Crackerjack Bohemian

Haha, thanks for the compliments - honest! Writing is just something I don't find myself too skilled in yet. But with time, I'm hoping to change that and become a writer that people read and do "Well... ****... that was good."

1) It's pretty bad. It was better before I left for Peru but two months of not writing anything has left me kind of bewildered on what grammatical device to use and where at times.
2) I feel you guys have more 'action' and such in your posts than mine.
3) This one is my biggest issue and the one I'm trying to fix the most. I try and make a basic premise before I write a post but lately it seems to scramble all about rather than flowing smoothly to the next topic.

I personally prefer the way you write in comparison to mine but whenever I try and write like you or Mav it flows even worse. I really have no critiques for it x).

Quick list of what I dislike about my writing:

1) My grammar is reasonably atrocious.
2) I find the overall substance in my posts reasonably lacking. Not in length or detail but in overall 'flair'?
3) I just don't feel as if my post flows all that well.

I'm hoping that, in time, my writing does improve. After all, that's one reason why I signed up for this site ;).

I'll edit that then if I made any mentions to the enclave. My bad! And thanks a ton for the compliment even though I disagree. You guys are great writers which makes it tough for the average guy like me!

okay. I'll make those edits before tomorrow afternoon.

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?40972-Balancing-on-the-Dagger-s-Edge&p=875999#post875999

for whenever your muse hits you

Sorry it took so long, but I posted almost a week ago in Defending With or The Light! >,.,< I had an utter writer's block for that thread.
So sorry!

Sorry, I haven't had a moment to look at it yet. I'll look at it here before the middle of the week.

I did

no biggie, i understand writers block all to well. I think it would take place after Truth. Rho would be a knight at that point, but also be dealing with a bout of self doubt. After every master you take suffers some terrible misfortune, you start to wonder, know what I mean?
I'm mostly looking to get Rho some more Force powers he can use in tandem with his fighting. Cuz he's gonna need it for Sacul.

Looking to get Rho some defensive training. Maybe Soresu, but mostly force powers; Absorb, Valor, Tutanmis, Battle precognition/meditation etc.

No, I have received any PMs from you. :/

Question: Would Sebastian respect Rho more if the Cathar came to him for training in the defensive arts?

Aye, and there'll be a mix of aliens and beings from planets come to get in on the action.

Edited! :D

Since you're gonna bring another, I'm just gonna go ahead and steal Soliss' name
Trouble on Zeltros

Ahhh, I see what you're doing there! Okay. I'll get to it after doing this thang

Hey mate, I'm typing up a response to both Knight and getting the next phase of the Class going. I do, however, have a question for you. Would you mind NPCing the Trouble on Zeltros thread? (You could always bring back Soliss :CSly)

Oh! XDDD

Hahahahahahahah. Okay okay. I'll think of something add. ;D

You know I spoil you. :T

Which bar scene? >_>