Hmm. Ok, so most of this seems fine. But it's so hard for me to tell with a lot of your systems. Hanx-Wargel SuperFlow III means absolutely nothing to myself and others when it comes to the Roleplay itself.
Just say with each of them what they actually are. Like (Light Shielding) or (Standard Sensors). Something that tells us what the actual capabilities and equivalents of the parts are.
To be honest, you probably don't need to submit this. Just choose an existing freighter, make a workshop post or a post on your Character Profile, then detail anything special about your ship. As long as they're fairly similar, you'll be able to use the ship even if it's a different model with a different appearance if the stats are fairly similar.
As I can't find anything on Wookieepedia regarding these mythical "Stasis Shields" you created, just what EXACTLY do they do that differs from a regular old deflector/particle/ray shield?
So it's just a deflector shield, right. Meaning that this thing has a whopping three shield generators, 2.0 Hyperdrive, and an MGLT of 75, coupled with two tripple-barreled laser cannons and a pair of concussion missile launchers...
Combined, that makes it a little more potent than I'd feel comfortable with. Mind dropping two shields?