A Lake full of tears(Martin's Bogan training)

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He had arrived. After spending half a year in that shithole Tatooine, he was finally noticed by a Dark Jedi and brought here, into the Dark Jedi Temple. "This place better be good. Or at least better than Tatooine." Martin Lake was thinking, as he was walking down the deep dark corridors of the Temple. When he had reached the room where he was supposed to meet his master, he found the room empty. Pfft. Late. Martin sat on a chair and began thinking deeply.
 

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His master smiled as he hid under the shadows, and has hidden his force and presents from any force user for the time being, he examined his student watching him closely.The boy Would soon meet the toughest training ever giving to a dark Jedi of the Bogan recruit. If he passed that might he was the few student that made it alive, Unlike his last which died. At the jumping challenge.

(My Grammar tremble I know but hey, I'm willing to train you people.)
 

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After about 20 minutes had passed, Martin awoke from his trance-like state, and looked around. The room still looked empty... something's wrong. Master Sithis was late for quite a long time. Martin stood up. "Is he even going to come?" He began walking around the room, desiring to begin his training quickly. That's when he noticed something strange in the room...
 

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His presents and force was unknown but the foots steps can be still heard, as he lurked deeper into the shadows he then, would examine him once more to make his move. His footsteps were silent once he had moved. Yet he examined quickly.Scanning him radically taking any form of needed info needed about him.Before making his appearance.
 

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Martin looked around. "Something is seriously wrong here..." He thought and sat down. "It's as if there's someone else in the room... but I don't hear, see nor feel anything... damn it. Maybe this is a test? Might as well try this out." Martin stood up and said I know you are here. Come out this instant!
 

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He, sighed and still remained in the shadows, he can't sense his force or presents, this was a good thing seeing as Sithis was using a technique to prevent other Force users from seeing where he was, he lurked even deeper in the shadows and just, watched, this was not a test he was of course going to come out until the idiot made a shout. Then he made it worst for his part he must wait longer now. Due to the outburst.
 

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Martin waited for a few minutes, and when nothing happened, he sat down again. "There's no one here. I must be going crazy. He thought and began meditating deeply again.
 

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He came out in a blur and appeared in front of the boy"Morning, Student how does the day, Go Brother Martin."He said said in a mocking voice."I am your master. Call me Master Sithis, I would be a Dark Master by now but, the order is running low or people that are able to train for a specialization, But Of course I am a former Shade Master and I am of master level. Anyways Let's move quickly to introduction, tell me about your back ground.. Let me guess you have the same damn helling story everyone I trained had Your parents or someone you loved were killed by the Jedi, I simply think you were brain washed."He laughed."After that we are moving on to combat Then the code, force use age, Lightsaber creation, Form studying, Lightsaber advanced training, Maybe History of the Bogan, and More force usage, In depth of the code and lightsaber combat plus more."he said slowly.
 

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Martin grinned. "So I was right... someone was here." He thought, and listened to his master's speech. Then laughed. First of all, there are no people I love. There's only people I respect and people I hate. My parents are alive and well, they come from a rich genealogy in Coruscant. In other words, I used to be a rich, spoiled brat before running away. But my goal is to kill them someday... for the fun of it. He laughed again and stood up. So, Master Sithis... shall we begin or is there more you want to know?
 

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He looked at him, and sighed"I would Like to hear, more at least I have one decent history without someone saying the Jedi Killed them, which I know they would not unless it is on rare socially."He said slowly.
 

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You want to hear more of my story? Alright. Martin said and began walking around the room. So, yeah... I grew up in a rich family, living in a big mansion. Everything I would want, I would get. I was a spoiled brat. But then... when the time came for me to begin school, I wanted to be home schooled. But my parents said I needed to "socialise", and put me in a normal school. Needless to say, because of my differences from the other students, I was constantly made fun of and bullied. I tried to ignore it as much as possible, but it wouldn't stop. For 7 years this went on... until I snapped. I murdered everyone in my class, including the teacher, and ran away. While in exile, I realized that I was able to kill them because I'm Force Sensitive. Then I joined the Dark Jedi. Martin turned around to face his master. Any questions?
 

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He shook his hand and tossed him a sword, while he held two in his hand."This comes after introduction I do this with every student, begin when ready."He said slowly.
 

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Martin catched the sword. "He wants to spar with me now?" He thought and said But... I've never even held a sword in my life. I don't know how to fight with a sword.
 

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He looked at his student and spoke"Is something the matter?"He asked slowly surely he knew how to fight right? Or maybe not seeing as he was a spoiled child before he can buy a dueling teacher"What's the matter Kid?"He said slowly.
 

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No... it's nothing. Martin said and lifted the sword. "Alright... let's do this." He thought and moved closer to his master. Then he rose his sword and attacked Sithis straightforward, aiming for the head.
 

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He blocked the sword easily without putting effect, and tired a force kick to him if he was get hit then he would be sent flying if his blade came back to hit Sithis then he would swiftly move his other blade and block it, if that was done then he would extend his foot so if he would to get hit he would be sent to a wall to cause more damage and maybe a crater. His student had a lack of swordsmanship skills which was bad and Sithis had to teach him, later on in the time of there training.
 

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Martin was pushed back by the force kick, but didn't fall down. "Damn it... I thought this would happen. After all, I've never fought with a sword before." He thought and began attacking again. This time, he tried to make an uppercut to the chest from a distance, hoping to jump back in time in case Sithis would attack with his second sword.
 

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Eying him, he jumped back evading his attack and if he continued to swung at him he would block it, and block till his student was tired, never in his life has he seen an un trained dark jedi of Bogan even at beginner level. he sighed.
 

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OOC: Sorry that I post so rarely, I'm really busy atm.

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Martin kept swinging his sword at Sithis, with more and more power every time. Every time his master blocked the attack, Martin would get more angry and angry. Finally, after the 20th blocked attack he gave up. Breathing and sweating heavily, he spoke: Okay, master... as you can see, I can barely lift a sword. Will you teach me to be a master swordman?
 

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He blocked the attack effortlessly. As his student stopped he begun to speak."I can't teach you to be a master swordsman That you have to do with every day practice I can Teach you how to use a Blade, but teaching to be a Master swordsman can only be done on your own."He said slowly.
 
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