Halmo'de "Hal" Torobah

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NAME: Halmo'de "Hal" Torobah
FACTION: Sith Imperium
RANK: Crusader
SPECIES: Echani
AGE: 33
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'4"
WEIGHT: 230lbs
REACH: 74"
EYES: Yellow
HAIR: Bald
SKIN: Pale White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Tattoos tracing his body.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: For Echani standards, he is what most seek to reach in terms of strength. 7/10
DEXTERITY: Years of martial training has given Halmo'de a natural grace in his step. 8.5/10
CONSTITUTION: Halmo'de is in exceptional health, eating regulated meals and a strict workout regimen. 7/10
INTELLIGENCE: He is no fool, but no sage either. 5/10
WISDOM: Years in the military and and a lifetime prior devoted to various martial arts styles have granted him little wisdom but he can easily retain much more in the days to come.
CHARISMA: Due to his personality, he is not one for great conversation, and can, at times, be rude or brash towards others involved. 3/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force Telekinesis ||||||||||
Force Speed ||||||||||
Force Jump ||||||||||
Tutaminis ||||||||||
Force Lightning ||||||||||
Force Rage ||||||||||
Choke/Grip ||||||||||
Force Drain ||||||||||
Force Weapon ||||||||||
SKILLS:
Trained extensively in the Echani Martial Art
Trained extensively in Teras Kasi
First Aid
Pistol and Rifle marksmanship
Bladed Weapon combat
Long Weapon combat (staff, spear, etc.)
Trap Building and other forms of passive combat
Improvised weapon crafting
Adequate understanding of piloting light spacecraft.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Juyo - ||||||||||
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+Ambidextrous
+ A very well versed martial artist
+ Dedicated to the advancement of his abilities
+ Has a naturally calm demeanor
- Does not believe in wearing lots of armor
- Often times depends solely on his martial prowess to overcome an enemy, which has gotten him into some sticky situations
+/- Prefers open combat to a stealthy takedown.
GEAR:
Gear that is kept on his person at all times:
A saberstaff, capable of splitting into two independently operating lightsabers, allowing for a pike, saberstaff, dual blades and individual saber use. Usually split and holstered at his sides, but at times is assembled and holstered on magnetic plates located in the lower back of his garments
Two vibro-knuckledusters
Durasteel gauntlets, gloves and shin guards with spiked knuckles and forearm.
Medical gauze and disinfectant spray.
Twin cortosis woven straight single edged short swords, which he sheathes in a X across his back.
SHIP:
G9 Rigger Freighter, with two port side alternate fire laser cannons as well as dorsal cannons. Capable of hyperspace travel.
DROIDS:
He owns many training droids.

PETS:
None as of yet.
PERSONALITY:
Hal is a calm and centered person, despite being a Sith and being completely enveloped in the Dark Side of the Force. He is very reserved when he first meets someone, but his personality seemingly changes once one becomes an acquaintance. His demeanor is kind, as kind as Sith can be, but don't let him fool you. His kind nature is only half of this man's personality. He has another side that few live to see.

BIOGRAPHY:
Halmo'de was born on Eshan to his mother, Raxana, and his father, Bedei. His father was a martial artist and military man. From a young age, his father instilled the Echani philosophies of old, that combat was as good a way to get to know someone as talking to them. The moment Halmo'de could walk, he was practicing their ancestral martial art form, learning movements, strikes, honing his senses in ways only few could manage. After the usual six to ten hour training days, he'd wind down with his mother. She was his means to an education, being a professor in a prestigious academy, he got his fair dose of everything he could ever wish to learn. He was a happy child and teen. Then, he joined the IAF and a majority of his philosophies changed. He no longer had a shining outlook on life. He realized the evils of war... but at the same time, he fell in love with it. During his second tour, during the Battle of Tython, he discovered his Force Sensitivity and was almost immediately shipped off to the Sith Temple on Korriban to be trained. With his previous history behind him as a brace, he excelled and was recognized as a Sith on his 28th birthday. He now trains acolytes in a dojo, reminiscent of his father's dojo, on Coruscant.
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Still a work in progress, but I plan to have everything I need hammered out within the next day or two.

EDIT: Tell me what you guys think? I plan on rewriting the Biography already, but my creative juices are straining at the moment.
 
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Hi there! Again!

I like this profile quite a lot. The only issue I found was in lightsaber forms. I would be wary of having a new Crusader with no RPs knowing three forms and two styles of weapon. While Crusaders certainly can get there (though they can still only utilize two forms and have basic knowledge of a third), that's something that should be accomplished through RP.

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Hey BMaR -- I like the profile. The IAF training mixed with Sith training should come in handy if you're looking to become a Sith attache of the Military.

I will say that you may want to check your timeline, as going from a discovered Force Sensitive to a Crusader in what seems to be under half a decade seems a little extreme.

Actually the rule on Sabers tends to be that only Masters can have an operating knowledge of a second form, and Council level members can know a third, but it's preferred that they dont have it mastered.

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At the Jedi Padawan and Jedi Knight skill level, you may only know one form. If your character reaches the Jedi Master skill level, you may know two forms. If a character becomes the Faction Leader or is at the Jedi Council skill level, they may know a third form but it is preferred that they do not have a mastery over the third.
 
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Hey BMaR -- I like the profile. The IAF training mixed with Sith training should come in handy if you're looking to become a Sith attache of the Military.

I will say that you may want to check your timeline, as going from a discovered Force Sensitive to a Crusader in what seems to be under half a decade seems a little extreme.

Actually the rule on Sabers tends to be that only Masters can have an operating knowledge of a second form, and Council level members can know a third, but it's preferred that they dont have it mastered.

Relevant rule:
At the Jedi Padawan and Jedi Knight skill level, you may only know one form. If your character reaches the Jedi Master skill level, you may know two forms. If a character becomes the Faction Leader or is at the Jedi Council skill level, they may know a third form but it is preferred that they do not have a mastery over the third.
Does that count for Shii-Cho, cince it's the most basic form?
 

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Do you have permission to make a Crusader as a starting character?

Members cannot make a character of a rank higher than Acolyte unless they have already been RPing a character of a higher rank for a considerable amount of time. I've been RPing in the Sith faction since 2012 and I still wasn't allowed to make a Crusader.
 

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You know I dont think we've ever gotten a straight answer about how Shii-Cho stacks up in regards to the count of forms you can know.

Personally, I'd say that the basics of lightsaber training are Shii-cho in nature, but that you dont count the form on your profile unless you specialize in it like Kit Fisto did.

My next question was going to be if you had earned Crusader with a different character that Im not aware of or who you spoke to to get permission to make Hal a Crusader, as Martha said, new characters generally start out in the Acolyte rank.
 
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You know I dont think we've ever gotten a straight answer about how Shii-Cho stacks up in regards to the count of forms you can know.

Personally, I'd say that the basics of lightsaber training are Shii-cho in nature, but that you dont count the form on your profile unless you specialize in it like Kit Fisto did.

My next question was going to be if you had earned Crusader with a different character or who you spoke to to get permission to make Hal a Crusader, as Martha said, new characters generally start out in the Acolyte rank.

Fair enough. Would it be alright, since I plan for this character to take on many pupils, for me to allow him two specializations? One of which, namely Shii-Cho, since few mentors actually train in that and the other that he uses in combat? I have no problem with editing that, I just wanna clarify the purpose for this character.
 

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Shii Cho - ||||||||||
Juyo - ||||||||||
Applications of said styles to double bladed lightsabers - ||||||||||
Application of said styles utilizing dual blades - ||||||||||

How's that look? I just dropped Djem So.
 
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Unfortunately it's site and character rules that the only characters who can have two lightsaber forms are Master level characters. As an acolyte, Halmo'de would only know one, and I'd recommend making that your combat form for obvious reasons.

Also, having a form fully mastered at Acolyte or Crusader level is just not possible, it requires years of training both in the Force and the form to be considered a Master of it. Obi-wan Kenobi was considered the Master of Form III but he did not receive that distinction until he was a member of the Jedi Council
 

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Unfortunately it's site and character rules that the only characters who can have two lightsaber forms are Master level characters. As an acolyte, Halmo'de would only know one, and I'd recommend making that your combat form for obvious reasons.

Also, having a form fully mastered at Acolyte or Crusader level is just not possible, it requires years of training both in the Force and the form to be considered a Master of it. Obi-wan Kenobi was considered the Master of Form III but he did not receive that distinction until he was a member of the Jedi Council

I see. Could you show me what you'd rather it look like?
 

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Don't bother listing Shii-cho, since it's the form everyone starts off with before they choose a primary form.

You also cannot make your character a rank above Acolyte, unless you have been RPing a character of a higher rank for a very long amount of time.
 

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Juyo - ||||||||||
Applications of said styles to double bladed lightsabers - ||||||||||
Application of said styles utilizing dual blades - ||||||||||

For an acolyte with no training forms, even having Juyo is a bit of a stretch, being able to use it with different styles of sabers effectively is even more so.
 

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Juyo can still be the form he's training in, he just won't be very good at actually using it. It makes sense to start training in a difficult form at a low rank/age, even if it's just the basics, so that one has more experience later on. Audi and Sato both trained in Juyo as young Acolytes.
 

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This dude is sick. I wouldn't mind teaming up any of my characters with him.:datass:
 
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