Umbara, Conquering The Shadow World.

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1. What is going to happen in your plot?:

The Exiles will try and gain a foothold on the planet of Umbara, my Exile will have worked out a plan for this in the hopes to advance himself in the ranks.

2. What other players will be a part of this?

Any interested player with an Exile character.

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?:

Umbara and the orbit above Umbara.

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.

1. The Exiles will have to attack the small space station the Umbarans have built above their planet, resistance will be as heavy as you would expect from a small space station we also have the element of surprise which would make this mission not that hard if The Exiles are stealthy enough. This thread is open.

2. To lay the foundation for an Exile stronghold on the planet, the ideal place for the stronghold lies next to an Umbaran village however so it would need to be conquered or exterminated. The village is guarded by a small militia of Elite Umbaran warriors.

3. Take control of a large Doonium mine which is controlled by a private Umbaran miner. The objective would be to kill the security and the owner of the mine who stays at the mining work site. This thread is also open, especially for Cartel members who might have been hired to protect the mine.

4. Dealing with the Fauna: The area around the stronghold would have to be secure for the eventual construction so several Exiles would be needed to clear out the dangerous wildlife surrounding the area.

5. Nero's personal side project is to secure a cave strong in the dark side for his eventual personal hideout, the cave is currently the home to a large dark side cult of Umbarans who would need to be cleared out. He'd trick a couple Exiles or hire some cartel members to join him on this mission. The mission will be dangerous, rumor has it that the cultist leader is force sensitive and carries a light saber.



5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?

My Exile's personal gain is to gain fame and respect from his peers and perhaps the warlords and to create the foundation for his own personal Stronghold on the planet. Personally I find Umbara a really interesting world and controlling it would be beneficial to the Exiles. Also I wish to make a plot further down the line where we conquer the planet, but I feel that it would draw to much attention towards the Exiles for now. So to summarize the end goal would be to create a foothold on the planet, to secure the Doonium mine, to create the basis for my Exile's personal Stronghold and to get him fame and respect from his peers and the warlords for this plan.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.

I would need someone to NPC the Umbaran warriors/guards on the first, second and third mission. I also need a DM for the fourth mission who would DM the flora and fauna of the planet. The Fifth mission also requires a DM for the cultists.
 
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Hello there, @Nerovec. Nice plot you have here. Although of course the Exiles would try to seize Umbara. Gothic and emo af.

Anyway, setting up two individual bases (even if they were only a start to something more) for only five threads (only two of which is DM'd) sounds like a little much. There's also no guarantee the feat would get your character the respect of other Warlords, but it would give a nice boost to his reputation among other Exiles.

But I'll get right to the point, you should definitely up the opposition in this plot or stretch it out by a lot. Make several of them open and others with DM'd opposition? Or just all (or 4/5 of the threads) with DM'd resistance? Up to you, but given the rewards, you'd need some pretty hefty opposition.

Thanks!
 

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I edited the plot to give it way more opposition, hope this fixes the issue!
 

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Wow, all threads with a DM and two of which are open. Going above and beyond, I see, lmao.

Anyway, myself or any one of the other plot staff will gladly provide opposition. So, without further ado:

Approved!
 
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