Will do I appreciate it. Ungol is going to be a separate character that I use in the Sith Eternal, I don't think I will necessarily have Marik fall the Darkside, right away at least, and I think he will come to realize that Ungol is a Sith and choose to try to reform the Jedi from within. If...
He doesn't share them openly, on the outside he seems like a normal, if at time reckless Jedi Knight. I'm going to go through and clarify a few more things regarding his views, which are at the core of the character and how he will move forward. The Ungol cracater is going to be a PC as well and...
Ok so I revamped it so that Marik is going to remain a Jedi for the time being, albeit one with unique views on the Jedi and their role in the Galaxy. Please take a look through and let me know that you guys think.
Thanks for the pointers guys, I will sit down with this and do a large edit to make things work better.
I will need some confirmation though at to whether I am allowed to have my character be a fallem Jedi or if thats forbidden as of now.
In terms of the Kaan family being descended from Sith...
I split up the bio so that it has a family background as well as a bio. Still over 1500 words but I really don't see how I can trim it down without altering the actual story. Let me know what you think.
EDIT: Removed the Duel with Umbrael, I will role play that out as a solo thread.
Marik Kaan
NAME: Marik Kaan
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Human of Coruscant heritage
AGE: 25
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 ft
WEIGHT: 200lbs
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
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Hey guys, some of you may or may not remember me, last I was involved with the storyline was during the Sith Exile timeline. Unfortunately life got in the way and I sort of had to drop out but I'm back and hoping to get involved with this new, and quite interesting from what I can see, timeline...
I have a few players I’ve been talking to about it. It won’t happen immediately as I want to set it all up so you won’t have to worry about having enough people.
Thank you for looking it over! I appreciate the time!
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The plot will be following Solimar after the thread "Awakening" as he tries to find his infant son. He will begin on Hosnian Prime, attempting to track down the father of his thought to be dead wife, Kanina. The father...