Just got done reading. Awesome story and profile in general. Have no real objections to throw at you, rather if you think he needs it. A list of force powers would be a nice addition, at least the ones you think you'll use?
Working on further updates. Force powers are one of those things that i believe to be inherent among Jedi masters. Everyone knows force push, leap, healing, blah blah blah. Though i will be adding a section to include those powers that are not common knowledge to every Jedi.
Also writing up a classified section of the profile to give insight on what he was doing in the unknown regions as well as his training and abilities as a special operator.