The Lost Holocron of Master Zintoi

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Hello plot admins,
Here's my first attempt at an adventure-packed, 'Indy'-like storyline for my character. Perhaps you already caught wind of my little prologue thread: A New Beginning.

1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Thread 1: Jerdesh travels to Tython, where he finds the remains of the Jedi Temple. Unfortunately, he has to avoid a trap set by abominations to recover the last piece of evidence of Zintoi, the memoires of his apprentices.

Thread 2: Jerdesh will use the scrolls found on Ossus and the one aqcuired in the Temple to venture deep into Tython's rural hinterland, trying to find the last resting place of Master Zintoi. He has to complete a task mentioned on the tombstone outside Zintoi's burial before entering, involving the hunt and kill of a dangerous dark side creature.

Thread 3: Jerdesh enters the tomb after slaying the creature, uncovering Zintoi's tomb, and has to finish one last task in the burial before he can retrieve Zintoi's Holocron, an object of ancient wisdom.

Epilogue: Jerdesh returns to Ossus, hopefully with the holocron, to hand it over to Master Erach. He will submit his findings on Tython, and seek to open the holocron to uncover its secrets.
2. What other players will be a part of this?
None. This is a personal arc.

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Tython, mostly. Ossus for the epilogue.

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread 1: Jerdesh lands on Tython; finds Temple remains; Fights of abominations to retrieve scrolls.
Thread 2: Jerdesh explores Tython; discovers Zintoi's burial tomb; Recovers final ceremony before entering the tomb; goes out to find the dark side creature mentioned; and attempts to slay the creature.
Thread 3: Jerdesh returns to the tomb with evidence of creature's demise; enters tomb and finds Zintoi's coffin; Receives a final task from Zintoi's tombstone; Succeeds to finish the task and recovers Zintoi's Holocron.
Epilogue: Jerdesh returns to Ossus; shows holocron to Erach; opens holocron to find message.

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
The goal is to obtain an ancient holocron, that of Master Zintoi, one of the members of the Second Jedi Council, in order to use it to invoke a sense of unity among the splintered Order, and to use its wisdom against the dark side.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
I don't know if any creatures on Tython require NPC RP-ing, but I do require the need of somebody DMing Master Riaca Erach in the epilogue, as she is the one that receives the artefact obtained in the plot.
 

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Hi! A few issues with the plot that would need to be addressed.

  • Tython is restricted and very dangerous, more than what a level 1 could handle. Even a group of them.

  • Holocrons are incredibly rare, again something a level 1 would not be able to obtain yet.

  • A plot needs at least one other player involved to be approved.

For now, this plot is Rejected. If you change the location and end reward to something lesser, this can be resubmitted.
 
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