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Name:Primus.
Faction:No faction.
Rank:No Rank.
Species: Human.
Age:25
Gender:Male.
Height:6'1"
Weight:185(Toned Muscles)
Eyes:Gray.
Hair:No hair.
Skin:Gray.
Credits:1000 Credits.

Apperance:
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Strength:Above Average.
Dexterity:Above Average.
Constitution:Hale and Hearty.
Intelligence:Book Smarts and Street smarts.
Wisdom:Street Smarts wise.
Charisma:Above Average.

Force Powers: He has powers on all sides of the force.


Skills:Good at fighting and Good with Sith history. Very good at hunting people down and killing them.


Lightsaber Forms:
Shi-Cho.
Makashi.

Strengths:
Good at fighting and hunting and his intelligence.

Weaknesses:
Overconfident.

Gear:
Scarlet Lightsaber
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Modified Clothing(Much Like Atton Rand's)

Ships:
Sith Transport.

Pets:
A Protocal Driod.

Personality:
A charming and above average intelligent man. A hard worker. He tends to become obsessed about things and wants to know everything about it. He likes a joke and a good time,but most of the time he is rather serious. He is also rather talkative and will talk your ear off if you let him.


History:
Primus was born and raised on Empress Teta. From a young age he became obsessed with the Sith and there ways seeking to learn all about them. He also became obsessed about the Battle of Primus Goluud and nicknamed himself "Primus". He did that at age 13 and the nickname sits until this day. As a young kid. He was always different from his peers. When he got older he became very antisocial and lonely. He sought to hide himself from the galaxy and just read history and hurt animals and many other things. One day in town a boy started trouble with him when he was 15 and tried to rob him. Primus ran away and felt angery cause he felt he failed somehow. He eventully began tracking the kid and hunting him. When he was alone. He attacked him and killed him on accident and became a serial killer and continued killing people that he choose like a predator would choose its prey. He become obsessed with killing and hurting. He eventully killed his parents. Each kill was very planned out so he could either overpower his enemies or outwit them. During this time he began working out alot. It also became an obsession in his group of obsessions.


He eventully went into hiding cause there were many people who wanted to kill him and arrest him. So he became even more antisocial in hiding. He built a home very far away from society on Empress Teta. Hiding in a place where people would'nt normaly go. He thought this would be the best place for hiding away.He hid for many years scowering about getting food and other things he needed. During this time as well he honed his hunting skills. Sometimes he would break into the carbonite mines and steal supplies that he needed for himself. Every once and a while would he murder a person in cold blood but he thought if he did it to much he would get caught so he decided to calm down for a while. He heard of the resurgegence of the Sith in the Galaxy from there attack on the planet Corusant. He decided from this point to join the Sith and acutally become a person that he has only read about and is obsessed with. He had to return to his home city. While there he went striaght to the space port and found a ship and a man a and a protocal driod. He followed the man onto his ship and killed him. He stole the mans driod and the ship. He dumped the body right there in the space port and had the driod fly the ship and teach him how to fly ships as well. Cause he had never learned how. He landed on the Sith world and he searched for them. He eventully found there base and was captured as a tresspasser. Though he wanted to join they did not believe him and they totured him for a little bit. Eventully they let him join the Sith Order. He felt like he made a leap in his life at that moment. He had finally became a Sith. He immediatly began training in the ways of the Darkside of the Force and lightsaber skills. Up to this day he has learned basic force powers and average skills in Shi-Cho.

He began training even more and harder. Learning up to average skill with the form Makashi and got more advanced with Shi-Cho. He also got better with the Force. Learning more about it. He learned powers that were above his rank. Many people at his rank could only dream of learning more advanced powers like he did. Though he did not rise through the ranks being thought of as insignifcant in the Sith. Though he did not care. He was at least in the Sith training the the ways of the Darkside. After continously training he went on a Mission with another Sith named "Raven Desh". They destroyed Republic Oil depots and killed many soldiers. A good strike against the Republic. a small one but still a good one. He then returned to his continous training. After sometime he became distented and left the Sith behind with Raven Desh. They now seek a different path away from the Sith.

Primus and Raven joined the Macabre allaince to take the Sith away from Darth Calamity. He watched Lord Udun and Lord Nefarius kill Darth Calamity's Apprentice and a High priest of the Sith. He knew at that moment they are increcabally powerful. He could feel there power he just did not know they were that good. After sometime the Alliance eventully took back the Sith and Primus is now a Sith Knight inside the Sith. After that things kind of slowed down and he turned down the volume. He started training in many arts of fighting with a saber and unarmed to better up his skills. He wishs to become an ultimate fighter. He does not have a trainer. All he has is holograms and books and texts to teach him these things. Though he is a fan of self teaching. He feels you are a better fighter if you do such a thing. During this time he does missions against enemies of the Sith. To kill vital enemies of the struggling Republic. He wishes to see the Republic fall fully during this time. Not let it recover like it did after Malak died.

For months at a time. He would train lonely or go on missions. He prefered the lone training theme. He felt at home like this. He felt it increased his ability. Training from holocrons like he had always done to increase his abilities. Months went by maybe even years. Primus stopped counting and stopped caring. His thoughts about the glorius Sith conquering the galaxy had been shattered. His will had for them had been slowly driftng from within the solitude of his training. The anger and crazyness he had before hand was fading aswell. His knowledge was'nt though nor were his abilities in the force. During this time he fueled his anger into his fighting abilities and the force. His emotions were fully intuned with his fighting. He was learning the Sith way to conquer your emotion in fighting. Though he began to wonder if this was truely a Sith way or just another way of fighting. No being can control their own emotions to mastery. Not even a Jedi. He became lost in his own mind. The thoughts raced the ideas sprouted themselves within his own mind. The ways of the Sith he felt were ignorant and rediculous. Though he could not betray them. Though he was never around them. He seperated himself from the arrogance that shrouded the halls of the academy on Korriban. To him it felt as if he was being choked by other people. He could'nt stand it anymore.

He finally one day took his ship and his driod and left unannounced. He did not leave the Sith fully. He just went on a little field trip so to speak. He traveled to many worlds. Where things had happened to galaxy. Where pivotal things had happened to Shape it. Like on Dantioone where the Jedi Exile had saved a fledging community to soldify the Repulic. To Yavin where Exur Kun once stayed. To study and think about how. People are fighting over beliefs. Ways of training fueled with the hatred of others he did'nt know. He felt why would I hate a man. I've never met in my entire life he would think to himself as he walked the halls of these places that shaped the vary placed he lived. He wanted to see if it really meant anything. He even traveled to the Unknown world where Revan fought in the Star Forge to defeat the Lord of the Sith from the past Malak. He just wanted to see if there was anything there that meant anything. From all this traveling he felt as if he gained nothing through it all. He felt as if the Sith. The Jedi. It was all the same thing to him anymore. The fighting was useless. The knowledge broken and the people ignorant. He knew there was nothing he could do about it. The people were already so ingrained in these systems that they were willing to fight and die for them. He knew that alone it would be hard to change their views. Though he did'nt care enough to change them.

His thoughts changed him from the ruthless killer he was on his home of Emperess Teta to the man who felt the galaxy was broken and ignorant. He knew there was one last place he had to go. To the Goluud System where his obsession began. He had never been there himself but thats how this life had began. It turned him into the man he was today. He headed to his ship and flew to the destroyed system. All he was saw was nothing. He felt as if that was him. That this ruined system was himself. That eventully the very name he had chosen was symbolyzing him. He felt that the emptyness of the system was himself. He was'nt turning his back on the force. He just felt like he had was going to embrace the entire force now. The light,the dark and the gray. All one force how could oneside be evil he would think to himself. The answer was right before his eyes but he just needed grab it. Which he eventully did. The force is not inherently evil it was how a person used it in the world around him. Whether to kill or to heal. He knew that he had to balance himself out. He felt that the way to becoming a true master in the ways of the force. Was to embrace the entire thing. He knew what his new mission was in this galaxy.

During these past few months he had been searching and training. He noticed the changes in his apperance and the way he had acted around others. He felt the anger slipping and the cold white paleness the Sith anger brings about man had slipped out of the man of a once cold man. He saw his eyes turn blue and his skin turn into a tan. He disgarded his robes. He sold them to a market along his travels to get money from them. Though he kept his red saber he liked that saber. He liked the color red. To him it was just a color and no longer a symbol anymore. He did'nt even think about it after that. He focused in more feelings more about the lightside of the force. Feeling through to the gray. Feeling all the areas that had once been lost to him. He wanted to search himself not the galaxy to teach him something. He felt this was a mission was for himself. Not to be taught it by someone else. He felt that he had to find his own way to achieve something greater on a different plane of the force than other force users were on. He wanted to be different from the other prominant force users around. He wanted to be his own man. He even started reforming his own fighting tactics. He included the systems he had learned before of Shii-Cho and Makashi. He wanted to find a fluid movement with a lightsaber. That could react to anything with ferocity and the strength needed to defeat the threat that was at hand. He did'nt want a weak style like Niman. He wanted a strong style that was fluid moving and strong yet graceful at the same style. So it would seem stylish and fun to do.
 

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It's not bad, though you could probably do more with the history.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Brandon Rhea @ Jun 9 2006, 12:08 AM) [snapback]72867[/snapback]</div>
It's not bad, though you could probably do more with the history.
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Okay...I'll do more.
 

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I Think scurge is drawn too the Dark side in all of his incarnations... it is irresistable for him
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Dakar/ Xiantos @ Jun 9 2006, 12:22 AM) [snapback]72879[/snapback]</div>
I Think scurge is drawn too the Dark side in all of his incarnations... it is irresistable for him
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I am...I can't stay away from it for to long.
 

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Looks pretty good.

Suggestion: Could you not ut the whole history into one whole paragraph?
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Mulluns/ Markus Dagger @ Jun 9 2006, 02:28 PM) [snapback]73030[/snapback]</div>
Looks pretty good.

Suggestion: Could you not ut the whole history into one whole paragraph?
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Okay then. I was going to add more to his history anyways. So i'll do that now.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Enishi♧ @ Jun 9 2006, 04:05 PM) [snapback]73048[/snapback]</div>
Nice Pic
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Yeh that pic is hot. I found it when i was just searchin for dark jedi pics and stumbled upon it.
 

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Hot? Are you a 10 year old girl or something?
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Alo Suchra (Brutalidon) @ Jun 9 2006, 04:21 PM) [snapback]73061[/snapback]</div>
Hot? Are you a 10 year old girl or something?
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No thats just the way i talk.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Kitsune @ Jun 9 2006, 04:26 PM) [snapback]73070[/snapback]</div>
Ooookay... Anywho... It's decent.
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Thank you.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Alo Suchra (Brutalidon) @ Jun 9 2006, 01:21 PM) [snapback]73061[/snapback]</div>
Hot? Are you a 10 year old girl or something?
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:18:
 

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Scurge, you stealing my word really isn't that funny anymore (was it ever?).
 
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