Medical Corruption - OOC

[Cazar]

@Xorism @Minuteman75 @Great Jamie

Just had a quick comment on the entry for Talos here. It says in his post that he turned back from the distracted guards to watch the tank, before the distraction. But the distraction would be what pulls the guards away so he'd have to see the distraction and be seen by Vic.

He also is said to see Cazar and pull a gun, yelling at him while he pours things into the Kolto tank. All this timing seems to not make much sense if Cazar sneaks in after the distraction starts. He'd see you way before ever pouring bleach and being caught with pants down.

Also your yelling would be heard by literally everyone, not conveniently silent to Vic and others because of some new automatic door. Caz snuck in behind the guards, there isn't a door that slides it's a hangar area with a wide open door.

Would appreciate an edit to clarify just when does Talos appear and where was he. As of now I'm not comfortable with a magic appearance where the Jawa is mid pour and basically bound to be open to your attacks without ever being spotted by anyone and unable to be heard.

 

[Minuteman75]

I understand, my apologies Cazar. Would it better for everyone if I just delete my post?

 

[Cazar]

I don't want you to leave :(

Just wanted it to be a bit more of an entry that was a bit less invisible.

 

[Xorism]

@Minuteman75 am I okay to post?

 

[Minuteman75]

I think that question should be asked to @Great Jamie since his senator is interacting with Vic.

@Xorism

 

[Great Jamie]

Uhhhhh I think Xorism hasn’t posted in a while, so it would be fair.

 

[Xorism]

@Minuteman75 Since you were editing, I wait :) if you're done I'll post

 

[Minuteman75]

I’m done with the editing so go ahead. @Xorism

 

[Minuteman75]

Uh @Xorism Cazar the Jawa already fled the room and it wasn’t establish how close the two wounded guards were to the doorway.

 

[Great Jamie]

The more important thing is uhhh
Talos? Please rescue Octadar lol
@Minuteman75

 

[Xorism]

@Minuteman75 Do I need to make edits? (although @Great Jamie technically locked my post in)

 

[Minuteman75]

Well we can always assume Vic was caught up in the moment and was mistaken about where her Jawa partner is.

@Xorism

 

[Cazar]

We're all pretty locked in. Forgot to mention I talked to him on discord and we clarified where people are.

 

[Great Jamie]

Wait what?

 

[Xorism]

@Minuteman75 Can you please clarify your grenade throw - you stated that you threw it when Vic came into view (while she's behind the senator and hes falling) and then you also stated that it exploded four seconds later but two meters mid-air toward me.

A four-second throw to exploding would likely put it behind me, can you clarify what you meant?

 

[Minuteman75]

Okay I will. Would two seconds and three meters work better?

@Xorism

 

[Nefieslab]

 

[Xorism]

@Great Jamie Hi bud, firstly can you clarify a couple of things:

1. Does the blaster hit make him fall over or is he stumbling after being hit
2. Does he fall to his knees or into a prone position on his stomach

I'm not sure I agree with his miracle survival or avoiding the concussion grenade from your current post

 

[Great Jamie]

@Xorism

1: It makes him fall over
2: Hmm... Well it depends on whether getting shot forces a person on their stomach or not. I would say... On the stomach.
3: Sorry, there’s still the opportunity of shooting Octadar, I’m just laying out what he’s going to do if you don’t shoot him, I didn't make that clear.
Btw, Vic did see Cazar and move towards him as well even concussed, so.... That’s also surviving the concussion grenade
Edited to show Point 3

 

[Xorism]

@Great Jamie

Okay thanks, but Vic did shoot and in my post, Vic shot just after Talos did so there wouldn't be enough time for you to fall like you posted in my opinion.

My post stated that she was on a knife edge, she's tense and ready to pull the trigger and trying to use Octadar as a bargaining chip to force Talos to surrender. Talos decided to shoot instead which due to the distance would hit you almost immediately, but her reaction would be just as quick. She would be shooting Octadar as he fell, if not before since her finger is already on the trigger and she is reacting to Talos shooting you, not you falling over.

So I believe either Vic is shooting Octadar in the back of his chest, or he falls but the shot hits him in the back of the head.

I don't think he would be knocked prone from being hit in the arm, but that shouldn't matter with the timing of Vic's shot IMO.

As for the concussive grenade - I'll give you that point but the grenade exploded between us and Talos, unless you were looking away from it, it would blind you for at least one posting round. Vic wasn't looking toward it which is why her vision is still a little intact but she's still hit by the other concussive effects.