have them; so i just assumed. I might have to give her some pretty horns!
 

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Cheers. The other Chiron dude didn't have them; so i just assumed. I might have to give her some pretty horns!

in my opinion those pretty horns would actually look pretty cool! I'd go for it if you are contemplating
 

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Would love to do a thread some time. It is an awesome character!
 
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