Sorry, still not sure when, or how to do some moves.
For second swing you mean the one to the knee right? If that's it then i totally forgot about it.
If there's any problem with the actions in themselves i could just remove the later part and leave the post on the first fade to black, leaving...
The Being instantly stopped his music as he heard a voice inside the large chamber he was in, as the last note stopped resonating in the large walls the room would start assuming a slightly red coloration, and the smell of death would encompass the whole area.
Ebah... It's named Ebah.
Silence...
His vision was blurry, his actions more desperate and strange by the minute, the Mandalorian knew this wasn't going to last, but as long as he was breathing, he wouldn't let an inch to his opponent, never.
Ral's sword would cut Thy'r side like butter, making him gasp in pain and almost lose...
One step, two steps, three steps, each step the young acolyte would take was followed by a sound, no one else seemed to hear it through... Maybe it was on his mind? It didn't matter as a strange feeling would tell him to follow the origin of that sound.
And if indeed the human would follow those...
The Beast was eating... The chaos, the fear of death, the pain, he fed on all those things as it slowly crawled outside of the ship, then the blaster shot, more pain from a stormtrooper near him, delicious.
But then he was ourside, some houses, a water tower... Death and destruction looming.
WE...
Thyr's genius planning suddenly turned against him, everything went to plan until he heard the humming of Ral's vibrosword and his boot being torn apart by it.
It was painful during the first moments of the struggle, but thankfully Concord Dawn wasn't a hot place to begin with, and because of...
Extremely sorry, didn't know that mag boots were not allowed even if they were part of the armor, that will be changed into a kick along with a lot of grammatical and pacing corrections now that I re-read the post, it really feels rushed and just done for the sake of it.
but I will do that...
I don't search power, i search stability, as through stability, i reach ascension, through ascension i reach the Dark, through the Dark i reach Domination.
But knowledge is power, and im in desperate need for knowledge... Bring me-
As the Spawn wanted to conclude his words, the walls crumbled...
Attacking your opponent before he's able to move, a good strategy from the Starchild, but letting him keep his lower, more manouverable stance? A big minus for his successive actions effectiveness.
In fact, even if he would expect an attack from his adversary, he didn't expect it right after...
@Arclight because its the only leader i can actively remember.
This is supposed to be what happens after the "Freenemies" mission I, Gian and LordOfShadow did, it was part of the "March Of The Dominion" mission pack.
As i think the Invasion of our Rivals wouldn't be some kind of global...