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- Dec 15, 2017
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Good points!Hey there @Nefieslab, character looks pretty good for the most part. The only line I saw an issue with is that he came later than most to the Jedi. As the new Jedi Order accepts students from all ages and walks of life that wouldn't have any bearing. The remaining bit of the sentence about training with people younger and older would probably be the better place to start.
Other than that you are also notably missing much of anything related to actual skills in the skills and abilities section. What you have there is more personality than anything else.