Hey, Bleed, you still down to throw Harley Wehnig in on the Squad idea? I ask cuz you showed interest earlier, but never actually posted as such. I don't want to presume anything, so I cam to ask you directly. lol
Hm. Let's see if I can help at all. If not, no worries. Just let me know and I'll post again to try to freshen the scene for you some.
Try thinking about Grik's reaction to Nox's actions. They're sort of strange, but obviously calculated. Why does Nox do things the way he does? Is he just odd or does he have a point? Dwell on his utilization of the art. It doesn't come across as humanoid motions (a hand grabbing something, a foot kicking something), but instead as motions of nature. For the boulder, maybe I should have described it more. It's jagged, mostly round but with some flat surfaces, and features a lot of little bumps and crevasses. It's not perfectly smooth for rolling, like a ball, nor perfectly stolid like a block. That'd make it hard to move any which way. So how does Nox do it?
Again, if none of that works for ya, just let me know. It's really not a problem. I know my classes can be a bit droll/dry at times. I'll try to introduce some action into it if need be. :)
Hey, I feel like an asshole saying this, but I totally forgot about our thread. Sorry, I've been crammed with other threads and RL issues, but I posted. Sorry for that zidiculous wait, ami.
Apologies for not getting to posting despite my promise. I spent much of the day at work, and at the point I intended to sit down and write, something came up and kicked me out of the mood.