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Plot Outline Submission Template:
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
The plot will be following Solimar after the thread "Awakening" as he tries to find his infant son. He will begin on Hosnian Prime, attempting to track down the father of his thought to be dead wife, Kanina. The father being a Senator, Solimar will have to interrogate various lower tier staff of the aristocracy on Hosnian Prime. The first thread will essentially be the capture and interrogation of one or several of these staff members.
The next thread will be a comprehensive attack on the Senator himself. Not exactly being able to blend in, Solimar will plan the attack after a meeting with the Hosnian Prime parliament. During the meeting, Solimar will plant several low key bombs and have them detonate as the Senator is escorted home. The bombs will injure several innocents and some of the Senator's staff but not the Senator himself. It will prompt the Senator and his men to rush for his safe room within the estate, a bunker beneath the main house on the premises. Solimar will break into the building prior and meet the Senator in the safe house, killing the guards and taking the Senator hostage. The Senator will be revealed to be the same one who tried to buy Solimar when he was a slave boy. Solimar will torture the Senator until he gives up the location of the boy. The Senator will reveal that the boy was taken from him and brought to Taris. When Solimar demands to know who took the boy the Senator will only reveal that he has a distant relative there before attempting to pull a holdout blaster on Solimar who will proceed to kill him. Solimar briefly pilfer the home for valuables he can use and then steal the Senator's private ship, setting a course for Taris.
The final thread in this plot will be set on Taris. Having robbed the Senator, Solimar uses the funds to recruit a small group of mercenaries. Having already used a portion of the ill gotten credits to put out feelers as to where the relatives are, he discovers they are locked down in an upper city penthouse. Solimar and his men attack the penthouse which leads to a shootout with the relatives and their own contracted mercenaries. During this battle Solimar infiltrates the building to find his son. After fighting his way into the building he finds not only his son but his wife, thought dead. Once he identifies himself to his shocked wife, who also thought him dead, she reveals she was spared the devastation on Ilum and left the Jedi order, deciding to spend her life raising their son. She reveals she had been in the process of stealing money from her father while feigning a desire to rejoin the family, the end goal being that they could disappear into the galaxy, financially secure for life. Solimar, shocked but grateful at his wife's survival, proposes they all disappear forever. However, Solimar's wife, seeing how broken he had become and how far he had fallen to the Dark Side, refuses. She pleads for him to leave them be and let them live a normal life. Solimar considers it for a moment but he succumbs to his anger and draws his blade against his wife. They duel and Solimar defeats his wife, making the decision to kill her, finally fully embracing his future with the Dark Side. The plot ends with Solimar taking his son and making the pledge to help him claim his birthright as the heir to the Senator's fortune on Hosnian Prime (which will lead to another plot down the road).
2. What other players will be a part of this?
None as of now. This, as you can tell, is a very personal plot. However, there is a lot of room for external involvement. Mercenaries, bomb experts, Jedi and even other exiles can assist or work against Solimar and I'm open to anyone becoming involved. Before I put the interest thread out though I'd like to hammer out the plot itself.
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
The plot will take place on Hosnian Prime and Taris.
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
1. Solimar will capture and interrogate an aide, discovering the name and location of his wife's Senatorial father.
2. Solimar will set up the attack on the Senator, planting bombs in several areas in the Hosnian core.
3. Following the Senator's meeting in parliament the bombs will go off, prompting the Senator to retreat to his safehouse under his estate. Solimar will, in the meantime, break into and wait for the Senator to arrive.
4. Solimar will kill the Senator's men and capture the Senator, getting any info he can out of him. He will then kill him.
5. Solimar will go to Taris, recruit mercenaries and plan an attack on the penthouse his son is being kept in.
6. The attack will commence and Solimar will break off from the main group and move to acquire his son.
7. Solimar will encounter his wife and, after some words, kill her.
8. Solimar will acquire the prize AKA his son.
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Solimar seeks to regain his son, who he believes is his only remaining family member.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
On this I am not entirely sure. I feel like the Hosnian Prime Guards and Tarisian Relatives could be DMed as this would give a challenge to whoever is involved.
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This is the first plot I am submitting and, to be honest, I do not know if it even necessarily qualifies as a plot. It is, as I said, a very personal story for Solimar but it does have wider repercussions both to Hosnian Prime and for the character moving forward. It will also lead to another plot on Hosnian Prime which will lead to, and this is rough, Solimar's son becoming the heir to the Senator's fortune and a leading figure in the future on Hosnian Prime, and therefore in the Republic. This also directly affects Solimar who, as a member of the exiles, will now have a much larger bank roll and will have direct access into the Republican core via his son.
But my skin is thick so let me know what you think and I can go from there.
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
The plot will be following Solimar after the thread "Awakening" as he tries to find his infant son. He will begin on Hosnian Prime, attempting to track down the father of his thought to be dead wife, Kanina. The father being a Senator, Solimar will have to interrogate various lower tier staff of the aristocracy on Hosnian Prime. The first thread will essentially be the capture and interrogation of one or several of these staff members.
The next thread will be a comprehensive attack on the Senator himself. Not exactly being able to blend in, Solimar will plan the attack after a meeting with the Hosnian Prime parliament. During the meeting, Solimar will plant several low key bombs and have them detonate as the Senator is escorted home. The bombs will injure several innocents and some of the Senator's staff but not the Senator himself. It will prompt the Senator and his men to rush for his safe room within the estate, a bunker beneath the main house on the premises. Solimar will break into the building prior and meet the Senator in the safe house, killing the guards and taking the Senator hostage. The Senator will be revealed to be the same one who tried to buy Solimar when he was a slave boy. Solimar will torture the Senator until he gives up the location of the boy. The Senator will reveal that the boy was taken from him and brought to Taris. When Solimar demands to know who took the boy the Senator will only reveal that he has a distant relative there before attempting to pull a holdout blaster on Solimar who will proceed to kill him. Solimar briefly pilfer the home for valuables he can use and then steal the Senator's private ship, setting a course for Taris.
The final thread in this plot will be set on Taris. Having robbed the Senator, Solimar uses the funds to recruit a small group of mercenaries. Having already used a portion of the ill gotten credits to put out feelers as to where the relatives are, he discovers they are locked down in an upper city penthouse. Solimar and his men attack the penthouse which leads to a shootout with the relatives and their own contracted mercenaries. During this battle Solimar infiltrates the building to find his son. After fighting his way into the building he finds not only his son but his wife, thought dead. Once he identifies himself to his shocked wife, who also thought him dead, she reveals she was spared the devastation on Ilum and left the Jedi order, deciding to spend her life raising their son. She reveals she had been in the process of stealing money from her father while feigning a desire to rejoin the family, the end goal being that they could disappear into the galaxy, financially secure for life. Solimar, shocked but grateful at his wife's survival, proposes they all disappear forever. However, Solimar's wife, seeing how broken he had become and how far he had fallen to the Dark Side, refuses. She pleads for him to leave them be and let them live a normal life. Solimar considers it for a moment but he succumbs to his anger and draws his blade against his wife. They duel and Solimar defeats his wife, making the decision to kill her, finally fully embracing his future with the Dark Side. The plot ends with Solimar taking his son and making the pledge to help him claim his birthright as the heir to the Senator's fortune on Hosnian Prime (which will lead to another plot down the road).
2. What other players will be a part of this?
None as of now. This, as you can tell, is a very personal plot. However, there is a lot of room for external involvement. Mercenaries, bomb experts, Jedi and even other exiles can assist or work against Solimar and I'm open to anyone becoming involved. Before I put the interest thread out though I'd like to hammer out the plot itself.
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
The plot will take place on Hosnian Prime and Taris.
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
1. Solimar will capture and interrogate an aide, discovering the name and location of his wife's Senatorial father.
2. Solimar will set up the attack on the Senator, planting bombs in several areas in the Hosnian core.
3. Following the Senator's meeting in parliament the bombs will go off, prompting the Senator to retreat to his safehouse under his estate. Solimar will, in the meantime, break into and wait for the Senator to arrive.
4. Solimar will kill the Senator's men and capture the Senator, getting any info he can out of him. He will then kill him.
5. Solimar will go to Taris, recruit mercenaries and plan an attack on the penthouse his son is being kept in.
6. The attack will commence and Solimar will break off from the main group and move to acquire his son.
7. Solimar will encounter his wife and, after some words, kill her.
8. Solimar will acquire the prize AKA his son.
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Solimar seeks to regain his son, who he believes is his only remaining family member.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
On this I am not entirely sure. I feel like the Hosnian Prime Guards and Tarisian Relatives could be DMed as this would give a challenge to whoever is involved.
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This is the first plot I am submitting and, to be honest, I do not know if it even necessarily qualifies as a plot. It is, as I said, a very personal story for Solimar but it does have wider repercussions both to Hosnian Prime and for the character moving forward. It will also lead to another plot on Hosnian Prime which will lead to, and this is rough, Solimar's son becoming the heir to the Senator's fortune and a leading figure in the future on Hosnian Prime, and therefore in the Republic. This also directly affects Solimar who, as a member of the exiles, will now have a much larger bank roll and will have direct access into the Republican core via his son.
But my skin is thick so let me know what you think and I can go from there.
