Who's the Boss now?

[Brick]

@Nefieslab

I am going to have to remove the last thread/objective becuase A) Vamp's character is dead B)The exchange doesnt exist

Or do i have to resubmit a new plot?

 

[Nefieslab]

@Nefieslab

I am going to have to remove the last thread/objective becuase A) Vamp's character is dead B)The exchange doesnt exist

Or do i have to resubmit a new plot?

You can submit a change here and I will reevaluate the plot

 

[Brick]

You can submit a change here and I will reevaluate the plot

What is going to happen in your plot?
@Cardinal Paroaria will go to his father in the Paroaria Estate to take his place on the throne. Once Cardinal is in charge, he will hold a rally, and bring the Mafia together, recruiting more members (Noc and PC) Members of other criminal organizations will be attending such as the Exchange and other known orgs
What other players will be a part of this?
TBA
Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Coruscant
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Cardinal will go to meet his father, who is the Mafia "Boss" and ask to rule either alongside his father, or kill his father, and take the throne. After, Cardinal will hold a meeting between himself and the higherups if the Exchange, which he already is a part of.
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Cardinal will either rule the Family Mafia alongside his father, or by himself, create an allegiance between the Mafia and the Exchange.
Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
N/A

1. Ask/Self DM - Participate in an attack against a rival gang. One of the men assisting Cardinal in the attack is Cardinal's competitor, the only member having the same rank. Cardinal must attack the gang, successful or not, but in the fight Harris is killed, giving Cardinal more power.
2. Ask/Player DM- Participate in a meeting between the various sub-bosses and the boss. Get the other sub-bosses to support you or kill the boss to take his place.
3. Ask/Player (Vamp) Participate in a meeting with the higher ups of the Exchange to see whether the Mafia will have a mutual parter-business style relationship, instead of being competitors.

The only change is removing the meeting about the Exchange with Vamp's character.

@Nefieslab


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[Nefieslab]

What is going to happen in your plot?
@Cardinal Paroaria will go to his father in the Paroaria Estate to take his place on the throne. Once Cardinal is in charge, he will hold a rally, and bring the Mafia together, recruiting more members (Noc and PC) Members of other criminal organizations will be attending such as the Exchange and other known orgs
What other players will be a part of this?
TBA
Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Coruscant
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Cardinal will go to meet his father, who is the Mafia "Boss" and ask to rule either alongside his father, or kill his father, and take the throne. After, Cardinal will hold a meeting between himself and the higherups if the Exchange, which he already is a part of.
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Cardinal will either rule the Family Mafia alongside his father, or by himself, create an allegiance between the Mafia and the Exchange.
Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
N/A

1. Ask/Self DM - Participate in an attack against a rival gang. One of the men assisting Cardinal in the attack is Cardinal's competitor, the only member having the same rank. Cardinal must attack the gang, successful or not, but in the fight Harris is killed, giving Cardinal more power.
2. Ask/Player DM- Participate in a meeting between the various sub-bosses and the boss. Get the other sub-bosses to support you or kill the boss to take his place.
3. Ask/Player (Vamp) Participate in a meeting with the higher ups of the Exchange to see whether the Mafia will have a mutual parter-business style relationship, instead of being competitors.

The only change is removing the meeting about the Exchange with Vamp's character.

@Nefieslab

Thankfully you've been kind enough to only line through what you are replacing. So, to confirm, you intend to remove one third of your plot and still receive the entirety of the IC reward?

Okay Brick that isn't going to fly I'm afraid so here's what I suggest for you my man;

• Create a new series of three threads that secure the mafia and estate. Suggestion as below
  • Self-DM - Kill the competitor in an attack on another gang as previously planned to remove direct competition from within.
  • Player-DM - Secure the support of the second in command of the mafia or, failing that, kill them and have them replaced by a member of the council of sub-bosses that is more agreeable to Cardinal's approach.
  • Player-DM - Participate in a meeting between the various sub-bosses (some in cardinal's control and others not) along with the current boss. Either convince the remaining sub-bosses to side with Cardinal or attempt to kill those who doubt him.

 

[Brick]

Thankfully you've been kind enough to only line through what you are replacing. So, to confirm, you intend to remove one third of your plot and still receive the entirety of the IC reward?

Okay Brick that isn't going to fly I'm afraid so here's what I suggest for you my man;

• Create a new series of three threads that secure the mafia and estate. Suggestion as below
  • Self-DM - Kill the competitor in an attack on another gang as previously planned to remove direct competition from within.
  • Player-DM - Secure the support of the second in command of the mafia or, failing that, kill them and have them replaced by a member of the council of sub-bosses that is more agreeable to Cardinal's approach.
  • Player-DM - Participate in a meeting between the various sub-bosses (some in cardinal's control and others not) along with the current boss. Either convince the remaining sub-bosses to side with Cardinal or attempt to kill those who doubt him.

Sorry, but I think you misunderstand what i'm saying. Firstly i believe the plot is two fold, get Cardinal to become the Boss by killing his father, and secondly creating an alliance with the Exchange. I'm removing one half of the plot, and i don't intend to get the alliance with the Exchange, A) Vamp's character is dead B) The Exchange doesn't exist anymore

Also, the Estate wasn't part of the plot, it was one of the assets at the start of the NPC org. I only need one more thread, with is the DM opposition to kill Cardinal's father and become the boss, making the faction - PC
@Nefieslab

 

[Nefieslab]

Sorry, but I think you misunderstand what i'm saying. Firstly i believe the plot is two fold, get Cardinal to become the Boss by killing his father, and secondly creating an alliance with the Exchange. I'm removing one half of the plot, and i don't intend to get the alliance with the Exchange, A) Vamp's character is dead B) The Exchange doesn't exist anymore

Also, the Estate wasn't part of the plot, it was one of the assets at the start of the NPC org. I only need one more thread, with is the DM opposition to kill Cardinal's father and become the boss, making the faction - PC
@Nefieslab

No I dont believe I do misunderstand.

You are attempting to gain control of a faction and its assets- including the estate.

You are attempting to do this is two threads, only one of which carries any amount of risk.

I am telling you that this is not enough and advising you to add a third thread - is this unclear?

 

[Brick]

No I dont believe I do misunderstand.

You are attempting to gain control of a faction and its assets- including the estate.

You are attempting to do this is two threads, only one of which carries any amount of risk.

I am telling you that this is not enough and advising you to add a third thread - is this unclear?

had some time to think this plot through, and i don't want to get it so complicated. I'll do what you suggested, sorry for the confusion on my part.

 

[Nefieslab]

had some time to think this plot through, and i don't want to get it so complicated. I'll do what you suggested, sorry for the confusion on my part.

Please edit the OP of this thread to reflect the changes please!

 

[Brick]

i believe the OP has been edited master Nefi.

huh a long time ago in fact.

Nonetheless lets get this done!

@Nefieslab