Darius Asmenys

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NAME: Darius Asmenys

FACTION: The Jedi Order (pending)

RANK: Initiate (pending)

SPECIES: Red Sith

AGE: 17

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 6'1"

WEIGHT: 190 pounds

EYES: Yellow eyes (natural, not because of the dark side)

HAIR: Jet Black

SKIN: Crimson Red

CREDITS: None

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scar on the left-side of his face. Lightsaber mark/burn from earlier in his life. Also, unlike most red sith, Darius happened to be right handed.

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes


STRENGTH: 7/10.
Trained by his father since the age of 8, he could pick up a lightsaber, most of Darius' training was focused on the art of combat and assassination. That involved lots of weight training and general exercise.

DEXTERITY: 5/10
Darius' has been trained to be nimble throughout his combat training. However, the size of his muscles and his height in general have eliminated most chances of being truly sneaky. He can be stealthy with lots of work.

CONSTITUTION: 7/10
Due to his training and his constant exercise, he is very physically fit. Despite the abuse he has suffered at the hands of his father. He eats well and is very well of.

INTELLIGENCE: 6/10
Darius can reason and form strategic plans on the battlefield. He also is very well spoken. That being said, he is no genius. He won't be finding the cure for spice addiction, that's for sure.

WISDOM: 3/10
Darius is a soldier without a battle to his name. He was trained to be proficient in a combat situation and in real life, but all in all, he has lived a sheltered life.

CHARISMA: 4/10
Not exactly suave or persuasive, Darius uses intimidation if he has to use anything. He can carry conversations, but he does not possess, nor has he ever tried to work on, a silver tongue.

FORCE POWERS:
Telekinesis (Taught by his father)
Force Speed (Taught by his father)

SKILLS:
Piloting: Another skill trained by his father. He isn't extraordinary, but he can stil fly with imperial pilots... in theory. His skills are mostly simulation based.

Marksmanship: For emergencies. Darius has been taught by his father to use a blaster rifle. Give him a pistol though, and his aim will most likely be off by a few leagues.

Language: Darius is fluent in Basic and has a good understanding of Ancient Sith, due to his lineage and his father's lessons.

(More to come later)

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-cho: Like all acolytes of the Sith, Darius was trained in the beginners lightsaber form. And has since had it honed into him by his father. He was to learn another form after mastering shii-cho.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+Loyal
+Physically Strong
+Determined
+Strong Moral Compass

-Does not suffer defeat well
-Quick to anger
-Serious Daddy issues

(More to come)

GEAR:
-One Red-Crystaled Lightsaber
-Acolyte training robes and armor

SHIP:
Does not have a ship of his own

DROIDS:
No droid either

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Darius is a peaceful person. He's never really cared much for violence and war in general. Not exactly in agreement with the Sith mantra. Darius is a peaceful person inherently, but many factors have come to affect that, throughout his training, he generally feels that peace is the answer to life's issues, but thanks to his training, he understands combat can be necessary.

Darius has a subconscious need to prove himself. He always strove for his father's approval in the early stages of his life, and still attempts to prove himself now. He does not take failure well as a result, and feels terrible if/when he fails at most given tasks.

(More to come later)

BIOGRAPHY:
Born to a Sith Master named Kraujas Asmenys and his apprentice, a Crusader named Vilione Monsula, Darius was born into the Sith lifestyle. His parents, both of the Red Sith and among the last of their kind, created a child not out of love, but out of both a desire for both the continuation of their species, and for a powerful resource in their future. Darius was born into a privileged life when it came to status in the Imperium. Born to two established Sith with comfortable lives... As far as Sith go.

Darius was the youngest sibling his family. His older brother, Zudikas, trained alongside him. Though four years older then Darius, and further along in his training, Zudikas was often neglected by their parents. As their parents were concerned with their overall power, they had both of the boys tested for their medi-chlorian counts. Both were force-sensitive, but alas, Darius had a much higher count then Zudikas. As such, he was the favoured child. This created an antagonistic relationship between the two brothers.

Life wasn't easy, however. Sith lifestyle was no walk in the park. As the "future" of his family, Darius was worked like a dog. Through brutal training sessions, he became stronger and stronger. His relationship with his father was... strenuous. He was mostly absent from his life, mostly being raised by his trainers and his mother... When SHE wasn't busy. Although the two never really seemed to care for Darius. His father became very aggressive towards him, and rather abusive.

One moment in particular that is among Darius' most traumatic memories was, after not seeing his father for nearly a year, he was invited to a training room to spar with him. Unsurprisingly, he was totally annihilated in his fight. His training in saber combat was extensive, at the direction of his father, but he was no match for the abilities of a sith master. This fight resulted in a large scar across the left side of his face, and a painful lesson from his father.

Darius was found to be the black sheep of the sith. Early on, despite the lessons that were being sowed into him, Darius had an inherent sense that he wasn't right for the Sith. He simply felt like a peaceful person. This was exacerbated when he reached the age of 13. Darius met a girl who was working in the hangars. She was a much older woman who was enlisted to become an imperial pilot. She was called Lakoma Dian, and Darius became very good friends with her.

Years went by, and they kept up their corespondance. Darius eventually began to develop feelings for her. He was inspired by her very existance. She joined the Imperial Army with peaceful intentions, and Darius found that remarkable. His contact with her was eventually discovered by his brother, Zudikas. Though this was unknown to Darius.

At the age of 17, Darius was in a lightsaber training session with his brother and a few other Sith. The session was progressing normally. Darius besting Zudikas in some way, etc. half way through, Lakoma was dragged in, in shockcuffs. Zudikas had told their father about Lakoma, and he had looked into her. It turned out she was a double agent for the Rebellion, feeding secrets to the Rebels since the day she joined the Imperial Army. She was brought their at the request of Darius' father. He was commanded to execute Lakoma in the name of the Empire. Darius flat out refused, having been taught the virtues of peace by Lakoma. Desperate for attention and praise, as well as a distain for those who went against the Sith, Zudikas decapitated her without a second thought. Darius was horrified. He simply stood in a state of absolute shock; the woman he loved had been killed by his own brother in front of his very eyes.

This was the final straw for Darius. He couldn't live with the Sith anymore.

Two weeks later, in the middle of the night, he snuck out of his room in the sith academy, took with him his training gear and his lightsaber. He made his way to the docking bay, to the transport that Lakoma was flying before she had been... killed. It was under guard, under watch for any more traitors to the empire. Darius didn't care, he had to leave Korriban and leave the Imperium behind. Using what his father taught him, he used force speed to take a guard by surprise, and knocked him unconscious by slamming him into the side of the ship.Putting his theoretical flying training to the test, Darius stole the ship and escaped Korriban.

Now he seeks a new life, away from the Sith and the Imperium

(RP will commence directly after this point. More detail and story will be added once I am not trapped on my phone)


KILLS:
None

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE-PLAYS:
None yet

[I intend to have it work in the sense that Darius will encounter the Jedi sometime after his departure from the Imperium. Also, due to his constant focus on training, he isn't aware about much of the goings on in the Imperium politically or in regards to the wars. To eliminate any claim of metagaming to give the jedi an advantage.]

(Also, this was all done from my phone. Will be more detailed and prettier once I have computer access... hopefully :) )
 

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Any critique is welcome and please let me know if there are any issues. To be clear, I confirmed with Weiss about his backstory a few weeks ago, and he gave me the okay :9:
 

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I do wonder how the NJO will act to a Sith.
 

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I love this PC, I love the idea of a Sith leaving the Imperium to seek out the Jedi Order. I don't really have much of a critique other than the fact that his bio seems to be a bit cliche but that is sure to change as you RP him and develop his personality and history more over time. If you're interested in having him meet a Jedi Knight that won't hold his race or his background against him Jade (in my sig) would be more then interest in meeting him at some point. I'm also interested in how his revenge story will be played against his peaceful nature, I'm definitely going to be reading some of the threads you do with him, and hopefully joining a couple along the way as I plan on Jade having a revenge story of her own.​
 

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I like it except for one detail. The Sith species became extinct a few thousand years before the Battle of Yavin, by around 2000 BBY, the only actual remnants of Sith was the result of heavy interbreeding. Even then, the traits of the species were practically gone.

Of course I could just be missing some other information, and be wrong about the extinction of the species.
 

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I like it except for one detail. The Sith species became extinct a few thousand years before the Battle of Yavin, by around 2000 BBY, the only actual remnants of Sith was the result of heavy interbreeding. Even then, the traits of the species were practically gone.

Of course I could just be missing some other information, and be wrong about the extinction of the species.

There are a few Red Sith around the RP, but they're quite rare and, if I'm not mistaken, require the approval of the Sith FL to be played.
 

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I do wonder how the NJO will act to a Sith.

Precisely what I wanted to explore with this new character. One who comes from a background and family dedicated to darkness find redemption and acceptance among the Jedi.

I love this PC, I love the idea of a Sith leaving the Imperium to seek out the Jedi Order. I don't really have much of a critique other than the fact that his bio seems to be a bit cliche but that is sure to change as you RP him and develop his personality and history more over time. If you're interested in having him meet a Jedi Knight that won't hold his race or his background against him Jade (in my sig) would be more then interest in meeting him at some point. I'm also interested in how his revenge story will be played against his peaceful nature, I'm definitely going to be reading some of the threads you do with him, and hopefully joining a couple along the way as I plan on Jade having a revenge story of her own.​

Thanks! Yeah, I'm trying to avoid cliche as much as possible but it can be difficult at times. I'll add more to spice things up and revamp his story once I have a dedicated computer, instead of just a phone. In the interrim, I'd be down to RP sometime! Darius will need some way to get in contact with the Jedi, as he is not necessarily actively seeking them out.

There are a few Red Sith around the RP, but they're quite rare and, if I'm not mistaken, require the approval of the Sith FL to be played.

I've talked with Weiss and he gave me clearance to go for a Red Sith character. I wanted to try having a character who's species is so incredibly linked to the dark side find the path of the light.
 

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I love this PC, I love the idea of a Sith leaving the Imperium to seek out the Jedi Order. I don't really have much of a critique other than the fact that his bio seems to be a bit cliche but that is sure to change as you RP him and develop his personality and history more over time. If you're interested in having him meet a Jedi Knight that won't hold his race or his background against him Jade (in my sig) would be more then interest in meeting him at some point. I'm also interested in how his revenge story will be played against his peaceful nature, I'm definitely going to be reading some of the threads you do with him, and hopefully joining a couple along the way as I plan on Jade having a revenge story of her own.​

Where's my love? I went looking for the Jedi and had a bomb go off in my face as a result! Hmph. How rude ;P

I like him from what I've read so far. Seems pretty in tact and you have a lot of potential for interesting story play due to the race thing (once it's sorted out).
 

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Where's my love? I went looking for the Jedi and had a bomb go off in my face as a result! Hmph. How rude ;P

I like him from what I've read so far. Seems pretty in tact and you have a lot of potential for interesting story play due to the race thing (once it's sorted out).

Thanks V! Darius still needs a lot of work and I need to iron out the rough edges, but that will come in time. I wanted to do something original with the Sith Pureblood Jedi angle :)
 

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Where's my love? I went looking for the Jedi and had a bomb go off in my face as a result! Hmph. How rude ;P

You should have come to Jade then lol. :P

Also Prazutis, I have an idea on how he could meet Jade, but I doubt you want to wait that long to have him join the Order. I'm planing on having Jade get captured by Marf's Sith [thread=42609]Satoryu[/thread] during the Battle of Naboo threads. Me and Marf have already discussed it and I was going to have Jade escape on her own somehow, maybe she could have found her way to the hanger and noticed Darius attacking the guards, perhaps Jade was intending to contact Lakoma to get out of Imperium space but ends up stowing away on her ship when you leave.​
 
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You should have come to Jade then lol. :P

Also Prazutis, I have an idea on how he could meet Jade, but I doubt you want to wait that long to have him join the Order. I'm planing on having Jade get captured by Marf's Sith [thread=42609]Satoryu[/thread] during the Battle of Naboo threads. Me and Marf have already discussed it and I was going to have Jade escape on her own somehow, maybe she could have found her way to the hanger and noticed Darius attacking the guards, perhaps Jade was intending to contact Lakoma to get out of Imperium space but ends up stowing away on her ship when you leave.​

Funny you should say that. It is not Darius' initial intention to seek out the Jedi. He is still a Sith and has been indoctrinated with the belief that the Jedi are nothing but crazed rebels and terrorists. Though perhaps by encountering one in the flesh, his opinions would be changed. He doesn't like the Jedi (or at least the idea of them) now, but he knows for sure that the Sith and the Imperium are wrong.

So he'd need to encounter a Jedi who'd be willing to invite him to join the Order.
 

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I do actually have one quarrel with this.

Two actually.

One) Wouldn't he be an Indie then? If he's not directly starting with the Jedi (hasn't found them, thus hasn't joined them) then he's an indie, ya? Which is fine. Just for clarification purposes.

And Seven) He's an Acolyte. The guards should easily be able to handle an uppity student. May I recommend Raith aiding in his escape, or dismissal? It would be a lot easier and a lot more believable to write him off as 'dead' than saying he somehow managed to slip passed armed guards undetected and took one out without others noticing. If you agree, we can discuss finer details over PM so as not to clog up this page.

That's just my two cents of course, and I'm not saying an Acolyte COULDN'T take on a guard. But...it's one of those things I read and go "Wow...literally everything must have been perfect for this to occur." Lol.
 

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I do actually have one quarrel with this.

Two actually.

One) Wouldn't he be an Indie then? If he's not directly starting with the Jedi (hasn't found them, thus hasn't joined them) then he's an indie, ya? Which is fine. Just for clarification purposes.

And Seven) He's an Acolyte. The guards should easily be able to handle an uppity student. May I recommend Raith aiding in his escape, or dismissal? It would be a lot easier and a lot more believable to write him off as 'dead' than saying he somehow managed to slip passed armed guards undetected and took one out without others noticing. If you agree, we can discuss finer details over PM so as not to clog up this page.

That's just my two cents of course, and I'm not saying an Acolyte COULDN'T take on a guard. But...it's one of those things I read and go "Wow...literally everything must have been perfect for this to occur." Lol.

You raise good points. I'll PM you about them.
 

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Good character Praz. I am interested in seeing how the Jedi will react to a Red Sith.
 
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Glad so many people are as interested in the Jedi's attitude towards a Sith Pureblood as I am

I agree. I personally think that despite the Sith Purebloods being naturally dark sided, an individual's opinions can change. Furthermore, it has been thousands of years, and the Sith Purebloods are practically on the brink of extinction so that can be an influential factor in some Pureblood changing their views.

I honestly think that you did a good job on creating a unique character Praz. I am definitely going to be watching how this character progresses. :)
 

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Accepted as a Padawan. Please check out the sign-up thread. :)
 
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