Zaken Ai'sinth

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NAME: Zaken Ai'sinth

FACTION:N/A

RANK:N/A

SPECIES:Ipharian-Da'Lor

AGE: 26

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 1 metre(moving), 3 metres("stood" up)

EYES: Olive

HAIR: None

SKIN: Grey, but is able to change its skin colour to mimic its surroundings

CREDITS: 1000

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None, apart from there are very few Ipharian-Da'Lor

DOMINATE HAND:ambidextrous

FORCE SENSITIVE: No

STRENGTH: Alot stronger than most species, able to lift a Small scout ship over his head
DESTERITY: Extreamly quick and agile, able to avoid the best of marksman
CONSTITUTION: Very Healthy
INTELLIGENCE: Gets confused easily but knows most of human knowledge
CHARISMA: He has almost no Charisma when it comes to charming people because he is a large snake-like sentiant being.

SKILLS:Able to switch between normal and heat vision. due to his ability to change his skin colour, he is able to sneak around very easily compared to his size. Due to his size he can intimidate most other beings, he also has the ability to slowly regenerate his tail. Inside his tail is a long spike which can retract and extend out from his tail at will, this can create a large difference in close range combat, and also makes Ipharian-Da'Lor extreamly dangerous to get close to.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:He is extreamly strong but very slow unless putting all his strength into his tail which subsiquently affects his upper body strength. due to having to use his tail to move he becomes almost imobile until it grows back

GEAR: Stouker concussion rifle, LS-150 Heavy Accelerated Charged Particle Repeater Gun, both of which are straped to his back. Antiheat, personal Body armor fully covering his upperbody, able to stop quick slashes from a saber and most blaster fire.

PERSONALITY: Zaken is very aggresive for his speices he lives his life around bounty hunting, due to this he has almost no trust for anyone but his own family or speicies. because of this people are very intimidated or dislike him asoon as they're eyes reach his large reptillian body. Due to this he is untrusting of most people and always carrys his two powerful weapons upon his back.

HISTORY: There is no records of how or when he left his home planet, he was taken by poachers while he was still in egg form. when he was born, due to not knowing how he got there, he was raised as a pet for the poachers until his arms grew out of his upper body. when this happend he was taken and left on a desert planet where he lived and trained for years. around the age of 18 after learning how to keep his urges, to feed on the animals around him, down. He travelled around the small planet until he came across a small city. Within the city he was instantly attacked by the Bounty hunter Fen Ki'tur, after confusing Zaken for a large, dangerous desert creature. After realising his mistake Fen decided to teach Zaken what he knew of the other creatures that inhabit this planet and the galaxy. Fen decided to take Zaken around the galaxy on his missions, For 8 years they travelled together. untill they were to collect a bounty from the planet Coruscant, upon arrival they were taken prisoners by the Alsakan allience. because of the untold ammount of crimes that Fen had comitted on his journeys, they detained him for further investigation and allowed the Ipharian-Da'Lor to continue to the planet. on the planets surface Zaken waited, living on the few credits given to him by Fen, for three months, slowly watching the alsakan's blockade grow stronger. wondering what has happend to his only friend.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?p=224025#post224025

(i understand that i am not that good at writing, so please, if there is anything ive got wrong, please tell me)
 
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CHARISMA: He has almost no Charisma when it comes to charming people because he is a large snake-like sentiant being, but because of this he is able to intimidate others into helping him


He has no Charisma but he can intimidate people into helping him?

You already have 2 things you are really good at Strength and agility but charisma is a third?
 

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he cant be quick and strong at the same time, due to having to put all his power into has tail to move quickly
 

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Okay but charisma is the ability to influence people usually calmly. I would put charisma low then put in intimidation as a skill.
 

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ok ill do that now, also his speices also have something that can be used in combat hidden within their body, and im not sure if i should put it down or not because it works better when its not expected
 
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Technically, if it's not in the profile, people can state that you can't use it. It would be the same if a mercenary suddenly pulls out a heavy repeater at point blank range - simply saying 'I intended for him/her to have it from the beginning' won't fly well with anyone.
 

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I would rather know what someone is going to pull on me then have someone shoot me with something that isn't even in here.
 

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B'sides, you can trust most RPers here to react accordingly - if not, call them out on it, or just send them a PM askign how they knew it was going to happen.
 

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Actually, if I state beforehand in one of the earlier posts when my character entered the scene, I can have just about whatever I want, even if it isn't in my profile. You just gotta be smart, and make sure you describe what your character has on him early on, so people don't go all like "YU DUN HAV3 A SOWRD!!! IT'S NOT IN YUR PROFIL3!!!"
 

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There's a slight difference between a sword and an innate specie ability.
 

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Yeah, most people on this site do not meta-game. So, it should be fine if you place it in the profile.
 
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