Who's the Boss now?

[Brick]

Character Name and Level:
Cardinal Paroaria Lvl:1
Character Rank:
Mafia Boss
Name of Plot:
Who's the Boss now?
Participants in the plot (Character accounts):
@Cardinal Paroaria (@Brick)
@Aurelie Fleury (@Pyrenees)
@Hask Jen (@KinkyPrawn)
@Titus Kold (@Wall)
@Katra Bell (@Equinox)
@Darth Parox (@vamp)
@Faded Truth as DM
Intended Outcome of Plot:
Cardinal becomes the Boss of the Paroaria Mafia, and create an alliance between the Mafia and the Exchange.
Actual Outcome of Plot:
Cardinal is forced to kill his father and creates a deal with the leader of the Exchange.
Any PVP or Staff DMing involved?
No
Link to Dice Roll Thread if used:
N/A
Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:
Secret Motives - Cardinal and a fellow Lieutenant are tasked to defend a base from an attack, but Cardinal secretly orders the assassination of the lieutenant to take his power base.
Who owns the throne? - Cardinal goes to his father to ask for the throne, but if forced to kill both his father and mother to get to the goal.
This is the future - Cardinal meets with Odin/Darth Parox to discuss plans to create an alliance between the Exchange and the Mafia.

The last thread is ongoing, but the Exchange is going to be absorbed into the Sith Empire and is going to be converted to an NPC faction, so I don't think it really needs to be completed. Plus it's just a simple meeting thread.

Additional note: In the second thread, the DM provided the opposition with advanced tech, quickdraw, making the fight a little difficult. I understand that the tech takes about two threads to earn, and that i didn't discuss this in the plot submission, but since this was just made in the thread, is it possible for my character to take it off the dead person? Thanks!

 

[Nefieslab]

Character Name and Level:
Cardinal Paroaria Lvl:1
Character Rank:
Mafia Boss
Name of Plot:
Who's the Boss now?
Participants in the plot (Character accounts):
@Cardinal Paroaria (@Brick)
@Aurelie Fleury (@Pyrenees)
@Hask Jen (@KinkyPrawn)
@Titus Kold (@Wall)
@Katra Bell (@Equinox)
@Darth Parox (@vamp)
@Faded Truth as DM
Intended Outcome of Plot:
Cardinal becomes the Boss of the Paroaria Mafia, and create an alliance between the Mafia and the Exchange.
Actual Outcome of Plot:
Cardinal is forced to kill his father and creates a deal with the leader of the Exchange.
Any PVP or Staff DMing involved?
No
Link to Dice Roll Thread if used:
N/A
Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:
Secret Motives - Cardinal and a fellow Lieutenant are tasked to defend a base from an attack, but Cardinal secretly orders the assassination of the lieutenant to take his power base.
Who owns the throne? - Cardinal goes to his father to ask for the throne, but if forced to kill both his father and mother to get to the goal.
This is the future - Cardinal meets with Odin/Darth Parox to discuss plans to create an alliance between the Exchange and the Mafia.

The last thread is ongoing, but the Exchange is going to be absorbed into the Sith Empire and is going to be converted to an NPC faction, so I don't think it really needs to be completed. Plus it's just a simple meeting thread.

Additional note: In the second thread, the DM provided the opposition with advanced tech, quickdraw, making the fight a little difficult. I understand that the tech takes about two threads to earn, and that i didn't discuss this in the plot submission, but since this was just made in the thread, is it possible for my character to take it off the dead person? Thanks!

REJECTED.

1. No, you cannot just "pick up" a piece of advanced tech. Especially not for the weak reason of "the DM was challenging because of it" - the DM is SUPPOSED to be challenging. Which brings me to my second point.
2. Thread 2 was NOT challenging. Your DM posted 3 times, attacked in one and immediately died due to timing out. The entire thread is a rather meager 8 posts long; this is not acceptable due to thread length and DM opposition being incredibly weak.
3. Thread 3 is pitifully small. 5 posts for a plot thread is awful. 2 posts in an entire plot mean that @vamp certainly isn't getting any credits for this plot.

Options;

• Leave the plot as rejected
  • You will receive NO assets
  • You will have your rank reverted
  • No one will receive plot credits
• Re-do threads 2 and 3
  • DM for thread 2 will need to provide challenge
  • Both threads will need to be AT LEAST 9 posts long, preferably at least 10

 

[Brick]

REJECTED.

1. No, you cannot just "pick up" a piece of advanced tech. Especially not for the weak reason of "the DM was challenging because of it" - the DM is SUPPOSED to be challenging. Which brings me to my second point.
2. Thread 2 was NOT challenging. Your DM posted 3 times, attacked in one and immediately died due to timing out. The entire thread is a rather meager 8 posts long; this is not acceptable due to thread length and DM opposition being incredibly weak.
3. Thread 3 is pitifully small. 5 posts for a plot thread is awful. 2 posts in an entire plot mean that @vamp certainly isn't getting any credits for this plot.

Options;

• Leave the plot as rejected
  • You will receive NO assets
  • You will have your rank reverted
  • No one will receive plot credits
• Re-do threads 2 and 3
  • DM for thread 2 will need to provide challenge
  • Both threads will need to be AT LEAST 9 posts long, preferably at least 10

Understood Boss! I'll do option number two, and resubmit them to you in a jiffy!