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Xanthum the Mighty

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What is going to happen in your plot?
Xzaien takes a group of members from the various Galactic Factions with a representative from the Medriaasi Order. She will have them travel to the suspected locations to where the star maps may be located. There they will find the starmaps. And the plot will end after the team gather the locations together and compile them. This is plot 1 for the entire "Sacking of Iokath" plot line.

What other players will be a part of this?
Xzaien (Independent)
Mephetch Tsississ (Galactic Alliance)
Arial Calvin (Independent)
Dervix (Sith Empire)
Rueben Azari (Galactic Alliance)
Hjt
Amur (Sith Empire)


Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Yavin 4
Hoth
Onderon
Ossus

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
  • The team will converge on where the starmaps is located [Planets listed above] (Dice) [Hostile: Hostile Fauna/Darkside Cultists]
  • They will fight their way to the starmap killing bounty hunters and hostile wildlife (Dice) [Hostile: Hostile Fauna/Treasure Hunters/Bounty Hunters/]
  • Rendezvous with the Representative and turn over the data. (Player DM) [Bounty Hunters/Contract Hoppers]
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Xzaien acquires the starmap location. Thus paving the way for the plotting of a hyperspace lane to Iokath.

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*Still on the fence on whether or not this is balanced, so please do help me here*

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
Nope
 
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Can I ask why you center everything and also separate each sentence by a line? It makes things hard to read.
 

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Can I ask why you center everything and also separate each sentence by a line? It makes things hard to read.
 

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Also please don't separate each sentence with a new line. Instead have it run together all as one paragraph. Looking like a list is not very efficient because you aren't actually listing things. If you are, you may as well use bullet points.
 

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I edited it a bit for you so you can see what it should look like. Also please separate each series of events in what should take place in a thread. Also please state what kind of opposition/method of difficulty you will be using. Is it open/pvp, Dice, DM, Self-dm?
 

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Please label which events take place in one thread and then state what kind of opposition you will have for that thread.
 

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From a quick skim, I'd like to ask you to remove any and all of the references to the Eternal Empire in here, since it doesn't exist in this timeline. References to things that don't exist in the TL, such as the GEMINI droids, Eternal [x], other SWTOR references, so on and so forth, would need an accompanying lore article before it could be referenced. SWTOR isn't part of the Disney canon, nor is it really part of the site's canon aside from bits and pieces that may have been cherrypicked for convenience.

Tagging @Logan to make sure I'm not wrong here about needing lores or such.
 

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From a quick skim, I'd like to ask you to remove any and all of the references to the Eternal Empire in here, since it doesn't exist in this timeline. References to things that don't exist in the TL, such as the GEMINI droids, Eternal [x], other SWTOR references, so on and so forth, would need an accompanying lore article before it could be referenced. SWTOR isn't part of the Disney canon, nor is it really part of the site's canon aside from bits and pieces that may have been cherrypicked for convenience.

Tagging @Logan to make sure I'm not wrong here about needing lores or such.
Well there’s a problem. Since Iokath is a SWTOR location..
 

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On the site, Iokath has its own lore article that is radically different than the one seen in SWTOR.

EDIT: Looks like, in the lore article above, you can't even reach Iokath without finding its corresponding star maps, which would take a plot or two on its own to even do. See below for the relevant quote:

What is known is that the Iokath species didn't go extinct—at least initially. Some survivors visited worlds their empire had touched, even in the Outer Rim, leaving behind star maps that would lead one through the trecherous Unknown Regions to Iokath. The purpose of these star maps is believed, by galactic historians, to help survivors find their way back home at an undetermined point in the future. However, in the thousands of years since Iokath's demise, none ever have. Soon after the star maps were built, the Iokath vanished from the known galaxy and have not been heard from since.
 
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On the site, Iokath has its own lore article that is radically different than the one seen in SWTOR.

EDIT: Looks like, in the lore article above, you can't even reach Iokath without finding its corresponding star maps, which would take a plot or two on its own to even do. See below for the relevant quote:
Time to edit that...
 

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Right, So. I have no idea who's actually reviewing this. So this is a literal call for assistance.
 

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Right, So. I have no idea who's actually reviewing this. So this is a literal call for assistance.
Relax. We'll get to it when we can.

Staff members have lives, jobs, and school that occupies their time, and can't check up on things on the site 24/7. We're tracking things that need to be reviewed, and bumping things tends to move it to the bottom of the priority list for us. I'll give this a look when I can.
 

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As painus said, Iokath will probably take a plot of its own to get to. So when you say "Fine Iokath" in the objective of your first thread that is not going to cut it. Getting star maps for the planet will take its own plot. Also you have other objectives in each thread or maybe you are just misunderstanding what I meant from earlier because you still haven't labeled what each thread has for opposition.

An example that is very much cut down is below

Thread 1 (dice rolling): Sneak into base

Thread 2 (dmed oposition): Convince general to stop attacking

thread 3 (dice rolling): Sneak out/escape from base
 
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