Independent Sector Ranger: Uvren Sol

[Faded]

UVREN SOL

AGE

► 29​

SPECIES

► Human​

HEIGHT

► 5'11"​

WEIGHT

► 165 lbs​

EYE COLOR

► Blue​

HAIR COLOR

► Brown​

HOMEWORLD

► Naboo​

GENDER

► XY​

FACTION

► Sector Ranger​

RANK

► Ranger​

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► No​

BIOGRAPHY

Uvren Sol was born the eldest son of three to Marcia and Patrick Sol, two middle class laborers in Naboo. Raised as a vigilant and caring young man, his parents were determined to instill the basic principles of trust and honesty in their child to create a beacon of good in an otherwise vile galaxy. Uvren took those teachings to heart, sent to military school at a young age with what appeared as a guaranteed career in the armed forces. There he served to be an adept Marksman and combat pilot before leaving with an honorable discharge after three tours of duty. Despite this, Uvren maintains a longing for duty and his sense of righteousness brought him closer to his final goal: Sector Rangers.

Newly christened with a glistening badge, the new Ranger seeks to exert his swift justice on the lawless galaxy.

APPEARANCE

Lithe and tall, he has slim features and a chiseled jawline. The dark brown hair is typically razor cropped to medium length and rarely properly combed. Physically, his body is well-maintained with a regimen of rigorous exercise. Unlike other Rangers who prefer meager attires, Uvren is almost always dressed in a pristine charcoal grey or dark navy suit. When apprehending criminals or in the field of duty, he is always grabbed in his unique ranger armor, the badge polished and glistening on his jacket while the armaments are typically carried in two shoulder holsters.

PERSONALITY

Uvren Sol is well-mannered, polite, speaks with an articulate word vocabulary and is not easily tempered. His righteous views are unwavering and his dedication towards preserving life and peace cannot be questioned. While engaging in plentiful of social activities, Uvren takes his job and his duties as a ranger with considerable seriousness.

POSSESSIONS

• Unique Sector Ranger armor
• DL-18 blaster pistol x 2
• A280 Blaster Rifle

 

[Wit]

Lingerie? Seriously? She couldn't have been just a simple tailor?

 

[Rom]

Hey there @Faded

There's a few points on this profile that I'm honestly not too sure about.

Uvren Sol was born the eldest son of three to Marcia and Patrick Sol, two middle-class laborers in Naboo. His father was a mechanic and his mother helped a tailor craft women's lingerie.

The above seems totally irrelevant, inappropriate, and random. What does his mother assisting a tailor in creating women's lingerie have to do with Uvren Sol the character or his background?

Lithe and tall, his slim features are complementary to the defined and utilitarian purpose of his body.

This is a series of adjectives that actually do nothing to describe the character's appearance. What is the defined and utilitarian purpose of his body?? Why is that even a sentence?

I'd like to see some changes to this write up before it can be submitted for approval. Please reconsider how you convey the character to others and also what relevant aspects of his history may contribute to his motivations as a character.

 

[Faded]

Hey there @Faded

There's a few points on this profile that I'm honestly not too sure about.



The above seems totally irrelevant, inappropriate, and random. What does his mother assisting a tailor in creating women's lingerie have to do with Uvren Sol the character or his background?



This is a series of adjectives that actually do nothing to describe the character's appearance. What is the defined and utilitarian purpose of his body?? Why is that even a sentence?

I'd like to see some changes to this write up before it can be submitted for approval. Please reconsider how you convey the character to others and also what relevant aspects of his history may contribute to his motivations as a character.

Edited

 

[Faded]

@Rom

I've made some considerable edits, notably I made him FS as well as added a portion of a previous Jedi Knight into his background story.

 

[Rom]

Approved!