Zarl Hover

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Name: Zarl Hover
Faction: None
Rank: N/A
Species: Human
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Force sensitive: No

Appearance: 19-year-old human, 1 meter 80 centimeters, weighs 60 kilo, brown plain hair pointing downwards, medium hair for men. Got small amount of freckles on both cheeks. Brown eyes. Mostly wears brown, dusty leather pants with a weapon holster on it where he equips his weapon. Wears a thin brown leather coat with a hoodie. Under his coat he wears a brown-yellow shirt. All of his clothes are most of the time covered in dust and sand.

Attributes:
Zarl is fast and great at pickpocketing. He trained a lot in stealth so he's great at sneaking. To be a thief you also need to be agile, and so he is. The bad part is that he is not great in social life. He prefers not to talk but to do. Not like he hates it, but he just sucks at it. For this, his greatest weakness is making contacts. Other than that, he's not the best at planning and he is still an unprofessional thief.
Personality: Zarl rather does than talk. He does like to communicate, but it always turn out to be awkward. He always loved to see bounty hunters do his job, but never gets close to them. Due to him being a thief, he is scared of being spotted and get murdered by a bounty hunter. This is why most of the time he hides his face, and only shows his best friends his face. With other words: He never shows his face, as he does not have contacts.

He always had a hate to the Jedi, as one of them killed his father when he shot a civilian. Due to not having any parents, he never had any good friends after he was 12.

Biography: Zarl lived his whole life on Tatooine. His father never told his job and his mother was a slave. Of course, this is the best place for criminality and it is never safe. At the age of 11, his father was murdered by a Jedi for shooting a civilian. He still never knows why he did. Zarl always thought the civilian was a "bad guy" or something. The 3 months after that his mom barely talked.

When his mother returned from the shop, she didn't know about the weather. She just saw people running to their near-by homes. His mom didn't see the hurry, so she continued walking, only to see a sandstorm. She started to run but it was too late, as she died at the age of 37. When Zarl was twelve he didn't have any parents and was dieing of hunger. He needed money and food, but nobody wants a weak boy. So he started his personal job as a thief. He started pickpocketing, but this quickly changed into stealing food from the stores. At the age of 14 he started training in his house but still never got close to a bounty hunter. He found a iron combat knife, which he always has equipped on his holster, unless hell breaks loose.

Skills: Zarl is on a scale to 1-10 in pickpocketing a 8 and stealth a 7. In his medical knowledge, he only knows how to heal basic wounds, so that's about a 4. He can see if a person is lieing or telling the truth. Not for all of course, so in this I would give it a 7. He has a 6 in sword fighting as he never been in a real fight. He never flew in a ship, so a 2 in flying. I'd give him a 5 in dodging attacks.

Gear: I already described the clothes and armor in appearance. He has a weapon holster where he keeps his combat knife, and next to it a bit of water.

Role-plays: Sitting Down

Relationships: Neutral with civilians, and untrusted by shop-owners.

Additional

Ship: None
Droids: None
Pets: None
Kills: None
Combat: None









 
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Reya Starlyght

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Without even looking at the actual character, I see that the font is huge. Change it to like a 3 or 4. Also, don't make everything bolded, either bold just the categories or don't bold at all. I'll read this more when I have time later.
 

Reya Starlyght

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Alright, with these changes, the character looks good, although a bit bare-boned. Also, I don't know what you're planning to do with him, but keep in mind it might be hard to find role-play partners or get him actively involved in things.
 
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