Trial of the Warrior Round 2 OOC

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Just posting this thread so @GABA LAMA DING DONG can see my request for an extension on my post since @Simonev and I noticed a few issues with @Kameron Esters- post and wanted to give him a chance to edit, but since it's going to be Easter, thought we'd give him a little extra time in case he's busy.

Also, Kam, in the future, try to stick to the posting order for PvP threads since it affects the order of things.
 

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Extension approved, due to the holiday, it will be extended through Monday.
 

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So... As 24 hours are closing in, should we keep the new turns with Kameron right after me?

I think yes as both attack's are intended for him, and us not posting wouldn't mean anything as we are actually altready doing an action.
But im up to your decisions.
 

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So... As 24 hours are closing in, should we keep the new turns with Kameron right after me?

I think yes as both attack's are intended for him, and us not posting wouldn't mean anything as we are actually altready doing an action.
But im up to your decisions.
Yeah, we should keep this turn order.
 

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-I said Thrit positioned himself to where he was facing Thyr. That and Kori's edit keeps suggesting that Thyr was in front of Thrit.And i didnt ignore your attacks. Thrit obviously hit by them based on how he was feeling after you both attacked Thrit . I read your guy's edits over and over for two days and I was still under the impression that Thrit was being blocked from the front and back.Also what do you mean by the slashing bit?-

MODERATOR EDIT: Moved to OOC thread.
 
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To clarify, Ral moved so that he was behind and to the left of Thrit on his post, such that if Thrit tried to flee backwards Ral could easily stop him, and his attack was coming from the left preventing Thrit from dodging away to that direction. In my mind I imagined Thyr opposite him, in front slightly and to Thrit's right.
 

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Sorry for that Arc, it wont happen again.

Meanwhile, Kameron, this is from my last post, right before your attempted seppuku:

The Mandalorian's head would move back from that centimeter of the blade and then move his whole body weight half a step right, making his next push unbalancing and futile.

Meanwhile, you know how actually powerful is a Vibrosword?

This is from the wiki: "A vibroblade resembled a short sword with a high-tech look and feel and consisted of the same basic design as other vibroweapons: the weapon's hilt or handle usually contained a compact ultrasonic vibration generator, causing the blade to vibrate at an incredible speed, making even the slightest glancing blow become a gaping wound"

Now, as you pierced your stomach/intestine area with it, you basically made these two organs grinded meat, if you also got hit by both our attacks, it would mean Thrit also has almost lost both arms and half the abdomen before managing somehow to crawl away.

Basically, without immediate, extensive medical care (that is present on every match), Thrit will die in a matter of minutes.
 

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To clarify, Ral moved so that he was behind and to the left of Thrit on his post, such that if Thrit tried to flee backwards Ral could easily stop him, and his attack was coming from the left preventing Thrit from dodging away to that direction. In my mind I imagined Thyr opposite him, in front slightly and to Thrit's right.
I was thinking the exact same thing too. I read that part too and even though Thyr moved haof a step to his right, I figured he was still facing Thrit's front.
 

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Sorry for that Arc, it wont happen again.

Meanwhile, Kameron, this is from my last post, right before your attempted seppuku:

The Mandalorian's head would move back from that centimeter of the blade and then move his whole body weight half a step right, making his next push unbalancing and futile.

Meanwhile, you know how actually powerful is a Vibrosword?

This is from the wiki: "A vibroblade resembled a short sword with a high-tech look and feel and consisted of the same basic design as other vibroweapons: the weapon's hilt or handle usually contained a compact ultrasonic vibration generator, causing the blade to vibrate at an incredible speed, making even the slightest glancing blow become a gaping wound"

Now, as you pierced your stomach/intestine area with it, you basically made these two organs grinded meat, if you also got hit by both our attacks, it would mean Thrit also has almost lost both arms and half the abdomen before managing somehow to crawl away.

Basically, without immediate, extensive medical care (that is present on every match), Thrit will die in a matter of minutes.
Yea and that bit was my fault too because I forgot we were dealing with vibroswords. Keyword being 'vibro'. I noticed as soo. As you edited afterwards. I also thought you guy's attacks were auto hits cause I thought you would've called me out for dodging somehow. So what do we do know, because the way I see this,is that we misunderstood each other.
 
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@Simonev while I applaud your intriguing use of magboots, it was brought to my attention by another member that in their opinion, and I agree with their reasoning, that strictly speaking the magnetic plates on a boot would not actually be allowed items to use in the combat since the idea was to use bladed weapons and our bodies (meaning fists, kicks, headbutts, etc), specifically removing other weapons and gadgets from the fight parameters, the latter of which the magboots would fall under.

I'm not sure how you feel about it or if you just forgot, so if you want to edit it into like a kick or something that's fine. If you want to discuss it's usage we can. It's not a super big deal to me atm, but I do think that at least for future posts they should not be used.

If you do insist on using them still, I do have a few questions about your post due to some lack of detail. First off, I see that your CS doesn't have any mods listed for your CCT Armor, so does it rely on gauntlet activation for its gear like everyone else?

Also, your timing seems a bit rushed, but I won't go into that too much yet.

Lastly, you say Thyr plants his feet on the blade. I take that to mean both. Does he just step on it? Does he jump? You make it sounds like he jumps or kicks it.
 

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Extremely sorry, didn't know that mag boots were not allowed even if they were part of the armor, that will be changed into a kick along with a lot of grammatical and pacing corrections now that I re-read the post, it really feels rushed and just done for the sake of it.

but I will do that tomorrow morning as I need to sleep if you want you can already plan your post following this line of action (i will post here when I'm done editing, don't worry for the time as you should have your post time reset to 48h from my last edit):
1)Thyr moves his blade out of the way
2)he kicks your sword into the ground, then starts to put weight over it applying pressure and shifting his body weight toward it (remember that Basaakith have more muscle mass and are generally stronger than humans, but you still have fancy cyborg arm on your side, lel)
3)he uses his sword to try to stab you in the middle open section of CCT armor (the one under the usually pentagonal/diamond shaped little plate).
 

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It's done! If there's anything else to change well, just ask!
 

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@Simonev, so you seem to have also missed Ral's second swing back into his side, that or you didn't really acknowledge it, and I personally feel that also would have had an impact in what Thyr was trying to do.

Lastly, I have a slight issue with how you say Thyr lets go of his sword with both of his hands to get Ral's defending arm out of the way, and manage to struggle before the sword falls and autohits, penetrating the gorget from like a height of one or two feet. Generally speaking, an attack like that would allow an opponent to respond to it before deciding where exactly it hit and what amount of damage it did.

It's not a super big deal to me, though, I just want you to be aware of these things for future Pvp.
 

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Sorry, still not sure when, or how to do some moves.
For second swing you mean the one to the knee right? If that's it then i totally forgot about it.
If there's any problem with the actions in themselves i could just remove the later part and leave the post on the first fade to black, leaving damage and the action itself to you.

The Autohit part was mostly because on your last post it was also present with the whole "manages to remove the sword from the ground, pull back and precisely hit the unarmored side of his target on a 1/1.5 second timespan, with one hand and the rest of his body being hit by 83 kg (no armour counted) of angry Mando" because i don't imagine a timespan of that action any longer without Ral's sword being more than 2 meters long,


But nevermind, dont wanna jump into unnecessary discussions, if i have to change anything just say it and it will be done.
 

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Hey, if that's how you feel, that's cool. I try to vet my posts by running them by others who know their stuff to make sure I'm not doing anything unreasonable. I would urge you that if you think I did something unreasonable to please bring it up to me here or via PM and we can have a reasonable and logical discussion on it. Let me present my perspective real fast so that you will know, and if you still disagree that's cool, but at least you'll understand why I did what I did.

So, Ral was already removing the sword from the ground on his previous post by drawing it back towards him, when Thyr removed his foot he began pulling it back even quicker so that when Thyr launches himself forward (presumably with one good leg and letting his weight carry him through, and remember that Ral also has 25 pounds on him sans armor, so he isn't exactly a feather), Ral's blade was already interposed so that when they collided he just had to draw it upwards along the unarmed side, and if you're using CCT there are a lot of gaps, especially on the side, so it's not super precise, just putting it in a wide area and pulling upwards, doing as described should it completely succeed. That's why I said it "would" do what it did. The rub is that with Thyr committed to the falling thrust/tackle, it would have been really hard for him to change, especially since once committed to an attack you cannot alter it. So I can see where it sounds like an autohit, and to be fair to myself, I should have written "nearly impossible" when I think I just put "impossible" so that's my bad, but the hit and damage are entirely dependent on if you have a reasonable way to respond or if you feel like you were "written into a corner" so to speak.

As for the timing, do you think it takes more than two seconds to pull a blade from foot level up to arm level and twist right? I might have misunderstood your positioning, which is fine, but the way it sounds in my head is that Thyr is still angled slightly to Ral since the way he was stepping on the blade he would have had to have done it towards the foilable or tip. That means he is in front and to the right of Ral, and I don't believe I saw you mention turning into Ral, just that Thyr launched/fell towards him, meaning his side is facing him somewhat.

Do you feel like that attack towards Thyr's knee would have changed how his attack would have gone? At the very least I feel like something should be mentioned about that.

Now, the only part I really had an issue with was the autohit and sword fall. First of all, I just tried this, I think it would be hard to grab Ral's arm after letting go of the sword, and by hard I mean almost impossible do with precision before the sword would hit the way I was doing it. So, I don't personally think Thyr could have arrested his arm before the blade hit. Also, regardless of the autohit, from the height the sword would be falling at, it would glance off the armor.
 

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@Kori Buor @Simonev

The thread has been reported, i will be reviewing it shortly unless the two of you can come to a mutual agreement.
 

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OFFICIAL RULING: @Simonev You have 24 hours to remove the autohit from your post, giving @Kori Buor a chance to respond to the attack.
 
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