Who's the Boss now?

[Brick]

What is going to happen in your plot?
@Cardinal Paroaria will go to his father in the Paroaria Estate to take his place on the throne. Once Cardinal is in charge, he will hold a rally, and bring the Magia together, recruiting more members (Noc and PC) Members of other criminal organizations will be attending such as the Exchange and other known orgs
What other players will be a part of this?
TBA
Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Coruscant
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Cardinal will go to meet his father, who is the Mafia "Boss" and ask to rule either alongside his father, or kill his father, and take the throne. After, Cardinal will hold a meeting between himself and the higherups if the Exchange, which he already is a part of.
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Cardinal will either rule the Family Mafia alongside his father, or by himself, create an allegiance between the Mafia and the Exchange.
Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
N/A

1. Ask/Self DM - Participate in an attack against a rival gang. One of the men assisting Cardinal in the attack is Cardinal's competitor, the only member having the same rank. Cardinal must attack the gang, successful or not, but in the fight Harris is killed, giving Cardinal more power.
2. Ask/Player DM- Participate in a meeting between the various sub-bosses and the boss. Get the other sub-bosses to support you or kill the boss to take his place.
3. Ask/Player (Vamp) Participate in a meeting with the higher ups of the Exchange to see whether the Mafia will have a mutual parter-business style relationship, instead of being competitors.

 

[Nefieslab]

What is going to happen in your plot?
@Cardinal Paroaria will go to his father in the Paroaria Estate to take his place on the throne.
What other players will be a part of this?
N/A
Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Coruscant
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Cardinal will go to meet his father, who is the Mafia "Boss" and ask to rule either alongside his father, or kill his father, and take the throne.
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Cardinal will either rule the Family Mafia alongside his father, or by himself.
Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
N/A

This should take one to two threads, both prob player DM.
The Faction has been approved as a NPC faction.
I am waiting for approval for the writeup of the Estate

Why is this an espionage plot?

 

[Brick]

Honestly I didn’t know wether to put this here, character or faction plot since the mafia is an approved NPC faction. I put it here b/c it said assasination, which might happen

 

[Nefieslab]

Honestly I didn’t know wether to put this here, character or faction plot since the mafia is an approved NPC faction. I put it here b/c it said assasination, which might happen

Well character plots dont exist anymore and this is very much not an espionage plot imo

If the faction is approved then this should be an indie faction plot I reckon

 

[Brick]

hm ok thanks

 

[Nefieslab]

hm ok thanks

Now if you could, I'd like an actual plot write up XD
Because right now it's one thread and that's not a plot XD

 

[Brick]

Lol sure thing I’ll get it up, sorry about that

 

[Brick]

@Nefieslab i have edited

 

[Nefieslab]

@Nefieslab i have edited

Okay so not what I meant >.>

Number of threads.
What is going to happen in said threads.
Level of difficulty in said threads.

Come on man - this is not your first submission >.<

 

[Brick]

XD lol, sorry about that, i'm doing this on my break. Need more coffee

 

[Nefieslab]

XD lol, sorry about that, i'm doing this on my break. Need more coffee

Tag me when done dude XD

 

[Brick]

Tag me when done dude XD

@Nefieslab , PMed Vamp for our characters to meet via the plot, haven't gotten a response yet, so i'll wait for two more days or so, and then i might have to change it to an NPC leader of the Exchange, which would be player DM.

 

[Nefieslab]

@Nefieslab , PMed Vamp for our characters to meet via the plot, haven't gotten a response yet, so i'll wait for two more days or so, and then i might have to change it to an NPC leader of the Exchange, which would be player DM.

So let me get this straight - you're taking over a crime family with assets

In one thread? With unapproved Lore as well? >.>

No, no you are not XD
Add in at least one more thread actually taking control of this thing, even if it is small

 

[Brick]

So let me get this straight - you're taking over a crime family with assets

In one thread? With unapproved Lore as well? >.>

No, no you are not XD
Add in at least one more thread actually taking control of this thing, even if it is small

ok, so my character is already in the family, with his father being the leader. I would think it would be a little easier for me to take the throne. If you'd like i'll still add the third thread, if you read the lore/faction write-up, you'd see that Cardinal is a lieutenant, and has direct claim and blood to the throne. Also one of the assets, the Compound, i already acquired from the previous plot XD

 

[Nefieslab]

ok, so my character is already in the family, with his father being the leader. I would think it would be a little easier for me to take the throne. If you'd like i'll still add the third thread, if you read the lore/faction write-up, you'd see that Cardinal is a lieutenant, and has direct claim and blood to the throne. Also one of the assets, the Compound, i already acquired from the previous plot XD

I understand that he's within the family - I'm still not approving a takeover of an organisation with 1 thread. This isn't something I'm going to budge on.

You don't get to take over any kind of organisation with 1 thread, regardless of blood relation or rank so either add in another thread or I will reject this plot

 

[Brick]

I understand that he's within the family - I'm still not approving a takeover of an organisation with 1 thread. This isn't something I'm going to budge on.

You don't get to take over any kind of organisation with 1 thread, regardless of blood relation or rank so either add in another thread or I will reject this plot

lol, kk

 

[Brick]

I understand that he's within the family - I'm still not approving a takeover of an organisation with 1 thread. This isn't something I'm going to budge on.

You don't get to take over any kind of organisation with 1 thread, regardless of blood relation or rank so either add in another thread or I will reject this plot

I hope this is satisfactory? I do believe myself that it may be a little too easy, and if you still think so as well, i'll take another look at it tonight or tomorrow to edit, for now this is what i got! Lol, if you wanna reject it idk go ahead? I'll think of a more fleshed out plot XD thankssss!

 

[Nefieslab]

I hope this is satisfactory? I do believe myself that it may be a little too easy, and if you still think so as well, i'll take another look at it tonight or tomorrow to edit, for now this is what i got! Lol, if you wanna reject it idk go ahead? I'll think of a more fleshed out plot XD thankssss!

It doesn't make sense XD
Why is it thread 3 when, by your timeline, he would have already taken over the family?

My suggestion;

1. Self-DM - Participate in a raid on a rival gang alongside one of the only men on the same level as Cardinal. He is a rival and Card must kill him without being spotted so he can take his powerbase from him without being fingered as a traitor.
2. Player DM - Participate in a meeting of the other sub-bosses with the boss. Either convince the others to back you or kill the boss and attempt to take his place.
3. Players - Meeting with the Exchange to see if you are going to be outright taken over or brought in as a partner-type deal.

 

[Brick]

It doesn't make sense XD
Why is it thread 3 when, by your timeline, he would have already taken over the family?

My suggestion;

1. Self-DM - Participate in a raid on a rival gang alongside one of the only men on the same level as Cardinal. He is a rival and Card must kill him without being spotted so he can take his powerbase from him without being fingered as a traitor.
2. Player DM - Participate in a meeting of the other sub-bosses with the boss. Either convince the others to back you or kill the boss and attempt to take his place.
3. Players - Meeting with the Exchange to see if you are going to be outright taken over or brought in as a partner-type deal.

@Nefieslab Edits are made.

 

[Nefieslab]

@Nefieslab Edits are made.

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