The Doctor

Marin

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The Doctore

AGE

► 32
SPECIES
►Chiss
HEIGHT
►5, ten
WEIGHT
► 135
EYE COLOR
► Red
HAIR COLOR
► Black
HOMEWORLD
► Chissila
GENDER
► Male
FACTION
► N/A
RANK
► N/A
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► N/A
BIOGRAPHY


Marin Drall was born on a transport ship. This ship was sent by the Chiss government deep into unknown space. However unknown space for the Chiss was known space for the empire and republic. The transport ship was dubbed ‘The Cure’. The ship landed on a planet deep in the outer rim. This planet was covered with fungi, however, there were no plants. For twenty years the Chiss conalist built. They built massive plantations and small cities. However, they were unaware of a deadly plague lurking deep in the earth. This plague was unleashed one fateful day during a mining trip made by some chiss. They cracked open a vast cave full of fungi. The plague spat out from the cave and infected the entire planet in months. Those infected with the plague would develop black sores all over their body's. Then their bones would begin to melt, making the sufferers bedridden. Marin Drall’s family was among the last to be infected. Marin’s parents died first. He became infected a day after their death. In two days he was clinging to life covered in black boils. However, Marin’s body in a surprise twist of fate defeated the plague. The boils remind and disfigured his skin.


A year after his survival Marin survived off eating food from the plantations around his family's home. One fateful day he took a deep breath and was hit by a strange smell. He followed it to a small metal structure labeled ‘Body Disposal’. He walked inside and saw a gruesome site. Hundreds of decaying bodies, all killed by the plague. All these bodies combined allowed the plague to evolve. As Marin breathed in it infected him, it was the same as the normal plague so he did not die, however it infected his mind. He dropped to the floor in a deep trance. For three days he lay in that trance, even though to him it felt like a lifetime. In this trance, he was brainwashed into seeing life as a plague. When he awoke he had only one goal in mind. He went back to his home and created a suite. The suite was a black robe with the pointed beak of plague-carrying insect. He became work on improving the plague, but before he could finish the Republic landed on the planet. They took one good look at fungi and deserted settlements and started to take off. Marin, however, scampered into one of the ships heading to Nar Shaddaa. He struggled to survive at first. Then he met a small group of assassins called 'The Old Man' They hired him to make poisons and he took the job. For payment, they gave him a place to live and hand to hand combat training. He created a long staff and using the collapsible vibroblade technology he made it so the top retracts and turns into a blade.


In the years training with the assassins he perfected many poisons, he also changed his name to 'The Doctor' He created small throwable darts that would deliver a dose of poison upon contact with an object. He also realized, as the plague lost some control over his mind. That life wasn't a plague, it was the excess of life. He left his job with the assassins and set out into the galaxy to find allies to help his cause, or to destroy unnecessary life.

Skills

- He is a extremly skilled bladed weapon fighter 9/10

- Charisma 3/10 a dead tree is better then him
- intellect He is a genious with posions but not too much else 6/10
- Strength 4/10 he is very weak




Tools/Weponas


His suite
His poison darts
His blade
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/collapsible-vibro-sword.77647/
His massive amout of posions

Relation Ships

None at the moment

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*snigger* Another Doctor eh? My exile is called the same thing.
 

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My character The Corellian (Sidhell) is part of a shadowy group known for experiments and other things. I could see them recruiting the Doctor into their league, being the assassins in the backstory.
 

Marin

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My character The Corellian (Sidhell) is part of a shadowy group known for experiments and other things. I could see them recruiting the Doctor into their league, being the assassins in the backstory.
Cool, what is there name?
 

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The group refers to itself as The Old Man (to give the impression the members are just one person, when they're actually many).
 

Marin

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The group refers to itself as The Old Man (to give the impression the members are just one person, when they're actually many).
Edit char to include them :)
 

Vosrik

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Hey there!
First of all, your background is definitely an adequate length but you'll also need to add in a Personality section and it'd be a good idea to add in an Attributes section as well. Secondly, I'm hesitant to approve what you have in the backstory. What planet is this? What's the nature of the plague and why hasn't it been seen before? Those two would likely need a writeup before they'd be approved for general use.

You will also need to create a tech writeup or use something from the Tech List for his poison darts (I'm pretty sure there's an actual dart launcher that you could use). Just make some edits and I'll review it again!
 

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Please tag me if you return to this character and have made the requested changes.
 
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