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CRIMINAL PROFILE
WANTED: SLAVERY, PIRACY, MURDER​
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[NAME]
__ZELDOR VAN-HAL
[AFFILIATION]
__NONE
[WARNING LEVEL]
__MAXIMUM
[ROLE]
__UNKNOWN
[SPECIES]
__FALLEEN___________
[HOMEWORLD]
__FALLEEN________
[AGE]
__38____
[GENDER]
__MALE[COLOR=#1a1a1]___________[/COLOR]
[HEIGHT]
__1.90 METERS
[WEIGHT]
__69KG
[HAIR COLOUR]
__GREY
[EYE COLOUR]
__BLUE
''Everyone has a price, and someone is always willing to pay it.''
________________________________________________- PERSONALITY PROFILE.
Reports indicate that the Falleen slaver is a sadistic individual, delighting in the pain of other - what he considers, lesser - beings. That being said, he also has been reported to take pleasure in pain inflicted on himself, with some suggesting that he feels that it makes him 'stronger'. The Pirate Lord is a master of Terror Tactics, and has often been known to leave at least one person alive after his raids, so that they can 'take the message to his enemies'.
________________________________________________- RECENT HISTORY.

Little is known about the Falleens past, but a great deal is known about his recent history. His past is assumed to be one that is rather dull and boring, as simply put the only records we have been able to find - and trust me, he takes little care in hiding his past - is that he grew up on a farm. Told you it was boring, but this is a criminal profile, not a story book.
Once he left his home world, pretty much as soon as he was able, he took to a life of crime like a fish to water. Using a small speeder, he would terrorise large cities, stealing and then making off with his wares as fast as he was able. Soon he began to up the game, and started to 'liberate' certain larger items to order, for example, weapons.
However it is when he stole a rather large and well armed ship, with his rapidly growing gang of cronies that the real 'legend' started. Having stolen a warship from its berth, he gave it a suitable name - the 'Soul Reaper' - and began his current lucrative career in piracy. Petty theft it seems bored him, so he took to stealing sentients and their possessions. Striking hard, and fast, he would attack unsuspecting civilian outlets, taking everything and everyone he could sell, before returning into the darkness of space, well before the authorities could arrive.
It has been noted on several occasions that the Pirate Lord has often delayed his escape so he can 'try his hand' with local authorities. It is not a pretty site, as the Falleen is a dab hand with the blade a whip, and leaves no survivors, just dismembered bodies. He is reported by those he sells to be a very perverse individual using his races natural pheromone abilities to seduce enslaved captives, and it is rumoured that the non-falleen members of his crew, both male and female are likewise enthralled by his abilities.
Additionally it has been said he is not adverse to using combat and sense enhancing drugs, and often throws massive debauched parties on his ship. Only once have the authorities interrupted such an event, and, well there where not survivors., but the press had a field day.





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Characters Met

Equipment
One suit of Black Armour
One Curved Vibro-Blade
One Electro-Whip

Ship
Modified Stathas Class Adaptive Gunship-: Stolen from the Mandalorians several years ago as their Empire Collapsed. The Ship looks considerably different due to its extensive modifications. The Cargo Bay has had a certain amount of its space cut, so as to accommodate for a stealth generator and two additional engines. Additionally the crew decks have been shrunk so as to accommodate for a large central room which serves as a throne room and entertainment room of sorts for the ships captain. The ship also sports a stealth field generator now. Being a slave ship, there is still suffient room for the 'cargo' they are just packed in the cargo bay suffocating slowly in the heat of the engines and wallowing in their own filth. Serves them right for being captures though, right?

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Gah, shit, scary! O_O
 

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Damn right he be scary.

I can't wait to RP him, slicing head's 'n stuff.
 

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Lame... I've been working on a Falleen because I hadn't seen any on the forum. Thanks for ruining that for me. XD

Now to decide on a different species... jeez.
 

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:CCry2

Sowwy......You can always join me on the Falleen Boat, the boat.....OF CRUELTY.
 

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It's cool man, just giving you a hard time... probably because you have a cooler picture than I was going to use.

In all seriousness, awesome character man... I can't wait to see how he as a Falleen uses his pheromones in Slave trades.
 

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Lame... I've been working on a Falleen because I hadn't seen any on the forum. Thanks for ruining that for me. XD

Now to decide on a different species... jeez.

And the SWRP Hipster Award goes to Bad Karma. :CSly
 

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He looks like some Slaneshi cultist tech-priest/psyker... thing!
 

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Nor'baal. You know that indie characters are not allowed to have capital ships.
 

Nor'baal

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I am more aware of that than most people. Hence the ship is owned by the Black Suns - once they have reached a size that it can be purchased - and of course, it is not a capitol ship actually but that is splitting hairs.

Long story short, before the known universe descends on this profile like the four horsemen of the RPolypse, the Ship is held by the Black Suns when they can legally get it.
 

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I am more aware of that than most people. Hence the ship is owned by the Black Suns - once they have reached a size that it can be purchased - and of course, it is not a capitol ship actually but that is splitting hairs.

Long story short, before the known universe descends on this profile like the four horsemen of the RPolypse, the Ship is held by the Black Suns when they can legally get it.


Well, I am already death.... so hey!

Aside from that, I really like the character! I am not sure about the issue regarding the capital ship though; perhaps you could explain it a little more?
 

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Well, I shall keep it in red (the universal colour for bad stuff) until it has been formally acquired by the faction, then I can update it to fit the requirements of the faction. Its BN's choice as to what this character has ship wise anyways!
 

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Is that... urien rakarth?
 
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