Voxil Hord

[Faded]

Name: Voxil Hord
Faction:Sith
Rank: Acolyte
Species: Human
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Height: Approximately 6’4”
Weight: 190 lbs
Eyes: Green
Skin: Red
Credits: 1000
Distinguishing Marks: None

Force Sensitive: Yes

Strength: 6/10
Though not overly powerful, his strength is formidable and considerably above average.

Dexterity: 7/10
The Human is trained extensively in acrobatics and agile combat, out of the physical qualities, his dexterity and speed are his greatest attributes.

Constitution: 6/10
While physically capable, he is not known and cannot withstand exceedingly high amounts of biological trauma.

Intelligence: 6/10
Well-versed and educated, his intelligence is considerably above average.

Wisdom: 6/10
A young warrior full of pride and over-confidence, he has been shown to make mistakes however can compensate overall with an above average calculative and decisive mind.

Charisma: 6/10
Leadership and attitude have carried this young man far in life, if he cannot win with his skills, he can usually subdue with personality.

Force Powers:

Basic proficiency:

Force Jump
Force Push


Light Saber Forms:

None trained

Gear:

He has always shown an affinity for heavier armors though currently he does not possess any. He has his father's old black cloak which covers his figure in entirety. He has a single light-saber which holds a straight hilt and issues a deep red crystal imbued with essence from the Dark side of the force.

His greatest possessions however are a large necklace which he loops around the base of his hood, consisting of ornate miniature human skulls. A heirloom worn by previous Sith Masters from his blood line. Additionally, he has a very special black onyx mask which he frequently uses to cover his face. It creates an fear-inspiring sight and is rumored to hold magical powers to protect against mind-control and manipulation.

SHIP:

None

Droids:

None

Personality:

“The first time I laid eyes on him, he didn’t seem like much. Tall pipe-cleaner arms mixed with a lithe and minimally intimidated frame. I could have found several twi’lek slave girls who could have beaten him senseless...But, there was just something about him. He was fearless, head-strong, showed valor, and displayed courage beyond limitation. He had a sixth-sense, he could see shadows, sense movement, and showed an unyielding resolve even against greatest adversity. During the time I spent with him, I glistened with pride as he grew into a weapon of darkness." ~ Sith Acolyte Overseer Rakroth

The enigmatic Human is known best for his steely wit, sharp tongue, and pillars of confidence. Through action and will, he characterizes the epitome of Sith Philosophy: Strength, Passion, and Determination.

Biography:

Rumored to have descended from the original blood line of Tulak Hord himself, Voxil spent his youth and young adulthood adhering to highest expectations and customs held firmly by his Imperial father and Sith supportive mother. The youngest of three boys, he learned the basics of Imperial education, literature, poetry, fine arts and crafts, martial arts, tactics, strategy, and his favored star fighter piloting.

As he grew into age of an young man, it was time for him to embark on his next journey: Travel to the Sith Academy of Korriban and seek teachings to unlock his full potential and perhaps even his true destiny..

 

[Darkwasp]

Welcome to SWRP and welcome to the Thread that we are sharing.

This is a great start for your character. Something about the Blackguard really intrigues me (and I honestly don't know why - I'm just looking forward to hearing more about them in this setting). While you meet the requirements for a character, I would love to see more flaws written up about this character; something that prevents him from appearing as just another "badass in the galaxy"; we have a lot of those. What does he like? What does he dislike? Does he have any hobbies?

Knight and Marauder level Characters are limited to being accomplished in only one Lightsaber Form with limited knowledge of another. I wouldn't consider anyone a Master in Shii Cho unless it is their primary form. Most people move away from that Form in particular when other Forms become available to them (It's a base for that most newbies study, but few actually ever Master).

Speaking of Forms I noticed he has two lightsabers. You might want to put Jar'Kai - specialty next to whichever Form that you chose as your primary. That way no one can dispute the fact that your using two blades if you ever enter a PVP setting.

Last but not least: Make sure to get Jedi Faction Leader, GABApentin's permission to be and Ex-Jedi. :bliss:

Again welcome, and I can't wait to find out more about this character.

 

[Faded]

Welcome to SWRP and welcome to the Thread that we are sharing.

This is a great start for your character. Something about the Blackguard really intrigues me (and I honestly don't know why - I'm just looking forward to hearing more about them in this setting). While you meet the requirements for a character, I would love to see more flaws written up about this character; something that prevents him from appearing as just another "badass in the galaxy"; we have a lot of those. What does he like? What does he dislike? Does he have any hobbies?

Knight and Marauder level Characters are limited to being accomplished in only one Lightsaber Form with limited knowledge of another. I wouldn't consider anyone a Master in Shii Cho unless it is their primary form. Most people move away from that Form in particular when other Forms become available to them (It's a base for that most newbies study, but few actually ever Master).

Speaking of Forms I noticed he has two lightsabers. You might want to put Jar'Kai - specialty next to whichever Form that you chose as your primary. That way no one can dispute the fact that your using two blades if you ever enter a PVP setting.

Last but not least: Make sure to get Jedi Faction Leader, GABApentin's permission to be and Ex-Jedi. :bliss:

Again welcome, and I can't wait to find out more about this character.

Sounds good, I've made those changes. Thanks for your input.

 

[Flamjetxx]

Hmmm, Interesting...

 

[Sleven]

I'm going to have to agree with Darkwasp about the Blackguards, they interest me. Mostly because I'm entirely sick of running into characters who fit either the good or evil paradigms, but that's a rant for another day.

I look forward to seeing what direction you decide to take them as an Indie faction in our current timeline.

 

[Faded]

I've had some change in thoughts, more importantly, as a new member to SWRP, I would like to initially start off as a member of a main faction and then as I progress decide if I wish to experience the independent path afterwards. I cannot change the Faction in the title however I will apply this character as a Sith. I have down-graded his powers to be more compatible with those of an acolyte.

 

[Darkwasp]

Actually if you click Edit Post and then Go Advanced, there should be an option to change the Prefix of the Character. :mongo:

 

[Marf]

The "tentacles" are actually called "lekku" ;)

 

[Taz]

I like him, I see a few of the same stumbles I've made just joining. For powers I would drop push and just put Telekinesis, it's the basic ability that leads to powers like push/pull, saber throw, grip etc. Also leaves a little more room to play with abilities while not sounding to over powered. That's just my two cents.

 

[Omnis]

Quick notes (I'm pressed for time):

The Sith leadership likes to see stats at 6 or below, with only one 7, before accepting the profile as an Acolyte into the Imperium. The stats will need to be changed before acceptance.

I like what I read and also think the Blackguard concept is interesting. I don't think there should be any conflict with this backstory, but if it does come up then you will need approval from GABA for the references to previous NJO members (as the NJO faction on this site controls the lore for all Jedi right now).

Cheers!

 

[Faded]

Quick notes (I'm pressed for time):

The Sith leadership likes to see stats at 6 or below, with only one 7, before accepting the profile as an Acolyte into the Imperium. The stats will need to be changed before acceptance.

I like what I read and also think the Blackguard concept is interesting. I don't think there should be any conflict with this backstory, but if it does come up then you will need approval from GABA for the references to previous NJO members (as the NJO faction on this site controls the lore for all Jedi right now).

Cheers!

Taken care of, thank you for your input and attention.

 

[Jiang Winters]

As I generally disallow torso armor made with saber-resistant or saber-proof materials, I'd like you to remove the cortosis element from his chest armor. Feel free to shift it to his bracers and shoulders or elsewhere on his body.

 

[Faded]

I made some changes to the character concept. It has been a long time since I played and had to take a long leave of absence due to personal reasons. But I'm back and planning to stick around. Looking forward to playing with the masses of you.

 

[Flamjetxx]

Lol, welcome back! I saw a posted in the comments below, and was very confused as to how that happened (maybe I'm sleep-posting again); But then I looked at the date, and it explained all haha!

I don' se anything glaring me at the face that's wrong with your charrie, but I should say that the more your write in your Personality and Bio, the more fleshed out your character will become, and the more you'll know how to RP him. But that's ONLY a suggestion assuming that you've met the length requirements for each. GL!