Ster Oilian (Character Sheet)

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Name: Ster Oilian
Faction: Independent
Rank: N/A
Species: "Frunchie" or Frunchettan-sai
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 119
Eye Color: Brown
Hair: Black
Skin: Pale, Chalky Blue
Credits: 1,000
Distinguishing Marks: Large Wrists due to his species' double jointed wrists and a blackened burn across his inner-left angle
Force Sensitive: No

Strength: Stronger than an average human due to his species' double jointed wrists
Dexterity: Mildly more agile than one of his own species
Constitution: Very fragile arms, buts can block knives with his hands/wrists
Intelligence: Grew up a street urchin on his home planet of Corellia, no formal education
Wisdom: Very street smart and knows a lot about the "Limits" of life while being poor
Charisma: Very good at haggling and swindling for a good price at shops

Skills: Very good handyman, especially with landspeeders

Strengths and Weaknesses: Very good haggler and can weasel his way out of most problems and his only major weakness is his tendency to get very angry, very quickly.

Gear: Always carries around .9 fluid ounces of the Rokna blue acid-poison on him as an emergency measure,
N-30 vibroknife

Personality: Very weaselly at first, but is very kind and mature once you get to know him. Growing up on the streets of Corellia and being only able to take odd jobs to make scraps of money, he is very wise with money and can budget very well, but is most times just called greedy or at the least frugal. He gets angry quickly and can go into blind rage in what seems to be a blink of an eye. He is a rampant pessimist and at most times thinks the world is just unfair to him and everyone he comes in contact with. So in conclusion, He is very easily angered and is very pessimistic. P.S: He is also very good with mechanics and believes its the only think he doesn't screw up.

Biography: Orphaned due to an accident at his home when he was only 2: He has grown up on the streets of Corellia, without many other options in life. He started to love sculpting when a famous Ithorian sculptor was working on his street one night and took him in until the sculptor was killed by a professional hit-woman hired by a rival sculptor, so again Ster wound up on the street.
He found a job as a landspeeder repairman and has been there for a long time. His only drive to not commit suicide is that he wants to track down the hit-woman who killed the kind sculptor who was the only creature kind enough to take him out of the cold and the darkness of the streets.

 

[Cortan]

Whilst technically a profile doesn't need approval to start rping, various bits of a profile may do, and others end up positively preferred.

First is that I'm going to out on a limb and guess that these 'Frunchies' aren't on the approved list of player created species, which considering how little we can gleam from this profile aside of some double jointed wrists, and a pale blu skin colour, might be pretty important.

Second is that, well, could you maybe have a history that isn't only a paragraph long? There is so little that one gets told about the character when there could be so much. What was it like living on the street? Living with the Ithorian? Heck, what was the Ithorian's name? How did the assassination happen? Stuff like that is a good starting point for expansion.