I'm told that I can post in your stead for NPC forces, but it'd be better to have your permission. If you can get back to me before Wednesday, I should be able to get a post up.
I know you've been out sick, but people in the OOC are wanting to press forward. They offered until the end of Tuesday, so unless it's up before Wednesday, a replacement will have to be chosen, or you'll be skipped. I'll see what I can do to make sure you're still in for later rounds.
Read your post, and I thought it was marvelous! lol, make it a competition XD
The only thing to comment on is that in the first paragraph about mirroring forces, it should be four squads and four gunnery speeders total, not each.