Sukai

[Zekec2020]

(Yes..the clothes don't exactly match, but I couldn't find a decent Mikkian.)
NAME: Sukai
FACTION: Jedi
RANK:Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Mikkian
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5'9
WEIGHT: 154 lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Purple
SKIN: Purple
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Not Yet
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: She works out often and does bounty, being strong 9/10
DEXTERITY: She is nimble and agile, quick on her feet 7/10
CONSTITUTION: She is healthy and happy 10/10
INTELLIGENCE: She is lower than average, due to growing up being a slave 4/10
WISDOM: She is not very wise, and always rushes things.4/10
CHARISMA: She has a little charisma. 3/10

PERSONALITY:
Sutai is a harsh, shy-like character. She usually keeps to herself, and usually never talks unless needed. She is tough and has a lot of patience. She is very kind and generous once you befriend her and talk to her. She only fights if threatened or needs to for money or supplies, and usually a person who does not like killing, although she did it before joining the Jedi.

BIOGRAPHY:
She grew up on an unknown world, forced into to slavery with her parentage. She worked on farms with several other slave families owned by a undocumented farm owner. Her slaver was very strict, whipping them and killing many of his slaves that did not satisfy his work. Her parents were among those that died, which pushed her to the edge and started planning a way to kill her slave master at age 12. After a month of planning, she escaped her quarters at night and killed one of his guards by snapping his neck, and taking his gun. She quietly went to the house and snuck in, killing his entire family which including his two daughters and son, his wife and himself. She later went into hiding at the closest major city, stealing and becoming a bounty hunter to survive. She accepted many bounties, Including murder, theft, and many others. She killed up to 20 people within her first two months as a bounty hunter, staying in the shadows and only coming out if she needed a bounty. One of these bounties was to murder a women who was said to have killed children, but it was a lie. Sutai watched her for weeks, picking the best time to strike. One night she got into her home, and while she was sleeping she silently choked her until she died, and when she was about to leave a child walked in and started crying. From that day on, she vowed not to kill anyone again, so she left world on an escort ship. But soon into her journey the ship had malfunctions, forcing it to crash land on Lothal, and ended up being beside the Jedi Temple. Some of the people near the temple came and helped the passengers off the ship, including Sukai.

FORCE POWERS:
TBA

SKILLS:
She has great acrobatic skills, and is good with daggers and other weapons.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: No Lightsaber Yet

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths

• Acrobatic
• Force-Sensitive
• Nimble & Agile
• Basic Survival Skills

Weaknesses

• Ignorant(Not as Intelligent)
• Cannot Handle Friends Dying
• Not Good Getting Friends
• (I will add one more soon?)

GEAR: The clothes on her back

SHIP: Not yet

DROIDS:


Companions/Crew:

PETS: None Yet

KILLS: None Yet

BOUNTIES COLLECTED: None Yet

DUELING RING MATCHES: None Yet

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: None Yet

ROLE-PLAYS:

 

[Marcus]

Alright, a few issues here. First, she is young and just found as a Jedi, but marked as a Knight? Padawan rank is not required here on this site, but the way you write her she needs to be a Padawan.

Second, her turnaround is a bit awkward. I LOVE the story you tell with her being a fairly evil hunter, but then turning when she sees the child. But then all of a sudden she turns away and then is discovered as a Force Sensitive? I know the Force works in strange ways, but that might need some elaborating on.

As soon as you hit the ball rolling, or as you develop thoughts for this character, even if she has not learned things ICly you might consider what she can do with the Force, and some of her other skills/strengths/weaknesses. There is far more to this character than you have written - I can sense it. But we need to see that written down.

Great start, but build out a bit more for us and we'll go from there!

 

[Elijah Brockway]

I'd also like more description regarding the attributes and skills. As it is, you don't really tell us much; while that's alright regarding the lightsaber and force stuff, you really should give detailed descriptions regarding what she is and isn't good at, as well as something concrete we can understand about her attributes and what effect they have on her as a character.

And that's alongside the points Marcus made there.

 

[Zekec2020]

Thanks for telling me, I appreciate it..still stuck on a good way to introduce her to the force though.