Supreme Meme Commander
- Feb 13, 2012
- Reaction score
Edited to make the criminal sections more low key, my ambiguity in the original writing made it seem far more high profile than intended.Hi, Nor'baal. We need to fix some things before I can further review your profile.
- This network he's built for himself as a 'Criminal Consultant' needs to be addressed. If he is directing companies to take over their competitors, hide their money and even hire contract killers, he's built a network for himself that would earn him a reputation that exceeds 'unknown' which is where all new characters must begin.
- Credits aren't a problem, necessarily, but I'd also like to amend the part about his parents winning the lottery and him stealing off with the credits, as this also feeds into helping him establish the network I mentioned above.
Please make the following edits and tag me for review. Thanks.