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THE OUTLAWS INTEREST CHECK
You know, there is something I am missing on this RP, although being a sith or jedi seems perfectly fine. Which I prefer a dark jedi but that just dose't work out with me. What i'm trying to do here is bring Duke to bigger levels then just being a regular person. Anyways from listening to Outlander what I said earlier it seems like the faction revolves around me which i'm not aiming for. Anyways up to the mission goals, we want peace. But at the same time we want destruction. The Outlaws will stop at nothing to reign supreme to why they are here. They are unique from the other indie factions because it is open to anybody to destroy everything in their path. But once they can finish the war, they want to offer peace, but at the same time.. Offering peace may lead up to very horrible things. But the horrible things can't stop The Outlaws, but that's what they believe, it just depends on what happens at that point.
Anyways, that's what I got. Edited a few things to make it seem much better, reply in the comments if you want to be in and with your character's profile link.
ROSTER
Deadshot
EDIT: Listened to Outlander, might have some few improvements there but right now i've tried to fix what he noted on.
You know, there is something I am missing on this RP, although being a sith or jedi seems perfectly fine. Which I prefer a dark jedi but that just dose't work out with me. What i'm trying to do here is bring Duke to bigger levels then just being a regular person. Anyways from listening to Outlander what I said earlier it seems like the faction revolves around me which i'm not aiming for. Anyways up to the mission goals, we want peace. But at the same time we want destruction. The Outlaws will stop at nothing to reign supreme to why they are here. They are unique from the other indie factions because it is open to anybody to destroy everything in their path. But once they can finish the war, they want to offer peace, but at the same time.. Offering peace may lead up to very horrible things. But the horrible things can't stop The Outlaws, but that's what they believe, it just depends on what happens at that point.
Anyways, that's what I got. Edited a few things to make it seem much better, reply in the comments if you want to be in and with your character's profile link.
ROSTER
Deadshot
EDIT: Listened to Outlander, might have some few improvements there but right now i've tried to fix what he noted on.
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