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NAME: Teriza Gore
FACTION:Left Jedi order
RANK: Dark Jedi now
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 19
GENDER: male
HEIGHT: 6,0
WEIGHT: 125
EYES: blue
HAIR: black
SKIN: white
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: scar across his right hand palm.
DOMINATE HAND: ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes

STRENGTH: Teriza is force senstive so that helps. He is also very athletic for his age.
DESTERITY: Teriza is very nimble and agile reason in history


INTELLIGENCE: Teriza is very smart when it comes to getting a way with things but not with education.

WISDOM: Teriza doesn't have a lot of wisdom for his age.
CHARISMA: Teriza is a very persuasive kid. Most people let him go becuase of his age or even how good he is with his words.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Run
Force Jump
Telepathy
Psychometry
Force pull,push
Force sense
Force Sight
telekinseses
preconigtion
force healing

SKILLS:
running, thieving, persuading, form 4

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form 4 atura

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Describe in moderate detail the strengths and weaknesses of your character.

GEAR: small handgun, Red saber, jedi robe

Ships: has none

PETS:
Teriza has a dog.

PERSONALITY:
Teriza has a attitude to some people. Some say he is a kind kid. Teriza has a lot of evil in him. So he is usually have a huge attitude. If he is trying to get away with something he will have a nice little suck up mood. So he is overall have a smart a** attitude.

HISTORY:
Teriza was born in Ossus, with his father and mother. His parent's were traders that worked in morning and midday. One day when Teriza turned 12 his parent's were at work. Someone came to them to buy a robot part. His parents didn't take the deal he offered on the spot the stranger shot both of them and toke everything.
Teriza waited that day for his parents to return so he could get his present. That was when Teriza grabbed a knife in his bedroom that he got from his dad when he turned 11. and a chain. His parents told him if they didn't return one day grab the knife and a chain, and wait there and don't go to the trading stall. Of course he disobeyed half of that. He grabbed the items they told him to get but he went to the trading stall.
That's where he saw people crowded around two people. That was when he saw both of his parents dead with shots through there head and everything gone except for one thing. Under the stall was a cage that held a dog. That had a collar that said josie, and happy birthday Teriza. He kept that dog and travels with it everywhere by himself. He never returned back to his house. He lived on doing small jobs for money. Stealing a small handgun from a adult man. He trains with it every saturday. The Ossus police still look for him to investigate him or take him to a orphanage. So That where it brings him 17 year old kid using his nimble abile skills to thieve.

KILLS:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=14174
 
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Tatooine is not on the accepted planets list. its hasn't been discovered yet. You'll have to pick a different planet.
 

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Why would anyone give a 6 year old a real gun?
 

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Did she invent the holo-net and galactic warming?
 

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Why would anyone give a 6 year old a real gun?

she did so if anything happened which did he had something to protect himself they didn't let him touch. when he was little.
 

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she did so if anything happened which did he had something to protect himself they didn't let him touch. when he was little.
Umm, a bit contradictory there: if it was for an emergency, it would be readily available. But if they didn't let him touch the gun, then it would be locked up. 6 year olds don't have much common sense, anyways.
If you not here to tell me to fix something then dont post in this thread

same for you./no she didn't.
Avoid bossing other people around please. It's the administration's job to do that.
 
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If you not here to tell me to fix something then dont post in this thread

same for you./no she didn't.

Okay, what I did was make a joke. Last I checked you have no silver name so you can't tell me what to do. Trust me right now you don't want me to critique your profile. It's got alot of work to go.
 

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Umm, a bit contradictory there: if it was for an emergency, it would be readily available. But if they didn't let him touch the gun, then it would be locked up. 6 year olds don't have much common sense, anyways.

Avoid bossing other people around please. It's the administration's job to do that.

i did that becuase i really dont want people spamming in my character app.
 

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i did that becuase i really dont want people spamming in my character app.

lol then I suggest you go to a different site, seriously have you looked at what gets discussed in character apps?

Just relax a bit and we'll get along fine.

Try not to use "Teriza did this" for everything involving your character in the history, it's really boring that way. Embrace the pronouns.
 

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i did that becuase i really dont want people spamming in my character app.
Very rarely does anyone get warned for spamming here on SWRP. This is a lax community.
 

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lol then I suggest you go to a different site, seriously have you looked at what gets discussed in character apps?

Just relax a bit and we'll get along fine.

Try not to use "Teriza did this" for everything involving your character in the history, it's really boring that way. Embrace the pronouns.

should i edit or is it fine. / Sorry for who ever i tryed bossing around little mad, and tired.
 

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should i edit or is it fine. / Sorry for who ever i tryed bossing around little mad, and tired.

Just have to find a balance in there. You're first paragraph was good but then as it got longer you started using only Teriza for almost everything.
 

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should i edit or is it fine. / Sorry for who ever i tryed bossing around little mad, and tired.
Personally, I'd say children shouldn't have access to guns, period. 11 is quite a bit older than 6, but it doesn't really change the fact that youngsters are not trustworthy to have access to any sort of weapon.
 

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Personally, I'd say children shouldn't have access to guns, period. 11 is quite a bit older than 6, but it doesn't really change the fact that youngsters are not trustworthy to have access to any sort of weapon.

That would mean i would have to change my age or like my hold bio. so i still might keep it at 11.
 
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