The True Patriot (WIP)

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Name: Kayne Foloria
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Age: 42
Affiliation: The True Patriots
Position: Leader
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 203 lbs

Strength: 7/10
Agility: 6/10
Intelligence: 8/10
Wisdom: 7/10
Charisma: 10/10

Force Sensitive: Yes
Force Powers: None, but his untrained force sensitivity helps add to his volume when he is angry. He also can gain a tiny forewarning of an enemy's attack (danger sense). Because the skill is untrained, the warning generally means danger is imminent as opposed to occurring in a few minutes.

Personality: (Reworking)
Equipment:
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Ship:
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Bio: Kayne Foloria was born on an Imerial-controlled Ketaris. He grew up in the suburbs of the capital city in a relatively nice area, but crime was always afoot. As he grew up, he began to realize the harsh reality of life in the galaxy. However, he did not become the man he is now until quite a bit later in his life. He was living in poverty, because his parents were earning subsistence wages. Kayne did not receive a formal education. He learned how to speak, read, and write; everything else he learned through his experience on the streets. Life was harsh for him early on, but over the course of a few years, Kayne had learned many skills necessary to his survival. Generally, his childhood was not very eventful except for a few close calls with thugs and thieves. Otherwise it was a daily struggle to improve his standard of living.

When he reached his late teenage years, he had already experienced so much hardship, sadness, and rage that he felt he needed to make changes in the galaxy. He could not find an immediate solution to that problem, but what he did in the meantime was recruit the few buddies he had to create a sort of gang that would fight off the other villains in the city. They didn't have a clearly defined goal, so at this time they just meandered about picking fights with weaker opponents, giving the survivors a chance to fight for their lives against each other and then recruiting the last man standing. This lasted well into his mid-twenties. Throughout that duration of time, Kayne took the opportunity to educate himself about the galaxy, the species that occupy it, governments, technology, finance, and psychology. In the end, he had turned himself into a powerful leader.
 
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Matty

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Up his charisma to 10/10. Consider him to be like the Joker. This guy is a criminal genius who is both mentally and emotionally sick. He's the kind of guy who can get someone to do anything by playing on their weaknesses, even if its a bluff. You need to be very charismatic to do what I envision this guy doing.
 

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Fixed. Thanks for the input! :)
 

Lupe

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He looks good, love the axe
 

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Looks good bud, but less brawn and more brain! Lol, think Joker! He's a sadistic in the way he uses his mind, not his muscles.
 

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I'd suggest bumping his strength down by one or two and bumping up his intelligence a little bit. He's a mastermind behind an expansive organization and because of that, like what Apollo said, more brain than brawn. But that's up to you really. Just my two cents, feel free to use them or not. I like the direction of this character.
 

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I agree with you guys. Thanks for the advice.
 
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