@Faster Than Light
Okay so I think I've adjusted everything now. If I managed to miss yet another non canon Sith Lord reference then jesus I must be blind ahah. I'll continue to search through for edits before hearing your verdict :D
Oh heck, nothing came up from the link. Ahh I'll try to look for the formatting thing. Sorry being as new as I am I'm a little inept with all the organizational matters. To be fair I've always been terrible with formatting aha.
On another note, is the Sith Pureblood/Human thing a bit much? I'd imagine mix racing characters might be an issue, at least in most roleplay communities. Could always make Daeronus an adoptive father if that's more suitable.
@Faster Than Light
Okay so I've adjusted the bulk of what you asked if a little hastily, but I can't really do more about the multiple forms issue, besides ejecting mention of Niman and Jar' Kai. Its built in to his character that he uses a hybrid Soresu/Djem So, I can't remove either...
Most of the exaggative stuff was for plot convenience, so I wouldn't personally apply it to actual roleplay circumstances. But I do understand each of your points. Thank you again for responding.
Ah sorry I wasn't actually finished at that point, the links were for the images to accompany the profile, but since they're my personal studio edited pictures, I'm having trouble uploading them properly. I'll edit everything accordingly.
Full name
► Kailyn Damien Anarkeus
Age
► 20
Species
► Half human/Sith
Height
► 5 ft 4
Weight
► 122 lbs
Hair Colour
► Currently unknown, likely light brown like his mother's.
Eye Colour
► Unknown. Likely sickly yellow due to dark side corruption.
Homeworld
► Korriban
Gender
►Male
Faction
►The...
Thank you. The main thing I'm having trouble with is indeed the lore, as you said, this Great Galactic War is very different to the one I'm accustomed to. I guess the place to start is with where exactly a hypothetical Sith acolyte would have come from. Would the Korriban/Dromund Kaas academies...
Pretty new to this place, format even. Especially ignorant to the ways this place is run. With that being said it may take me awhile to get fully comfortable, and I'm probably going to make a lot of mistakes lore wise, logic wise etc even if I regard myself as fairly knowledgeable of the Great...