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Lanya Lain

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The DarkNet
L.O.C.K. Division
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19, born 1,003 ABY
Zeltros

ALIAS(ES)
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SPECIES
Zeltron-Human (Lorrdian)

HAIR COLOR
White

BUILD
Athletic

EPITHET
Adaptable

GENDER
Male

EYE COLOR
Red

HEIGHT
5'7"
FORCE SENSITIVE
Yes


ALIGNMENT
CATEGORY
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Chaotic Good

ATTRIBUTES
8​
Strength
15​
Intelligence
14​
Dexterity
14​
Wisdom
9​
Constitution
17​
Charisma

Lanya was born to his Zeltron mother, and Lorrdian father, his name chosen for its sexual ambiguity (his mother saying "What if he wants to be a girl?") He'd always felt he would be unconditionally loved and accepted by his parents. They were both cheerful dreamer types, and happy drunks. His father was often gone once Lanya was born, he was a smuggler by trade, and kept credits flowing in order to support his family (his parents thought he was working on buildings as part of planetary reclamation projects for the Empire.) Lanya lived on Lorrdian with his mother, and grandparents who fussed over him, and resented his mother.

At age 9, His grandparents died both within the same year. Lanya lived with his mother for a few months in their modest home, though their neighbors and peers provided an unwelcoming environment, his grandparent's influence seemingly outlived them. Thus Lanya moved with his mother to Zeltros, a violently different atmosphere. She worked as a bartender (Lanya's father still sent credits, though both incomes were required to support them now) in a small local bar in the sprawling metropolis of a capital city.

Lanya hung around the bar while she was on duty, it wasn't long before the bouncers began asking favors of him. He was innocent enough not to know what he was doing by handing people inconspicuous parcels, and returning with credits. Within a few weeks they began giving him pocket cash, which he never had a use for as his mother, and father provided everything.

Lanya would people watch in his down time, honing his understanding of the "Kinetic communication" he'd learned as something like a native language from his grandparents, family, and their fellows. It became a point of obsession for him, as it was something few to none could ever 'hear.'

At the age of 15 Lanya was now making steady money, and the bar had evolved into a relatively successful club. Lanya was uknowingly involved in a plot to frame his father by stealing one of his largest shipments, getting him in debt with the Hutts, then cashing in on the price on his head in a coup de grace preventing him from ever discovering who the perpetrator was. Lanya helped to capture someone he never saw, by providing a distraction to lure them off the main streets. Lanya recieved substantial payment for his part in things, with an unexplainable ill feeling that something was wrong.

Lanya exposed one of the bouncers at the bar as the orchestrator of the events when he boldly accused him of having an involvement in his father's disappearance. The time the lost contact with him, and the time of Lanya's 'big payoff' were nearly identical. Not to mention his father's crew were situated at the space port. This bouncer, and petty criminal was someone who saw himself as a 'rising star' in the underworld, with fantasies of uprising and claiming a luxurious lifestyle for himself. He had already indebted himself to the Hutts by taking out huge loans with them to pay for rather extreme modifications to his personal starship, hoping it would make some sort of statement as a status symbol, increasing his recognition, and credibility amongs his peers.

The other bouncers, all personal acquaintances and occasional drinking buddies of Lanya's father, fell in on the would-be mastermind along with the crew, taking him hostage for nearly 5 days while waiting for a meeting with the Hutts.

They went to plead their case, taking Lanya along with them as it could be his last time seeing his dad. If the local Hutts had been bribed by one of the 'mastermind's' small entourage its likely they would turn a blind eye to the foul play, though his 'clique's' funds should've been exhausted after he'd payed off his ship.

The Hutts were receptive to their evidence, and eager to take the substitute in exchange for Lanya's father. With their wannabe competition off the street, and his ship now repossessed and ownerless, Lanya propositioned the Hutts to turn ownership over to him in exchange for all the wealth he had accrued. He had hoped to take advantage of their high spirits. They were devastated at the amount of credits he had in his possession. His masterfully timed promises of more to make up for the difference (nearly 18,000 credits worth of ill-gotten gains) and bold bravado seemed to amuse them greatly.

His offer would seem laughable on first glance, however the ship itself had been modified so heavily the sublight engine's capacity exceeded the frames capacity to store adequate cooling-regulation modules that were within the 'mastermind's price range. The ship was in essence built for streaking, short, speedy getaways and periods of rest afterwards lest the heat begin to cause issues for other components of the ship. The Hutts seriously considered his offer, but still refused him, though admiring his tenacity. He thought for a split second and played his full hand, offering himself to work off the difference doing small time substance and munitions smuggling. They accepted with jubilant laughter, and even returned him 1,000 credits as an 'investment', unknowingly being influenced by a barrage of pheromones (though the generosity was still a surpise to him.)

He would've liked to take credit, having it all planned out, but that wasn't how he worked. He was an improviser, reacting to the ebb and flow of his audience manipulating the subtle give and take of interpersonal energy. He fed off the crowd, and they ate right out of his hand.

Emotionally and physically drained from the treatment he received at the hands of the Hutts as a prisoner and newly acquired asset, Lanya's father refused to pilot the ship for him. This was the first meaningful disagreement he had had with either of his parents, though his mother was surprisingly in favor of letting him explore his sense of adventure. Ultimately he set out with two of his father's crewmates, a pilot, a 'salesman' and one of the five bouncers, an amateur mechanic. Including Lanya, the four man crew with a teenage leader set out.

Things were lucrative, running into a few tight spots, and some refusals to do business (once they found out the leader was a young teenage boy.) He could hardly believe the luck he had, a few times it seemed the crew was heading for mutiny, but they felt a collective sense of responsibility for him. By the age of 17, Lanya had a handful of steady suppliers, and buyers, he was wise to the trade, street smart, and shrewd. However he was largely still sheltered by the crew, never exposed to hostile environs for two reasons, 1. he was a smooth-talker, and charming person. 2. The crew wouldn't allow him along during particularly shady transactions where fights could break out.

Lanya would pass his downtime at home (Zeltros) in clubs. He would meet women, drink, and bet or participate in fighting rings. He became a very flashy duelist, priding himself on his ability to predict his opponents and dance circles around them. He had little to no martial skill, instead preferring to deflect, duck, and dodge his opponents attacks to tire them out and get past their guard usually hoping to end the match by holding his blade up to his opponents neck, or disarm them. His record, however was very spotty, as he couldn't dodge blaster fire and would get stunned often, or overpowered by larger and stronger opponents.

By the age of 18, he had begun to get bored of smuggling finding no sense of adventure in it, and resenting his crew's treatment of him over time. He eventually informed them his new passion was prize fighting. He eventually learned not only to rely on his understanding of body language, but that he had to gauge a person's mental strength in a fight. His style evolved to be more psychologically intimidating employing masterful flourishes, false openings, subtle provocation, and dangerous-looking poses. Eventually he incorporated a blaster-and-blade style using a high powered air pistol slug thrower in tandem with a long knife, or short sword in addition to his dual wield melee style.

Facing the same opponents more often than he'd like he had to invent new ways to dazzle them, and odd angles to come at. He became a very technical sort of fighter, and focused more on tactics, acrobatics, gymnastic maneuvers, and footwork than actually learning how to go toe to toe. Ultimately he began to bore the crowd and his confidence sank. He fell headlong into a losing streak, and heavy depression, flying out and drifting in orbit for days at a time, sleeping on his ship, doing next to nothing. With a sort of bitter resolve he returned to smuggling alone, and in secret pushing himself into bad deals and confrontations for no apparent reason. He followed this path for about a year, running from nearly every situation. He doubted himself at every step, bitterly reflecting on his past asking himself why he ever thought he could do the things he tried. Anxiously reading into why people treated him the way they did all the time out of insecurity, as if they could sense his weakness and failure within, sometimes becoming paranoid and feeling personally attacked by innocuous comments and idle chatter as he passed by others.

He tried legitimate work, failing to find heart to uphold his comittments. He tried manual work, leaving unfulfilled and his depression lingered still. He was only 18, already having a mental breakdown, smuggling was the only thing he had ever succeeded at. It seemed like it had all been luck, luck in meeting the crew, luck in the people he dealt with, he was nothing without the crew. Upon turning 19 he turned back to smuggling, though only sporadically, he would drift from system to system drinking in cantinas and then moving on. It seemed to him life had become a deep thoughtful silence. He felt automated, doing the same things over and over, while lost in thought, he began to disassociate with his environs, continually preoccupied with his past failure and whether he could have done better, or changed things.

Eventually he got to a low point in which he realized that he was afraid of dying, seeming to be the pinnacle of failure. Seeking out a few ideas here and there as he drifted planet to planet he eventually settled on the idea of bounty hunting as a way to get experienced with life threatening situations, assuming once he overcame his fear of death he would understand what he actually meant to himself. What kind of person he actually was, what it was he could do well, and perhaps something to live for.

(As a side note Lanya's feelings are worsened by his force sensitivity, he often confuses them in his mind as some sort of subconscious understanding he has of Kinetic Communication, or a gut feeling. Lanya is deeply sensitive to his feelings, but only acting logically outwardly if a bit overconfident in his understanding of how others see him, he's affected mainly under the surface inhibiting his ability to think quickly, and rationalize adequately.)


ABILITIES

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Dual Wield - 5/10 - Lanya's ability to use two weapons simultaneously, most often a slugthrower-blade combo, or blaster-slugthrower. His accuracy with projectile weapons is slightly better with hip fire, and better with slugthrowers than blasters. He's become so used to having each hand occupied, he will be at a disadvantage should he be forced to wield one blade alone.

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Slippery - 6/10 - Lanya's style of battle is largely mental and focuses on dodging, deflecting, deceptive feints, and flashy maneuvers. He uses this to his advantage, as he couldn't win a straightforward fight against a formally trained duelist.

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Presence of Mind - 7/10 - He prides himself on his skills with improvisation, and persuasion. He's quick to resort to unorthodox methods and tactics to get himself out of danger. He can spin lies, excuses, and distractions at the drop of a hat provided he isn't obsessing over some misunderstanding, or unrealistic possibility. Though proud of this he's yet to realize it's a unique talent for him because of his racial and cultural upbringing.

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Scoundrel's Gut - 2/10 - Lanya's force sensitivity has only manifested thus far as flashes of spontaneous knowledge, more than a feeling, and seemingly not from his own mind, they are strong, strange experiences. Strong enough for him to confuse them with his own emotions being out of whack. He never ignores them, but will often be troubled by them dwelling on their seemingly unprovoked nature. If he can find reason enough to act on them, he may escape danger, however like a psychic tarot reader he can misinterpret them, embroiling him further into a hot spot.



Intro

Lanya's last stop as he begins pulling himself up by his bootstraps is Tattooine. The catalyst of many an aspiring adventurer's fate, be it the beginning, or end of a story. For the first time in his life he finds himself feeling out of place among these underground types. Among places one would go to see the reality of the underworld, Tattooine is the pinnacle of a 'new frontier.' The stark contrast between the party planet Zeltros, and the places his old crew felt were safe enough to bring him along throws him for a loop. His handful of close calls in the previous year, until now, and real-world experiences with the seedy underworld cause him to feel the real pressure of the reality. He's taken the gift of life moment-to-moment for granted. At the core of his being, he refuses to play quiescent, though he knows not where or why he finds it in himself to do so. In truth he seeks out meaning in life, not a reason to live, but the reasoning behind it. He reaches out to the inhabitants of his hostile new environment, soon finding himself in the throes of a plot to rob a major security corporation on the planet Christophsis. Finding some measure of fulfillment in the novelty provided by his new distraction, his major concerns fade into the back of his mind as he immerses himself in his new role as an opportunistic thrill-seeker.

I

Now in day two on the crystalline planet Christophsis, Lanya has been introduced to two major characters in his new setting. The seemingly quiet, official Mandalorian bounty hunter, Reikan Zarlenak. Lanya hasn't seen much of Reikan, though he isn't as intimidating as Lanya thought he would have been. He's supposedly the one behind the gathering who had the initial drive to pull this heist. It has yet to be revealed how he got the information, and what exactly lies within the vault of the Dark Core building. His first partner working under Reikan for this job is Joy Carleec, a bubbly blue Twi'lek. Little is know about her past, just as with Reikan. Lanya seems to enjoy her company, and thus far has formed a desire to keep her out of harms way. Joy appears to be in her early teens, reminding Lanya of himself at her age. Likely hoping to keep her from the pitfalls along the path and impart what small measure of wisdom he has gleaned from his experiences, he keeps a watchful eye on her.

II

In their makeshift headquarters across from the Dark Core building, an upscale hotel room on the third floor, Joy, Reikan, and Lanya await the newcomers to their team. Reikan puts out the word they are to to meet at Lanya's hotel room. Joy and Lanya are in the kitchenette, one hypothesizing how to operate the stove, and the other taste-testing, and deciding on ingredients. There is a knock at the door, and Lanya soon meets the remainder of the team. Bahati the exotic, mouthy, and full-figured ace pilot. Shin'ra, the mysterious, assassin he finds hard to keep track of, and Tala, the Twi'lek Mandalorian bounty hunter whom he met previously on Tattooine. Introductions have yet to be made, but we shall see where the planning phase takes our team.



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PERSONALITY:
Lanya, put plainly, is a mess. As stress increases, he alternates between contradictory extremes. He dislikes loneliness, and feeling reliant on others. He feels disdain for those who doubt him, yet under stress, constantly second guesses himself. Similarly, he puts himself down when he's doing fine, or even succeeding, yet will encourage and make excuses for himself as things start to get worse. He sometimes feels as if people are doing things that annoy or offend him purposefully when he feels uncomfortable, its not beyond him to consider that people may be working together to capture him or take him down, as he often overthinks things. This used to debilitate and leave him helpless, freezing up like a robot that is trying to process a paradox logically. Early on, he learned to "just do" things and deal with repercussions and unexpected circumstances as they came, now a skill of his.

He frequently invalidates his own feelings. Not meaning he doesn't recognize them as real, that he will oftentimes ignore them as valid motives or factors when deciding his courses of action. Unknown to him his force sensitivity will impart strong "feelings" this is what he sometimes identifies as a"gut feeling," ones that are too strong to ignore. He likens them to his Zeltron physiology, and a preconscious interplay between his understanding of "kinetic communication, adding to his emotional confusion. Sometimes he feels as if he is misunderstanding his feelings or why he is getting them, (which he may,) and can make his situations worse, but he is still alive and considers himself the only one he has to thank for it. Himself, and his 'luck.' Believing himself to be somehow cosmically marked for 'something greater' he often remains collected, and shows a devil-may-care attitude when others begin to panic, as he doesn't like when people get overexcited, or lose control of themselves outwardly. If he comes to a point where he can no longer handle his inner turmoil, he will generally toss everything aside and lapse into recklessness thrill, or sensation seeking behavior.

He is generally very lazy, and carefree. He expects favor and fortune to fall into his lap. Something like a blissfully ignorant optimist, though perpetually dissatisfied. He also hates when people do certain things: like eat with their mouths open, drink or chew loudly, scrape utensils with their teeth, gulp loudly, etc.. or when he can hear people breathing while asleep, mostly when he is trying to sleep in earshot.

Ironically, he has an extreme dislike for disingenuous people, although he himself continually moderates his actions and body language. You could say he's come to see this as being himself, though perhaps his distaste is partially motivated by people's façades requiring actual effort to interpret through kinetic communication, like a foreign dialect of his own language. His racial heritage and cultural upbringing have instilled contradictory beliefs and morals within him resulting in his comfortably paradoxical way of life. Though as an individual, he is generally laconic and lazy, he doesnt find it difficult to be playful, cheerful, personable, and eloquent, or even intimidating should he feel the need.

He is attracted to people with a strong sense of self, and a deeply cultivated character as they are more predictable, and thus reliable. He likes people who would see past his exterior and treat him normally regardless, as a friend. The type of people that would ignore his 'let him sleep at all hours of the day' pleas, or to 'give up his jobs to pursue meaningless fun and reckless adventures.' He appreciates people that complement his personality with their's without being overbearing enough to quash his inner fire, but sometimes yank him down to earth, a blue oni to his apparent red oni personality.

If he finds someone annoying he will look for more reasons they annoy him, and believe they are always like that. If he finds someone very likable he will make excuses for them and defend them even against himself. He will also disregard things he normally dislikes, sympathizing with his friends, seeing them as more 'human' than others. (I.E. 'oh man this person is really thirsty they just worked hard right now' if they slurp drinks/smack their lips. 'hey its kinda cute/funny' if chewing obnoxiously.) He values his opinion of people above all other factors in deciding how to treat others, and will stand up for those who he likes, even if they do something 'wrong,' or got themselves into trouble. I.E. They're purposefully provoking a fight in a cantina, he will throw himself into the fray without hesitation. He often finds himself giving relatively small gifts on impulse with no agenda, but also no good will.

He can be capricious at times, and hard to cheer up, but all in all, is a good enough friend to help out-- or wait it out for.

GEAR:
two 'daggers' attached to his utility belt on his lower back and an arm length blade sheathed in his left boot. he has a modified heavy blaster pistol with a liquid-cable-hook launcher attached to his right thigh on the outside, and one Air Pistol slugthrower http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Air_pistolstrapped onto his lower torso-stomach area near his left hip.

His armor consists of a heavy cloak with a hood, usually wrapped tightly around his shoulders, and pinned together on his upper right pectoral area, though the clip isn't visible. his cloak covers most of his body and has suffered some wear and tear, is faded from the sun beating on it, and frayed or shredded from dragging on the ground. Underneath that cloak are two stiff metal epaulets to give a little protection, if they make his shoulders look a little broader so be it.

His body armor consists of a well-loved matte black leather tunic criss-crossed in dark brown leather-type straps, he has one or two pouches hanging around, his armor is modulated to suit his needs. his armor shows a bit of his hip bones, and lower torso, just underneath where his blaster hangs.

His pants ride a bit low in front, what can i say, he IS a Zeltron. they are constructed of the same matte black leather-ish material, and also have a few straps criss-crossed around in such a way not to hinder his movement.

He wears tall black matte leather boots that go up to the bottoms of his kneecaps with brushed metal toe-caps, and some heaving looking metal studs holding them into place, which he can unscrew to remove the toe-caps.

He is in possession of a facemask that covers his nose, underneath his eyes, and his jaw, it was originally to help him breathe and look cool in crowded club areas where people sweat a lot, and smoke illicit substances, he keeps it around. you know, to look cool. (It can filter, and purify air.)

He also possesses thick goggles they have a silvery-metallic reflective finish on the lens.

SHIP:
A heavily modified YT-1930 The "Lucky Star"

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DROIDS:
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He travels with an old astromech droid who he affectionately refers to as A-U (corruption of 'Ay, you!') capable of flying the ship, though not well suited for battle. His droid is plated with a shiny gold color.






NAME: Lanya Lain

FACTION: Hutt Cartel

RANK: Bottom-rung wannabe (Kung, I think.)

SPECIES: He's a primarily Zeltron-Lorrdian mix. A Zeltron mother, and Lorrdian father.

AGE: He is currently aged 19, with a quickly approaching birthday.

GENDER: He is male with an effeminate flair about his facial features (think elven.)

HEIGHT: 5'7" ): short stuff

WEIGHT: about 145 (he's got a bit of tone.)

EYES: Ruby red!

HAIR: Naturally white, though he dyes it sometimes for his own personal enjoyment (very badly I might add.)

SKIN: Albino

CREDITS: 1,000!

DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
Aside from his flamboyant looks his choice of jewelry is pretty permanent. His left ear has a silver tunnel about a half inch wide (you know, like plugs, but empty?) and his right ear has two small silver rings attached to it. He occasionally changes the jewelry.

He's albino!

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes.

SKILLS:
He is well-versed in Lorrdian 'Kinetic Communication' basically Lorrdians developed this thing they do where they communicate with one another through subtle facial expressions, body language, and gesticulations, over the centuries it was passed down generations, and became something beyond that, effectively learning how to intimate a person's emotional state and sometimes intent.

He's a Zeltron too (wow, what a great combo!) Meaning he can drink quite a bit of alcohol as his Zeltronian physiology affords him a second liver (lucky!) and his ability to project his emotions onto others, and sense/influnce those of others through pheremones gives him a bit more sway when it comes to 'negotiations.' He is skilled in haggling, thinking on his feet, lying (it's never that bad, I promise!) aiming his blaster with one hand, and consorting with seedy underground types. he also knows how to use a short sword and dagger together, and a dagger in conjunction with his blaster.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Self taught dual-blade, dual blaster, single blaster, and single blade-single blaster combat. He is not formally trained in any form of melee combat, what he knows of dual-blade combat was learned through trial and error, and is likely riddled with openings and improper stances/grips. (It is) his familiarity with dual-blade combat is such that he is at a loss when when using only one blade, he will draw a blaster, or blade in his other hand.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths​
Physically: He's good at dodging, rolling, balance, jumping, deflecting with his sword/dagger, above average hip fire aim, Zeltron physiology can subtly influence other's perception of him, good stamina.

Mentally: Strong sense of self, good at coming up with novel approaches and solutions, creates lies and stories well, good at talking to people, being likable, he can read body language much better than most, good at haggling, comfortable around dangerous types, good at remaining calm and focused in nearly every situation

Weaknesses​
Physically: Does not deal well with getting hit in real to-the-death type battles, and will likely run away, hes relatively short, though he can jump high, he's still small

Mentally: Lazy, too self aware, regularly moderates his behavior and body language as a precaution (which stresses him out a lot,) regularly puts himself down and discourages himself from enjoying his own successes (in an effort not to get 'too excited' and make mistakes,) prone to bouts of apathy and sensation-seeking behavior, mercurial temperament makes him difficult to be around for some, and can easily get him into sticky situations. lastly, he does some things for aesthetics and disregards practicality (I.E. armor having non-functional pieces and not affording himself complete coverage.)

BIOGRAPHY:


Lanya was born to his Zeltron mother, and Lorrdian father, his name chosen for its sexual ambiguity (his mother saying "What if he wants to be a girl?") He'd always felt he would be unconditionally loved and accepted by his parents. They were both cheerful dreamer types, happy drunks. His father was often gone once Lanya was born, he was a smuggler by trade, and kept credits flowing in to support his family (his parents thought he was working on buildings as part of planetary reclamation projects for the Empire.) Lanya lived on Lorrdian with his mother, and grandparents who fussed over him, and resented his mother.

At age 9, His grandparents died both within the same year. Lanya lived with his mother for a few months in their modest home, though their neighbors and peers provided an unwelcoming environment, his grandparent's influence seemingly outlived them. Thus Lanya moved, with his mother to Zeltros, a violently different atmosphere. She worked as a bartender (Lanya's father still sent credits, though they needed both incomes to support them now) in a small local bar in the sprawling metropolis of a capital city.

Lanya hung around the bar while she was on duty, it wasn't long before the bouncers began asking favors of him. He was innocent enough not to know what he was doing by handing people inconspicuous parcels, and returning with credits. Within a few weeks, they began giving him pocket cash, which he never had a use for as his mother, and father provided everything.

Lanya would people watch in his down time, honing his understanding of the "Kinetic communication" he'd learned as something like a second language from his grandparents, and their fellows. It became a point of obsession for him.

At the age of 15 Lanya was now making steady money, and the bar had evolved into a relatively successful club. Lanya was unwittingly involved in a plot to frame his father by stealing one of his largest shipments, getting him in debt with the Hutts, then cashing in on the price on his head in a coup de grace preventing him from ever discovering who the perpetrator was. Lanya recieved substantial payment for his part in things, with an ill feeling that something was wrong.

Lanya unwittingly exposed one of the bouncers at the bar as the orchestrator of the events. He was someone who saw himself as a 'rising star' in the underworld, with fantasies of uprising and claiming a luxurious lifestyle for himself. He had already indebted himself to the Hutts by taking out huge loans with them to pay for an extreme modifications to his personal ship, hoping for it to function as some sort of status symbol, increasing his recognition by his peers.

The other bouncers, all personal acquaintances and occasional drinking buddies of Lanya's father, all fell in on the would-be mastermind, taking him hostage for nearly 5 days while waiting for a meeting with the Hutts.

They went to plead their case, taking Lanya along with them as it could be his last time seeing his dad. If the local Hutts had been bribed by one of the 'mastermind's' small entourage its likely they would turn a blind eye to the foul play, though his clique's funds should have been exhausted after he payed off his ship.

The Hutts were receptive to their evidence, and eager to take the substitute in exchange for Lanya's father. His ship now repossessed and ownerless, Lanya propositioned the Hutts to turn ownership over to him in exchange for all the wealth he had accrued. Devastated at the amount of credits he had in his possession, and promising he had more to make up for the difference. Nearly 18,000 credits worth of ill-gotten gains.

His offer would seem laughable on first glance, however the ship itself had been modified so heavily the sublight engine's capacity exceeded the frames capacity to store adequate cooling-regulation modules that were within the 'mastermind's price range. The ship was in essence built for extreme, short, speedy getaways and periods of rest afterwards lest the heat begin to cause issues for other components of the ship. The Hutts seriously considered his offer, but still refused him, admiring his boldness. He thought for a split second, offering himself to work off the difference doing small time substance and munitions smuggling. They accepted, and even returned him 1,000 credits as an 'investment', unknowingly being influenced by a barrage of pheromones (though the generosity was still a surpise to him.)

Emotionally and physically drained from the treatment he received at the hands of the Hutts as a prisoner, as an asset, he refused to pilot the ship for Lanya. This was the first meaningful disagreement he had had with either of his parents, though his mother was surprisingly in favor of letting him explore his sense of adventure. Ultimately he set out with two of his father's crewmates, a pilot, a 'salesman' and one of the five bouncers, an amateur mechanic.

Things were lucrative, running into a few tight spots, and some refusals to do business (once they found out the leader was a young teenage boy.) He could hardly believe the luck he had, a few times it seemed the crew was heading for mutiny, but they felt a collective sense of responsibility for him. By the age of 17, Lanya had a handful of steady suppliers, and buyers, he was wise to the trade, street smart, and shrewd. However he was largely still sheltered by the crew, never exposed to hostile environs for two reasons, 1. he was a smooth-talker, and charming person. 2. The crew wouldn't allow him along during particularly shady transactions where fights could break out.

Lanya would pass his downtime at home (Zeltros) in clubs. He would meet women, drink, and bet or participate in fighting rings. He became a very flashy duelist, priding himself on his ability to predict his opponents and dance circles around them. He had little to no martial skill, instead preferring to deflect, duck, and dodge his opponents attacks to tire them out and get past their guard usually hoping to end the match by holding his blade up to his opponents neck, or disarm them. His record, however was very spotty, as he couldn't dodge blaster fire and would get stunned often, or overpowered by larger and stronger opponents.

By the age of 18, he had begun to get bored of smuggling finding no sense of adventure in it, and resenting his crew's treatment of him over time. He eventually informed them his new passion was prize fighting. He eventually learned not only to rely on his understanding of body language, but that he had to gauge a person's mental strength in a fight. His style evolved to be more psychologically intimidating employing masterful flourishes and dangerous-looking poses. Eventually he incorporated a blaster-and-blade style using a high powered air pistol slug thrower (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Air_pistol) in tandem with a long knife, or short sword in addition to his dual wield style.

Facing the same opponents more often than he'd like he had to invent new ways to dazzle them, and odd angles to come at. He became a very technical sort of fighter, and focused more on tactics, acrobatics, gymnastic maneuvers, and footwork than actually learning how to go toe to toe. Ultimately he began to bore the crowd and his confidence sank. He fell headlong into a losing streak, and heavy depression, flying out and drifting in orbit for days at a time, sleeping on his ship, doing next to nothing. With a sort of bitter resolve he returned to smuggling alone, and in secret pushing himself into bad deals and confrontations for no apparent reason. He followed this path for about a year, running from nearly every situation. He doubted himself at every step, bitterly reflecting on his past asking himself why he ever thought he could do the things he tried. Wondering why people treated him the way they did all the time.

He tried legitimate work, failing to find heart to uphold his comittments. He tried manual work, leaving unfulfilled and his depression lingered still. He was only 18, already having a mental breakdown, smuggling was the only thing he had ever succeeded at. It seemed like it had all been luck. Upon turning 19 he turned back to smuggling, though only sporadically, he would drift from system to system drinking in cantinas and then moving on. It seemed to him life had become a deep thoughtful silence. He felt automated, doing the same things over and over, while lost in thought.

Eventually he got to a low point in which he realized that he was afraid of dying, the pinnacle of failure. Seeking out a few ideas here and there as he drifted planet to planet he eventually settled on the idea of bounty hunting as a way to get experienced with life threatening situations, assuming once he overcame his fear of death he would understand what he actually meant to himself. What kind of person he actually was, what it was he could do well, and perhaps something to live for.

(As a side note Lanya's feelings are worsened by his force sensitivity, he often confuses them in his mind as some sort of subconscious understanding he has of Kinetic Communication, or a gut feeling. Lanya is deeply sensitive to his feelings, but only acting logically outwardly if a bit over the top, is affected mainly under the surface inhibiting his ability to think quickly, and rationalize adequately.)




Born out of wedlock to a human (Lorrdian) father, and Zeltronian mother, Lanya (Lahn-yUH) was raised by his mother on Lorrdian alongside his grandparents. There was a subtle divide between his grandparents and mother, who they no doubt saw as something of a temptress or succubus to their son. Their son was a spacer, a braggart, a friendly drunk, and a great pilot. His mother was a dancer, partier, free spirit, an even friendlier drunk, and a believer in love. To put it shortly, his father, high off the rush of his first few successful smuggling runs, from Zeltros to several planets, and his abundance of credits led him to a 'fateful' encounter with a beautiful Zeltronian woman. His pockets lined with credits, and his eyes filled with stars, he fell for her very hard, and she for him as well. Not to mention he was drunk, he had enough credits to get her drunk enough times to need her livers replaced several times over. Well, love makes you do crazy things, and they decided to live together. Like literally.. that night. In the morning his mother, a firm believer in love stories as real life occurences, was still keen on the idea, and his father thought he would be out of his mind to refuse a woman as beautiful (and blessed physically..) as her.


A few years went by after their 'marriage' that same year (it was actually an agreement to be "married" and only be with one another,) and a child was born to them. They left Zeltros upon discovering the conception, and Lanya was born on Lorrdian. His name was chosen mainly by his mother, her reasoning for the choice above other options they'd considered was "what if he wants to be a girl" thus the androgynous-sounding name was chose. Lanya never resented this though, he always saw it as a symbol of his parents' acceptance and love.

Lanya's life on Lorrdian was unremarkable, the most important points being 1. his father was always gone, but kept credits coming. 2. his grandparents thought he was working doing building jobs for the empire. 3. Though his mother was a fantastic, loving, and saintlike creature, his grandparents resented her. Likely because she provided no income of her own, but mostly because their son would come back to visit often before he was 'married'. 4. Lanya wasn't too fond of his grandparents (though they liked him,) mainly because their treatment of his mother. At the age of 7 Lanya's grandparents both died of natural causes (no not at the EXACT same time,) they'd spread enough negativity about Lanya's mother to their friends and neighbors, to make living in their home after their death uncomfortable and unwelcoming in many ways.

At age 9, he was moved with his mother to Zeltros. In order to fund their move, his mother began bartending, and giving advice to her customers. Being young and adorable, he was welcome at the bar when it was slow, and when it was not he was allowed to wander the streets nearby. He loved the lights and vibrant nightlife of Zeltron. He felt so at home there, everyone was happy, and it was all real. He could read their body language and they were so unaware of themselves completely lost in bliss, love, happiness, peace. It was a beautiful thing for him to see, and a sharp contrast to the life he'd known before. His dad still worked making smuggling runs, gaining some small notoriety on Zeltron, he would come through to see his family more regularly, but not for long.

Eventually the bouncers at the bar began asking him to do them favors, like "Go hand this to that guy, and give me the credits." it eventually stepped up to something expected of him, and he began to earn pocket cash. His mom continued to work in the bar, her regular customers now became her friends, and, in a way, patients. She was great at giving advice, and surprisingly for her strange love life, she was great at giving relationship advice as well, she was one of the main reasons people would return to this bar they would normally only stumble into drunk, for more drinks when they'd been cut off at the others nearby.

At the age of 15, Lanya was now street smart, but still had yet to get his feet wet in the murky brine of the underworld. He was asked to help one of the bouncers out, he put his hand out expectantly, but was nonchalantly ignored. They had come to know his ability to read body langauge, and used him to discern the truth when conflicts arose in the bar, like who started a fight and if drunk people were intentionally trying to skip out on their tabs, or if people were trying to sell drugs inside the bar (the bouncers took this a bit personally.) They'd learned to treat him differently because they knew, and he didn't appreciate it, but he never paid much attention to it, they liked and needed him for the way he was, and he appreciated that enough.

This time he was to feign an injury and call out for help when given a signal (the spotlight in front of the bar was to be flicked on and off, something no one would notice unless they were looking for it. A split second before the light flicked on and off Lanya was stricken with knots in his stomach and a feeling of intense foreboding. He cringed and fell to his knees, overplaying his genuine pain into his act, he began to make gagging sounds, and sniff loudly as he heard someone coming from down the sidestreet, and he was in an adjacent alley, he hoped this was the right person.

His intense feeling of foreboding became worse.. it became mingled with a sick sense of unprovoked nostalgia, he hated it and small tears welled up in his eyes. He heard the footsteps come to a pause, undoubtedly upon hearing his gagging, sniffing, and whining as if he were throwing up from an excess of alcohol. He looked for a moment at his white hair hanging down the sides of his face wondering, "what exactly am I doing with my life--" the footsteps turned in his direction, and he heard someone speak with urgency "Hey, kid you o--" and a clanging of metal instruments, he refused to allow himself to turn around. No doubt they were assailing this person, and he had no idea who until he replayed the voice in his head, his father's voice.

He tried to remain calm, wiping his eyes and the corners of his mouth, he pushed a handful of hair back before turning around to the empty streetside, and alleyway. He calmly walked back towards the bar, frantically trying to piece things together in his head, no reasonable scenario came to mind, but one thing kept occuring to him. The bouncer who had asked him, was looking around when he asked him.. he wasn't ignoring him, he took it too personally.. also.. he never liked this bouncer as much as the others, he always chewed with his mouth open and made smacking noises with his mouth when he took a drink of things.. (why was that on his mind?)

Lanya's mind was now on high alert as he rounded the corner coming out of the alleyway nearest the bar. He walked up to the bouncer, then leaned on the wall next to him, casually stretching out his hand towards him, palms upturned. The bouncer laughed, and smiled. He was sincere, Lanya could tell. He didn't know why, but it was, and nothing seemed to be worrying him. The bouncer nodded a few times and handed him a handful of credits he had never seen before. "Don't tell ya mom you got those, that's your money, you did good.. thats a lotta money, kid." Lanya nodded a few times smiling softly, pocketing the credits. "Don't let anyone see those either, its dangerous, you know.."

Maybe it was a different guy that orchestrated it, or maybe it wasn't really his dad.. Maybe this guy was just glad Lanya didn't turn around, after all it would have complicated things. A feeling of confusion began to creep into Lanya's mind for the first time of many in his life. He was at a loss for words.. for a next step, he just stood there looking down at the ground, staring as if he could see through the planet to the other side of the galaxy. "Hey, you OK kid.. you don't feel bad or somethin' do ya?" his tone was condescending Lanya continued to stare, unable to remove himself from his trance like catatonia.

"You know you should be happy, whatever you did you got a lot of credits right there, so it doesn't even matter!"

"I'm fifteen, what am I going to buy?" he continued staring.

"Well, if that's the attitude you got you've been doing the wrong thing for the past 7 years, what *have* you been doing with all those credits?"

saving them... he thought before walking away towards the inside of the bar, his head buzzing with negativity as he could hear the bouncer behind him

"Jeez, somethin' messed up about that kid.. weird.."

Lanya woke up the next day, angry and decided he was going to confront the bouncers.

fast forward

Lanya is outside the bar with 3 of the 5 bouncers at the club, one was working the floor, one was checking upstairs, and making sure the office remained off limits to any suspicious people. The remaining 3 were outside, one was keeping the line orderly (the club had gotten a good deal more popular, notice its a club not a bar now.) the other two stood at the door talking, and letting people in once people left, or every now and then.

Baldie, the savage open-mouth chewer was working the door as always, with the 'face tattoo guy' Lanya had always liked, and the guy working the line was 'the one with white hair like me.' About 8 years had come and gone, and he still didn't know any of their names.. he walked straight up to baldie and tugged on his jacket, as soon as he looked into his eyes he said "What did you do to my dad?" stricken momentarily, he then looks at Lanya dumbfounded, his eyes flick to the left, then to Lanya his head tilting back and forth, then to the right and back. Well.. he definitely knows something.

Before he begins to speak: "What.. did you... say?" tattoos looks over, eyes locked on baldie, squinting and full of disbelief. He walks over briskly, he's grabbing baldie by the front of his shirt, people in line are staring and making a big deal of things. "white-hair" makes his way to the front of the line as tattoos backs baldie up with a malicious gait, and slams him against the wall harder than a 1-inch punch. He started looking dizzy.

He became more confused than he was already as "white-hair" covertly slid a stunner into his palm from his pocket and uppercutted baldie in the stomach, with a visible jolt, he was out. Out faster than last month's newest fashion from a Zeltron's wardrobe. 'Tattoos' slung baldie over his shoulder with surprising ease, and made his way through the front door, motioning for Lanya to follow him with a subtle swiping hand gesture aimed at the floor, "white hair" nodded and could be heard brushing off curious bystanders with threats of similar treatment, or being denied access to the club for life. "You want next?" "I got all night to stand out here." "What you lookin' at, hmm? What did you see?"

They deftly wove their way through the crowd, hands in pockets to thwart any pickpocket attempts. The 'office guy' was standing talking into a small headset nodding repeatedly, and waving them through into the short unlit hallway. I'd never been inside here... back here. Lanya thought to himself. This day is turning out strange.. When they passed through the yellow door, after the bouncer pressed a six-digit code into the keypad, they were immediately greeted by a cool-blue lighting system, dimmed down, and a fish tank, on either side of which were two comfortable looking four-seater benches flanked by small tables. (one of which had a bottle of some glowing blue liquid on ice.)

They walked around the tank with Lanya following Tattoos closely, who pulled out a security card and slid it into the scanner, opening the next door. Inside was a well-lit white room, with glossy walls, a single white glossy chair in the middle, a glossy white desk at the side opposite the door, and about 6 monitors on the wall. A keyboard lie underneath them with some sort of ergonomic touchpad, both glossy white, accented with white lights.

Aside from that the room was bare, there were no visible wires or any sort of mechanism for the light to turn on and off. The bouncer walked over to the chair and 'sat' Baldie on the chair uncaringly, his head lolling about. He began to walk over to the desk and his head popped up and he stopped mid step turning around, "Oh!" Lanya's eyes widened, he was so confused about this all, he just wanted to know what was going on. "Go close the other door for me, please." Lanya's brow furrowed and he blinked a few times looking downwards as the bouncer turned his back on him. What if he just wanted to get me in here.. what if I turn around and he does something to me.. what if he's going to kill me? He couldn't hit a kid outside, someone would have definitely done something.


He then ducked as if someone were going to swing at him from behind and turned around in one motion, seeing nothing he quietly ran for the door his eyes wild searching for any possible assailants in the dimly lit room with a feeling similar to the way he feels when he wants to get off his bed at night, but is worried something might grab his ankles from underneath. He swerved around the fish tank and got to the door expecting Office Guy to be blocking his path, already preparing to slide through his legs, and shout for help. No one was at the door, Office Guy was at the end of the hallway still talking into his earpiece-headset thing, and nodding (though less frequently.) Lanya felt a bit safer, and vaguely silly, but flicked his head around as if to catch someone sneaking around. Nothing. Why did he have this weak sense he was going to be caught off guard? Why would he act on it so strangely and suddenly?


Putting aside whatever got that thought into his head, he decided to just close the door. His mom was nearby, surely she saw him following the bouncer. Surely she would come if something were amiss. He pressed the pad on the right side of door frame and the door slid closed from above with a satisfying hiss and airy-clicking sound. He turned back and began walking towards the room, his arms swinging slowly, as he fixed his gaze on the ground in front of him.

There was a hard-to-describe pressure mounting in the air. It felt as if Lanya were walking among dry vapors on the inside of a pressurized aerosol can. He felt a faint cold.. sort of burning sensation on his shoulders that followed along his spine. He wanted to cry, and the more he tried to suppress it, the more vigorously it writhed within him. He felt as if his brain were malfunctioning, maybe he was dying? He cupped his palms to his eyes sinking his fingers into his long, white, sideswept bangs. Trying to let his tears out as he continued towards the room. Behind him all the small aquatic organisms had gathered into a crowd, staring at him. Maybe upstairs a few patrons holding back similar thorns in their hearts began to feel a welling up of emotion, blaming the alcohol for making them so mopey.


It didn't matter, Lanya's eyes dried up instead of letting the pressure out from inside, and he made it in the room within a few seconds (though it had felt like minutes.) As much as he felt sorry for himself he still couldn't forsake his preliminary defenses. He stood up a little straighter, but remained casual and stepped into the room, standing at the entrance. He stood at the entrance to the room trying to force the feeling that he was 'over it,' and an image of a fantastic fountain surrounded by smaller fountains popped into his mind for a split second. He felt offended at his visualization taking it to mean that ignoring his feelings was good, or that they were insignificant any ways. He began wrestling with his own subconscience who then yielded another interpetation.

Perhaps it isn't that my feelings aren't good enough.. or important enough, perhaps it is that they are too overwhelming to take on all at once. How does that even make sense? How did you even get that. Whatever.. Without realizing it consciously he got beyond his initial frustration, and debilitating sadness. He even overcame the geyser of irrational anger that had subsequently arisen from the depths of his subconscious space (almost like some sort of cosmic scale within him switched from one side to the other.) His resultant attitude would develop into a fix-it-all solution for any problems he had... and eventually when it didn't completely work, he would turn apathy into reckless and sensation-seeking behavior.

But back to Lanya, 15 years old, confused and in a strange situation. Lanya stared at the sheen on Baldie's head, realizing the entire roof of the room seemed to be one massive light, as he wondered what Baldie was thinking of, what he was seeing and feeling he slowly began to perk up. Lanya looked to Tattoos to see what he would do and Baldie fell back into his unresponsive state. Maybe as a result of his odd mental exchange with himself he felt a small measure of invigoration and playfulness. He walked up towards Baldie.

A sudden loud hissing sound ripped through the silence and sent a massive jolt up Lanya's spine sending his neck and chin into themselves and bunching up all the fat underneath them into an unflattering form as the rest of his body straightened out into a perfect line. In that moment through his half closed eyes his attention was directed to the wall on his left.

Lanya's heart rate had spiked so quickly that it felt as if he had finished running around the block, the wall to his left began to displace itself a few inches back, and started to slide upwards into the ceiling revealing a small elevator! Lanya sucked a soft ragged breath, with his hand on his chest as Tattoos turned around to meet his glance. "Did that scared ya?" He manage a soft smile that felt like laughter "Why ya so tense?" his smile evaporated into the dry vapors pervading the room. He walked over to Baldie and Lanya saw in his body language that he looked as if he were going to smack him over the head, but he didn't, he just reached around his right side and slung him over his shoulders again. "Let's take the elevator."

Lanya nodded and began walking toward and into the elevator as Tattoos readjusted Baldie. The interior of the elevator was cylindrical and of brushed metal, the roof was domed, and its entire form was emitting a soft white light. He could hear the hissing of the entrance to the room shutting as Tattoos made his way into the elevator and turned around, almost bringing Lanya face-to-face with his passenger.

Tattoos pulled out his security card and started waving it around the surface of the elevator where a keypad might be until a soft glow came from behind what Lanya had thought was metal. A hidden interface..? Tattoos held it there for a second and swiped it down. The doors shut and the light drifted dowards about an inch or two. As the lift began to move downward Lanya stared at Baldie's features more closely than he ever had before. Baldie was somewhat attractive, like most Zeltron were, but upon close-quarters inspection his features seemed too real... his skin seemed greasy and porous. Lanya's eyebrow raised as his mouth tightened and curled downwards. He blinked and turned his eyes elsewhere as the lift stopped and the doors slid open in front of them.

They walked into a new room with a similar setup as the one above it, though there was only one huge screen on the wall and the room seemed to be made of concrete, and was dimly lit, though from where was unclear. As they stepped out of the elevator Lanya noticed there was a holocommunication hub in the center of the room that Tattoo's had been obstructing from his vision, and the roof seemed a lot higher, if there was one as shadows hid it from view. Upon stepping into the room the large screen's inert surface was washed over with a dark green hue. The Holo hub sprinkled to life as a few lights popped on in a random order Lanya felt somewhat safe in his dingy environs.

Tattoos walked over to the wall to their right, directly across from the huge monitor on the wall and opened yet another door, he readjusted Baldie as he dragged a chair out from the room, and set it near the Holo hub dropping him into it. As Lanya took a few steps closer, his eyes adjusting to the dark, he could make out the silhouette of what he imagined were blaster rifles and pistols on a specialized rack in the adjacent room.




KILLS:


BOUNTIES COLLECTED:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
Drinking Troubles:

His first appearance in our Star Wars universe.

Making his name: The Heist - Planning and Scouting phase.
 
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I think Zeltrons are just called Zeltrons, not Zeltronians!
 

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I like the mixed heritage here. Personally, I think you picked two species that compliment each other pretty well for a mix race. But that's just me.

About the only real problem I have with the profile [from a cursory glance point of view at least] are the walls of text. Especially in the first half of his bio. Try adding some double spacing in there to break things up and make it easier to read. Other than that, this guy seems pretty eccentric. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. :)
 

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If thats a work in progress, slap me in a dress and call me betty!

But that being said, I feel obligated to post this;
Green Ranger said:
SWRP does not accept the posting of incomplete or WIP profiles without consent from the administration team. You have many resources at your own disposal to copy and paste code to and from the site, and SWRP's Profiles board is not here to cater to incomplete works - it is for complete character submissions to be used in the Role-Play. We set incredibly lenient minimum parameters for profiles, and you are expected to be adhering to them from the moment you post your profile. Failure to do so can and will result in the locking of incomplete profiles, and repeat offenders risk harsher penalties. Thanks.
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Thanks so much for the replies please don't delete it just yet I'll fix I when I get off work at midnight!! Really thanks for the replies though (,:
 

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Thanks so much for the replies please don't delete it just yet I'll fix I when I get off work at midnight!! Really thanks for the replies though (,:

No one would ever delete your character - you have whatever time you need to make any edits to it. =]
 

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I'm really trying to push this through as fast as I can, but I'm having a hard time working out some of the details. I call into my mind for the next part of the story and get no response, I have done some though.
 

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Hey Sess, I've got a heist OOC sign up going and since you're new (so am I) I think it would be a good major character development point for both of us. If you're interested, just find it in the general RP OOC forums and sign up, I'll be happy to have you along.
 

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Hey Sess, I've got a heist OOC sign up going and since you're new (so am I) I think it would be a good major character development point for both of us. If you're interested, just find it in the general RP OOC forums and sign up, I'll be happy to have you along.

I'm in! Gonna read your character sheet and stuff before, and then I'll go look for the thread. I need a small distraction from writing this bio. :)
 

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Oh man, this looks really good from what I've read.
Make sure you post on the sign up thread!
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?51711-Hutt-Cartel-sign-up-thread

(,: Thanks so much, I was just looking around the site thinking how crappy mine seemed in comparison, ehehehe I guess I wrote a bit of myself into Lanya the way I put myself down.

I applied in the thread not too long ago, I'm locked and loaded, ready to go. Just waiting on approval, touching up the last part of my Bio, and the first thread I got involved in to kick off. :GL
 

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This is a great first character! Some larger pics wouldn't hurt, but other than that it's all very good. Also, I love the Ferrari
 

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This is a great first character! Some larger pics wouldn't hurt, but other than that it's all very good. Also, I love the Ferrari

Thanks! I think it suits Lanya pretty well, to a degree. I wonder though, what model should i say it is? Is it possible to modify a ship to the point where it seems like a different one entirely? I like it, but I would prefer if I could keep it canon. Ofc, ICly Lanya doesn't even know what type of ship it is and isn't too concerned about it, but he'll need to repair it eventually.
 

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Thanks! I think it suits Lanya pretty well, to a degree. I wonder though, what model should i say it is? Is it possible to modify a ship to the point where it seems like a different one entirely? I like it, but I would prefer if I could keep it canon. Ofc, ICly Lanya doesn't even know what type of ship it is and isn't too concerned about it, but he'll need to repair it eventually.

You can make a Tech write-up for it. PM me and I can help you write it up, if you'd like.
 

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Posting this here so I can reference it in my signature, as the size is limited to 2500 characters.
Ok just to clear things up for you guys, you can use this information if you like, but if you find it too complicated you can feel free to ignore it, though its there. For Lanya, body language and his mental state are very important, his profession, and skills hinges on them. Even in battle he's always playing a game on the mental plane, as that's his forte. SO I've color coded everything for you all, nice and neat. Here's a key to my system (its easy I promise!)
Orange is used for talking

This is used for body language or spoken language in which Lanya is attempting to control the situation or influence those watching or listening to him through his kinetic communication, or his Zeltron pheromones. I will put the spoken text in this color, Im assuming it'll be obvious whether im yelling speaking or whispering, if it seems unclear I will make a point to note it RPly. When you see this color, you can take a guess at what he's trying to do and act on it ICly however you like, but please keep in mind not everyone is a master of body langauge, I don't expect him to have exactly the desired outcome every time, as it has a great deal to do with each person's individual psychology (but I do expect people to misinterpret my actual intentions sometimes as I won't usually state them plainly. have fun with it, lets make something interesting.

This light blue is used for his internal thoughts, and inner monologue that I feel a force sensitive would potentially be able to pick up on. These are fully formed thoughts spoken in his head, not just images and emotions. (though to force sensitives not proficient in this part of the force it may come across to THEM as images and received emotions i guess.)

This dark blue is his force sensitivity acting up. I'll be describing these intimations in confusing or too-straightforward-for-him-to-believe ways until he realizes or is told he's force sensitive. He will likely not act on these intimations against players in an unfair way (not likely, he will NOT) but against NPC's maybe, if it helps shape him in a meaningful way. sometimes I'll leave these open ended for any takers like here, it could be a maid asking for room service, or something else, PC or NPC. That's all I have for now!
 
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For your ship just have the name and have it be a link to it's tech screen.
 

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Posting this here so I can reference it in my signature, as the size is limited to 2500 characters.
Ok just to clear things up for you guys, you can use this information if you like, but if you find it too complicated you can feel free to ignore it, though its there. For Lanya, body language and his mental state are very important, his profession, and skills hinges on them. Even in battle he's always playing a game on the mental plane, as that's his forte. SO I've color coded everything for you all, nice and neat. Here's a key to my system (its easy I promise!)
Red is used for yelling
Orange is used for talking in a normal tone
Yellow is used for whispering.

Ok those are the "out loud" ones.

This light blue is used for his internal thoughts, and inner monologue that I feel a force sensitive would potentially be able to pick up on. These are fully formed thoughts spoken in his head, not just images and emotions. (though to force sensitives not proficient in this part of the force it may come across to THEM as images and received emotions i guess.)

This is used for body language or spoken language in which Lanya is attempting to control the situation or influence those watching or listening to him through his kinetic communication, or his Zeltron pheromones. I will put the spoken text in this color, Im assuming it'll be obvious whether im yelling speaking or whispering, if it seems unclear I will make a point to note it RPly. When you see this color, you can take a guess at what he's trying to do and act on it ICly however you like, but please keep in mind not everyone is a master of body langauge, I don't expect him to have exactly the desired outcome every time, as it has a great deal to do with each person's individual psychology (but I do expect people to misinterpret my actual intentions sometimes as I won't usually state them plainly. have fun with it, lets make something interesting.

This dark blue is his force sensitivity acting up. I'll be describing these intimations in confusing or too-straightforward-for-him-to-believe ways until he realizes or is told he's force sensitive. He will likely not act on these intimations against players in an unfair way (not likely, he will NOT) but against NPC's maybe, if it helps shape him in a meaningful way. sometimes I'll leave these open ended for any takers like here, it could be a maid asking for room service, or something else, PC or NPC. That's all I have for now!
Why don't you... uh.... use prose to describe how he is speaking with those around him?

  • "What the hell are you doing?!" he yelled at his idiotic counterpart.
  • Using soft, whispered tones he added, "You better watch out."

Or use colour to accentuate/differentiate dialogue from descriptor.

  • "What the hell are you doing?!" he yelled at his idiotic counterpart.
  • Using soft, whispered tones he added, "You better watch out."

Having five or six colours in your post is just going to get damned confusing for anyone roleplaying with you.
 

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Why don't you... uh.... use prose to describe how he is speaking with those around him?

  • "What the hell are you doing?!" he yelled at his idiotic counterpart.
  • Using soft, whispered tones he added, "You better watch out."

Or use colour to accentuate/differentiate dialogue from descriptor.

  • "What the hell are you doing?!" he yelled at his idiotic counterpart.
  • Using soft, whispered tones he added, "You better watch out."

Having five or six colours in your post is just going to get damned confusing for anyone roleplaying with you.

Thanks for the input. I try to keep my posts as small as I can though, because I have a habit of writing a LOT, and I'm trying to cut corners in a sense (its not as a bad as it sounds, I promise!) I'll keep it in mind if people start to complain, but I think they're pretty obvious. Especially since I regularly indicate what they are through context clues, its just a secondary measure, like I said no one has to pay any attention to it, but it's there if they'd like to look deeper into my dialogue.
 

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No one will mind long posts, but posts with different bits of text in different colours can be a source of headache. Normally people use different colours to indicate different characters are speaking, there can be a lot of confusion with this implementation.
 
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