Darix Talohn

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NAME:
Darix Talohn
FACTION: The New Jedi Order
RANK: Battlemaster of The New Jedi Order
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 42
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'11
WEIGHT: 175
EYES: Although frequently concealed behind a mask Darix's eyes are roumored to be a light brown color.
HAIR: Varied length, dark brown, nearly black.
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: During batle and times of war Darix adorns a mask.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Although his raw power is formidable Darix's ability to physically overpower opponents is not what he is known for. Nor does he rely on brute force to get the job done, Darix is a student of finesse
DEXTERITY: Darix's level of speed and agility has earned him an incredible amount of respect among his peers. His combat identity and fighting style is based and heavily reliant on his talent to physically out maneuver his foes.
CONSTITUTION: He has a clean bill of health.
INTELLIGENCE: Technically and electronically sound. He was a tinkerer as a child. Though his time in the Jedi has lead to him focusing on other things. Capable of maintaining his weaponry and faithful companion T3. Mathematically, however not your go to guy.
WISDOM: A student of philosophy, and a deciple of the force. A pursuit in which he believes to be unending. With no definitive end, the measure of wisdom is subjective to that of the preciever.
CHARISMA: A born leader.

SKILLS:
Remarkable pilot
Specializes in stealth operations
Weapons engineering
Renowned leader and tactician
Technologically savvy


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Ventress
Djem So

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
A strong minded leader. He always keeps the good of the Galactic Alliance and the safety of his people his main priority
However in combat he has been described as lethal, however wreckless and chaotic. Due to his aggressive nature when engaged with enemies he often subjects himself to overwhelming odds and precarious situations.
He is a warrior Jedi, with a strong tongue, though his patience with negotiations has prove to be a short fuse of his

GEAR:
Black/brown Jedi robes with light armour underneath.
He adorns a mask during combat and carries two lightsabers.
One of ancient origion. Its hilt engraved in a language that has since been lost in translation over the years. It shelters a blade of sapphire.
the second lightsaber in his possession was created douring his path to becoming a Jedi in his earlier years. The blade began a pure white though since has evolved into a deep purple

SHIP:
Araels Wrath. Standard issue Jedi Starship with minor modifcations for combat, crew and cargo.

DROIDS:
Astromech Droid T3-T0

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PERSONALITY:

A fearless warrior who puts his Order and his beloved Galactic Alliance before anything else. On countless occassions he has chosen personal sacrifice in order to prevent the evils of the galaxy from threatening those he cares about. He is steadfast in his belifs and will stop at nothing to accomplish a goal.
Once a bit of a renegade he has managed control this aspect of his life when he reached the higher ranks of the Jedi, realising that he would be looked upon by the younger members of the Order he has worked harder to set a better example of what member of the New Jedi Order should strive to be both off and on the field of battle

BIOGRAPHY:
Born in the Outer Rim aboard an Alliance military vessel, Darix was exposed to the horrors and glories of a militaristic lifestyle since birth. His father, a Jedi himself had often spoke of the New Jedi Order and how they were the guardians of the galaxy. And he longed to be one of them someday. He learned to fly at an early age under the instruction of his father, who had already began making plans to unite his son with the Jedi. Darix was thrilled and eagerly awaited his chance to prove himself worthy of Jedi training. His father began instructing him in philosophies of the force and the way the Jedi viewed and reacted to the events of the ever changing galaxy around him.

The ship they were stationed on were about a month out when the attacks started. Only a matter of weeks before his Jedi training was scheduled to begin, His father realising the reality of the situation strapped Darix in a small starfighter and plotted the hyperspace coordinates to another Jedi vessell that was en route to respond to reenforce their endangered comrades.

His father spoke with a tone that Darix had never before had the chance to familliarise himself with. His father had always been a man of great convition, though something in the way he spoke confirmed the fears that had been growing within the pit of the boys stomach.
Alarms rang out over the holocom as cries for help sang out in unison from the bridge and other areas of the ship.
Blaster fire rocked the vessell and began to tear it apart.
The canopy of the ship around him closed and sealed as the distorted voiceo f his father chimed in on the holocommunicator.
"I love you son. May the force be with you, always."

The astromech droid activated the autopiloting sequence and the ship broke free from the hangar as enemy laser cannons reduced what was left of the only home the boy had come to know into rubble and space debris.
Darix cried out as he watched his childhood and his loved ones dissappear before him.
Not peering back as the ship lurched and seeminlgly stretched itself into hyperspace was the first real hurdle he had to overcome on his own.
He closed his eyes and tried to force himself into a sleep he hoped to not have to wake up from. Until another voice chimed in on the holocom he had been discovered by the Alliance reinforcements. Like his father before him, He would be a Jedi

Mepheysia Torlan - Darix's first and only Padawan since returning from Unknown Space. She is a bright student with unwavering determination. Darix has come to rely upon her to provide a sense of companionship, an escape from the life of solitude and loneliness he has grown accustomed to.

Haloburner Lamb - Long time friend and confidant. Both Jedi grew up with similar pasts, experiencing the tragic loss of family at a very young age. Due to there uncanny connection to each other both through years of friendship and the force, the two frequently embark on missions together, brilliantly complimenting the others style and tactics.

Skhai Baatch - Darix's counterpart within the Jedi Order, Fellow council member, friend, and mentor. Her mastery and understanding of the force and its lore and history match his own with a lightsaber. Darix frequently seeks advice and guidance from Skhai on matters beyond his realm of understanding.

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///////////Operational Overview
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Operative Darix Talohn was among the first of a top secret sub-branch of the New Jedi Order known as the Jedi Critical Operations Unit, or JCOU. Talohn stands at five feet, eleven inches, and weighs in at one hundred and seventy-five galactic standard pounds. He has brown hair, shoulder length, and light brown eyes.
Although official numbers remain uncertain and highly classified he was the first JCOU operator in the field.
Talohn is a master in the art of stealth, trained in various espionage techniques and infiltration tactics, and has extensive knowledge about various other skills such as combat tactics, and surveillance and is extremely proficient in fieldcraft. He prefers to work alone in the field and when not on assignment has been stationed aboard the Light of the Force. Talohn has conducted operations in the unknown regions of space though the actual locations of these missions have been classified to the highest levels of Jedi security clearance.
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As a covert operative for the New Jedi Order, Talohn approaches his targets in a gruff no-nonsense manner, but maintains a light-hearted relationship with his colleagues and even with his momentary hostages (even if ordered to kill them). Talohn possesses the traits of a Jedi, patience, compassion, and understanding though is quick to lose his patience with government bureaucracy or political maneuvering. At the same time, he is highly loyal and a staunch believer in the ideals his work ultimately protects. He is quickly angered by the casual slaughter of civilians or unarmed military personnel by his enemies.
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///////////Physical Capabilities
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Extremely agile and athletic. He is capable of many different climbing and scaling skills, his Jedi training and mastery of the force giving him the edge he needs in physically exhausting situations allowing him to press onward to see a mission through to completion. His use of acrobatic maneuvers extend to using not only walls, but also furniture and even other beings to push off from in order to escape. Strictly speaking these are not unarmed combat techniques - Many of these techniques are forms of parkour.
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Galactic Alliance SpecOps units rely on the use of equipment to remain unseen as well as provide a tactical advantage when in low light situations. The Jedi Critical Operations Unit however has the advantage of being force sensitive. Aside from the tactical suit provided from JCOU, the units field operatives rely on a particular skill set of force techniques and augmentations to give them the edge in combat and low light situations allowing them to remain unseen and tactically advantageous in almost any situation.
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Trained in the art of Teras Kasai as a secondary means to an end when an armed solution is not readily available. The art form is of ancient lineage designed with the sole purpose of destroying Jedi. Teras Kasai enabled a user to develop extreme speed an aptitude for anticipating strikes and taught non force sensitive practitioners how to close their minds to Jedi and Sith preventing them from attacks aimed at their mental state
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(Still tweaking some things in the bio, as well as rank, force powers etc. A work in progress )
 
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Nice profile. Seems a bit OP in stats.
 

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Not meant to seem that way. I just prefer short descriptions to numerical stats. Typed this p at about 4 am last night and just got around to posting. I do have an edit coming up though, so fear not my friend. I have no intentions of playing 'force' lol.

Edit: Adjusted slightly to help with the sense of overpower you refered to.
 
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I haven't read the full profile yet, so this is just something I noticed. I’d increase his age. I know the first timeline was a bit of a free for all in terms of realism, so you could have a 16 year old Jedi Grand Master and what not lol, but 25 is just far too young to be a Jedi Master. A Jedi Master is the pinnacle of the New Jedi Order and they need to be the wisest and most experienced of all the Jedi. A 25 year old can’t lay claim to that. I would suggest a minimum age of 40 for a Jedi Master, or making the character a Jedi Knight instead.
 

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Finally another competent Jedi Master!


I love it!
The ending was so sad.... I cried.






LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Jar'Kai
Niman
Juyo
Vaapad
Soresu
Shien
o.O’ ^ ^ let the bitching commence….
 

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25 is a little young for jedi master isn't it? And you can have only two lightsaber forms as a Master, Juyo/Vaapad, Soresu, Shien and Niman?Jar'kai make 4. Other than that I like his story, he might get along well with my Jedi, they should meet.
 

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lol. Bare with me its been a few years. Making appropiate edits now.
 

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Down to two forms and age corrected. :P

Again guys i do apologise, just let me know if any additional corrections are needed. I'd be more than happy to oblige.
 

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Down to two forms and age corrected. :P

Again guys i do apologise, just let me know if any additional corrections are needed. I'd be more than happy to oblige.

Looks good mate, I didn't notice the posts above mine so just ignore my previous post. :P Except the part about me liking him and wanting to RP with him.

Finally another competent Jedi Master!
:CAbove You saying Luthair ain't competent??
 

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Id love to get a thread started. I still need to make my re-introduction back into the SWRP world! Any ideas?
 

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Id love to get a thread started. I still need to make my re-introduction back into the SWRP world! Any ideas?

A mission, I say!




Looks good mate, I didn't notice the posts above mine so just ignore my previous post. :P Except the part about me liking him and wanting to RP with him.


:CAbove You saying Luthair ain't competent??

-.-

*runs*
 

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A Mission you say? Lead on i say!

A foreward note, i do have to head to work soon, so it may start slow. But ill be there!!
 

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A Mission you say? Lead on i say!

A foreward note, i do have to head to work soon, so it may start slow. But ill be there!!

Clearly you need Matt's job. He does absolutely nothing- ask him. lol

Half way serious about the mission, but shoot me a PM if you are serious!
 

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-.-

*runs*

But I made you cookies.. :(
A Mission you say? Lead on i say!

A foreward note, i do have to head to work soon, so it may start slow. But ill be there!!
Same here, sleep then work. But I'd be up for a mission as well, too sleepy right now to come up with any good ideas :P.
 

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Good read so far! Just note though the current government is known as the Galactic Alliance and not the Republic.

When you're all done, then you can post him here, to get him signed up.
 

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Looks fantastic.
Hopefully our characters will bump into one another at some stage.

If my character wasn't already wrapped up in two threads, I'd have him involved in your piloting training thing.
Oh well. Always next time!

- Cassa
 

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Dont be afraid to Jump in mate. Pilot training is a work in progress that was talked about and semi established literally an hour ago. Atm its me being an insomniac desperatly looking for something to do . However it will evolve into something much more than what it is currently. Weather you want to consider it cannon or not, im waiting for someone to hop in lol.
 

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Wouldn't it be quite obscure to slam one character into 3 threads at the same time, though?
 

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Dont be afraid to Jump in mate. Pilot training is a work in progress that was talked about and semi established literally an hour ago. Atm its me being an insomniac desperatly looking for something to do . However it will evolve into something much more than what it is currently. Weather you want to consider it cannon or not, im waiting for someone to hop in lol.

I'm hoping in, spelling and grammar may be goofy, slightly intoxicated, can't see too straight.
 
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