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Thrit Cest


NAME Thrit Cest AGE 31 FACTION The Mandalorian Dominion - UNKNOWN

Appearance and Personality

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Thrit has dark-brown hair and navy-blue eyes. He bears a bit of stubble around his face and as a unique marking on his face: A chipped eyelid on the right side of his face. He is apparently lean and is of modern height. His face is usually in a scowl. He is 6'3, has a lean build, and is 162 lbs.

Thrit is zealous towards the old Mandolorian ways and is forever loyal to them. He can be very philosophical at times with it though, and prefers no one leaves him an opening to rant on about it. He doesn't prefer to talk alot, but instead prefers any form of action. He doesn't mind being a team player, and often serves as good back-up, but Thrit doesn't usually plan or come up with a good first phase but then wings the rest, making him brash, and a semi-decent strategist. It must also be stated that he can be quite competitive and doesn't take loss too likely if it happens too often. He over all doesn't mind defeat, but he'll still keep it on some sort of personal level. Another trait that some might see is that he could be deranged.



Biography

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Thrit has been traveling about the planet of Almas ever since he was eight and was very violent. He'd rarely challenged anyone out-right, but would be offended very easily. For the most part, he'd fight against adults, which resulted in numerous losses;though he never did stop trying, but that didn't mean he liked the feeling of loss.He knew he couldn't keep fighting them out-right, so begun his little mind starting to formulate different approaches. He would spend countless days trying to figure out to bring his elders down to size. He finally came up with a number of strategies, some of which ranged from ambushes to hijacking actual weaponry. This got him mixed results, but they were results that he could accept. He wasn't exactly raised but was trained by a pilot named Alti, and for the most part housed Thrit and taught him how to pilot a craft.

By the time he entered teen-hood, His violent nature slowly diminished and his want for knowledge grew. He asked Alti about him, but Alti himself never really knre himself as he was a growing boy by the time he met him. Alti,however, did compare Thrit's tenacity with that of a Mandalorian. That was enough to form Thrit to get searching. Thrit wanted to identify himself beyond that blood-lusted rascal he was. He visited numerous libraries and asked numerous people on the Mandalorians, ranging from facts and legends of them. These things sent Thrit's mind in a stir as he could envision the Mandalorians in so many ways from what he was told and what he's read and held onto whatever information he learned. He took up bounty hunting as a job for the next couple of decades until he outfitted himself with the right equipment.Thrit then left Almas to roam the galaxy to find more skilled opponents with whom he could test his true capabilities with. Thrit no longer need to hunt for bounty. He was out to hunt for sport. For years, he's come across criminals, bounty hunters, skilled tribesmen, Sith, and even Jedi. And with every encounter, he managed to come out on top. Even if he still hunts, there's still that hole he wants to fill: The Hole in Manda'lor. Through out his travels, he's heard of rumors of a collective of individuals going under the Mandalorian moniker which clearly got his interest. With the little information he gathered, he set off to find the Deathwatch and finally bring a revolution to the Mandalorian's honor.

After awhile, he reached the planet of Concordia and found the faction. They welcomed him with open arms and for once, he felt overjoyed for finding the legendary race he's always envisioned. But on the other hand, he was enraged by this Republic government that constrained the Mandalorian's fighting instincts. Desperate to keep Mandalor's fighting spirit from diminishing because of this new management the Mandalorians lived under, Thrit joined Deathwatch and became a valuable asset to their faction. Thrit's time with Deathwatch was the most meaningful he had ever experienced. They thought him The old Mandalorian traditions, their religions, their bond of brotherhood, aswell as put his marksmanship to good use for a just cause. Thrit soon adopted a philosophical introspective, a higher power to uphold, and anti-government views. Thrit helped Deathwatch all through-out their campaign to overthrow the self-righteous Republic. This came with it's fair share of wins and losses, but they were not deterred. They finally put their all into the last phase of this campaign and succeeded. Deathwatch liberated Mandalore and would restore it's rightful place as feared warriors across the universe once more. Thrit was relieved, but his heart was heavy from the loss of his comrades who gave their all for this victory to have occurred. Thrit never felt this sort of emotional attachment, as the only one that came close was Alti. He left Concordia to cope with this feeling and would only comeback to aid Mandalore once he was finished mourning. That time was now...



Skills

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Endurance: Thrit has a high level of endurance. Thrit has tanked numerous blows before. As an eight year-old, he's managed to walk away from blows from grown men. This has attributed Thrift as well as many encounters with various skilled individuals.
Stamina: Thrit has good stamina. Thrit able to outlast a great number of skilled individuals before, including Sith and Jedi, whose stamina are far above average and on a couple of occasions managed to dodge force attacks. He can also run 2 miles in a full sprint without resting.
Intelligence: Thrit is a smart man, it's just that he isn't very patient when it comes to planning. He can strategize when he wants he and it would be a good plan, it's just that he doesn't plan that far. He's knowledgeable in various attack patterns of other warriors, as he has fought various through-out the galaxy.
Adept Marksman: Thrit never had any formal training, having to learn and adapt as time went on, but he is an adept marksmen. He's studied on several weapon usages. If one weapons doesn't work, he'll go to the next. To him, it's all just a testing phase.
Expert Pilot: Thrit is also and expert pilot. started piloting when he was ten, but never officially left into the galaxy until he was fifteen. He has amazing flying capabilities and is pretty handy with a wrench.




Equipment

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Mandalorian CCT Armor
Whipcord launcher
ZX miniature flame projector
Z-4 jetpack
R-415 Huntsman sniper
Mandalorian Vibrosword
TS-15



Ship

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So i have a few questions before i can approve this profile.

What do you mean by he wants to fill the hole in Manda'lore? Am i right in guessing you mean he wants to take the position of Mand'alor?

Also i would like it if you could elaborate more on how he learned of his Mandalorian heritage, how he joined the Mandalorian Dominion, basically flesh out his backstory a little more.

I would also like to see his abilities as a child be diminished a bit. Maybe instead of him winning fight against adults, give him more of a "doesn't know when to back down" attitude, lost fights against adults alot which turned him into a hardy scrapper.

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Ok, I can do that. The Hole in Manda'lore bit, is like a introspective bit. It means that to Thrit, Mandalor is just forgotten. Empty. He just longs for it to rise up again and be what it once was. But I made the fixes. Is there anything else?
 
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Ok, I can do that. The Hole in Manda'lore bit, is like a introspective bit. It means that to Thrit, Mandalor is just forgotten. Empty. He just longs for it to rise up again and be what it once was.
Ah. well, that we can definately provide.
 

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Made the fixes. Are they any good?
Reading over your edits, there is one thing that stand out to me. The Mandalorian Dominion is the cumulative story of two previous factions, the Deathwatch, and before that Ha'rangir's Chosen. The Mandalorian Dominion is the legitimate government of the world of Mandalore, surrounding space, and a few territories in the mid and outer rim. The revolution already happened, and was very successful.

However you could put it in his backstory that the group he heard of and sought out was the Deathwatch, and that he was a member of the Deathwatch when they liberated Mandalore.
 

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I keep trying to read this as "Thrit Creat" and that's bothering me.

Because this name would be so much better if that s was an a, with an r. Because reasons.

crit threat guys geddit
 

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I keep trying to read this as "Thrit Creat" and that's bothering me.

Because this name would be so much better if that s was an a, with an r. Because reasons.

crit threat guys geddit
Thritical Creat.
 

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Do none of the images load for anyone else as well?
 

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Alright, I got it. Thanks for the tips. But does that mean I add in canon material or not (Don't know if the Clone Wars still counts as canon)
 

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Alright, I got it. Thanks for the tips. But does that mean I add in canon material or not (Don't know if the Clone Wars still counts as canon)
Hmm? Oh we are well before TCW era. Our current TL takes place appr. 1000 years before the events of the Phantom Menace.
 

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These "images" are from the actual template. None of those ones worked.
That's because it's a template, you replace the link with links to your own images and they will show up. That's kind of how templates work.
 

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That's because it's a template, you replace the link with links to your own images and they will show up. That's kind of how templates work.
I know. I'm saying these ones haven't been replaced at all. Hence why they don't work.
 
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