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Yen was born into the Lode'Tem Dynasty in a system far from the galactic center. He is prince and heir to his father, Dynast King Yun, and his mother, Queen Esa. He grew up as many princes do, with a strict education and emphasis on the disciplines of the Force. Throughout his childhood, Yen showed great promise in combat, leadership, talents of the Force, and an inclination for technology. Constantly at odds with his brother, Nayti, who had always been more diplomatic, and more talented in the use of illusions and deception, the two have only recently set aside their petty squabbles in order to aid their father. The Dynast King Yun has fallen ill, and in hopes to bring greater opportunity to his people, decided to send his sons into the galaxy to discuss trade and nonaggressive treaties with the galactic powers. Yen has embarked on a journey to the galactic center in order to make contact with the Galactic Alliance. He has recently lost contact with his brother, who was last known to be traveling to Bastion.

NAME: Yen
FACTION: Indie/Lode'Tem
RANK: Prince/Ambassador
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 23
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 1.8 m
WEIGHT: 67 kg
EYES: Green
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Caucasian
CREDITS: 1,000 cr
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 7/10, good in a fight for sure, his muscles are very defined.
DEXTERITY: 6/10, Yen is fairly acrobatic, but lacking in stealth.
CONSTITUTION: 8/10, he has nearly perfected his diet and exercise, and doesn't tire or fall ill easily.
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10, when it comes to electronics, Yen is a genius, but he doesn't care much for other academic pursuits.
WISDOM: 6/10, he's pretty intuitive, but makes mistakes like the rest of us.
CHARISMA: 6/10, Yen is pretty laid back, and a talented leader.

FORCE POWERS:
Due to formal training, Yen is proficient in the core abilities of any Force user, and shows a talent for Telekinesis. His true excellence is shown through his ability to influence electronics and technology. He can control multiple droids at once, and disable almost any droid he encounters. Yen has recently learned to deflect energy, and can bat away several blaster bolts with his hand.

SKILLS:
Electronics
General Combat
Piloting

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form V: Shien/Djem So
Yens application of Djem So is almost unrivaled amongst his people, he shows an apparent aptitude for the form.
His application of Shien is only slightly less impressive, as he can deflect a volley of projectiles with ease.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+ Yen is very powerful in the Force, and excels in all forms of combat.
- He is not very mindful of the future, instead choosing to act on instinct and feeling.
+ His knack for manipulating technology is surprising to most.
- Yen is headstrong, and though he can keep his opinions to himself, he is very stubborn.

GEAR:
(1) Lightsaber
(1) Blaster pistol

SHIP:
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DROIDS:
Does your character have any droids? If so, what are they?

PERSONALITY:
Yen is normally reserved, but happy. He tries to see the best in people, and is always willing to help those in need. He has a strong sense of justice, and despite his upbringing, strives to serve the Light Side of the Force. He is still very much a warrior, and solves most problems with his blade or the Force. Yen has a very 'take charge' attitude, and will lead others when he sees fit. He is very courageous.​
 
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I like your character, just seems a bit overpowered, may want to tone it down a bit. Do you intend on joining the jedi?
 

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You are going to have to run this profile by an admin because you have so many masteries, and you are not a part of the Jedi or Sith.
 

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Mastered force powers at the age of 23? Maybe you should name your character "Zen" instead of "Yen".
 

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Mastered force powers at the age of 23? Maybe you should name your character "Zen" instead of "Yen".

Nah, can't be a "Zen". A "Zen" would be over a hundred years old but look like a teenager, have even more powers known, and all lightsaber techniques mastered, and be a hybrid of half a dozen random species.
 

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Nah, can't be a "Zen". A "Zen" would be over a thousand years old but look like a teenager, have even more powers known, and all lightsaber techniques mastered, and be a hybrid of half a dozen random species.

Fixed.
 

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His powers have been toned down considerably. Keep an eye out for drastic bio changes!
 

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Still a bit too strong. Look at the strengths and weaknesses, his strengths far outweigh the weaknesses. There is also his unrivaled ability with D'jem So. May want tone that down a bit father.
 

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Yens application of Djem So is almost unrivaled amongst his people, he shows an apparent aptitude for the form.
His application of Shien is only slightly less impressive, as he can deflect a volley of projectiles with ease.

Not unrivaled in the galaxy, just amongst a population of less than a million people, most of whom aren't swordsman. Besides, he is a prince. He's had great training.
 

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Still a bit too strong. Look at the strengths and weaknesses, his strengths far outweigh the weaknesses. There is also his unrivaled ability with D'jem So. May want tone that down a bit father.

There's no reason someone can't have more strengths than weaknesses. Hell, I leave this section completely out of all of my bios because I think its ridiculous. At least he has something down.
 
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