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Hi! @Aurius, @darkrei9n, @Mr. Teatime, @Topher, @Topher Ridge
Since there've been a few requests on altering posts so far, I figured we could use a thread like this. The goal is to figure out how to proceed with as few edits as possible while keeping everyone involved happy.
The first thing I'd like to discuss is Dasi's latest post and how it works together with Cyrus's post.
If I understand, @Mr. Teatime was going for an interrupt of Gale's post. It means that this piece of dialogue hasn't happened or might not happen:
So, normally, @Aurius would have a chance to react to changed circumstances (i.e. the fact that other Sith and the pirates wouldn't want his guards to be roaming around the facility). It means that I'd have to ask @darkrei9n to edit the latest post to take this into account. But I'd feel really bad to ask to remove such a nice piece of descriptive writing. So I think I have an idea.
If I guessed right what EVERYONE's character would do, we can go on with this outline. It'll keep the story progressing at the steady pace. Otherwise...
Please don't be shy to disagree with the majority. The sooner we decide on the variant, the better.
I'll be happy to answer any questions you might have (here, on Discord, in PMs).
But the way I see the thread could end:
EDIT: P.S. Totally forgot that the 2 NPCs Gale brought probably shouldn't be used to tip the scales of PVP, if any occurs. They might help the other NPCs and PCs escape though.
Since there've been a few requests on altering posts so far, I figured we could use a thread like this. The goal is to figure out how to proceed with as few edits as possible while keeping everyone involved happy.
The first thing I'd like to discuss is Dasi's latest post and how it works together with Cyrus's post.
If I understand, @Mr. Teatime was going for an interrupt of Gale's post. It means that this piece of dialogue hasn't happened or might not happen:
“My name is Ki’sal, Paladin of Vahla. We are allies of your Order, and have come to rescue you. Take the pistol - it needs to look like you killed them. Gale will have to handle the security footage himself. Ral?”
So, normally, @Aurius would have a chance to react to changed circumstances (i.e. the fact that other Sith and the pirates wouldn't want his guards to be roaming around the facility). It means that I'd have to ask @darkrei9n to edit the latest post to take this into account. But I'd feel really bad to ask to remove such a nice piece of descriptive writing. So I think I have an idea.
Variant A (Preferred) said:The pirate captain takes @Cyrus Anvari (the guy with the money, and therefore with a final word) to see the sleeping Zeltron. @Alyse TiVarnus follows along with a medical droid, I assume. A couple of pirates stay with Cyrus's and Gale's NPCs for an uneasy 2vs2vs2(+1) bordering on Mexican standoff. Eventually, a fight breaks out, and @Gale's presence tips the scales. That way, Gale's guards still can get to @Dasi Vemm, and we don't have to edit another post. The fight might happen during Wolfgang's and Alyse's time with Kori. @Jago Haaldin comes into the hangar to see the aftermath of the battle and maybe runs into Gale. Meanwhile, @Dasi Vemm runs across Phyllis Vasser (the NPC from the start) and a few other dignitaries.
If I guessed right what EVERYONE's character would do, we can go on with this outline. It'll keep the story progressing at the steady pace. Otherwise...
Variant B said:We just ask @darkrei9n to edit the post.
Please don't be shy to disagree with the majority. The sooner we decide on the variant, the better.
I'll be happy to answer any questions you might have (here, on Discord, in PMs).
But the way I see the thread could end:
- Dasi can escape with Gale and Jago (unless @darkrei9n wants some other outcome for her). I figure it's fair, because it was my OOC suggestion for the Jedi to get captured in the first place.
- The fates of NPCs (except for the senator in Dasi's latest post) remains up to what happens in the thread.
- The fate of Kori remains up to what happens in the thread (I'd prefer for her not to be killed just yet though).
EDIT: P.S. Totally forgot that the 2 NPCs Gale brought probably shouldn't be used to tip the scales of PVP, if any occurs. They might help the other NPCs and PCs escape though.
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