Soth Nuevole

Soth Nuevole

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Name: Soth Nuevole
Faction: Sith
Rank: Marauder
Species: Mirialan
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Force sensetive: yes, somewhat trained

appearance:
height: 6’1”
weight: 190
eyes: green
hair: black
skin complexion: olive

description: soth has long black hair down to the middle of his back. he is physically fit, very muscular due to his workouts. there are a few small scars on his face, barely noticable to the naked eye. soth is almost always adorned in an onrate ancient armor that he had taken from a man he killed in combat. it holds no special ability, it is just very flexible and can withstand a sword strike but because it has seperation for flexebility he is vulnerable to knife wounds in close combat.

attrubutes
strengths and weaknesses
+physically strong
+quick learner
+learns new force ability’s fast
+lightsaber combat
+force combat
+loyal

-quickly aggrivated
-frustrated easily (mostly in combat, soth will try to use all of his strength wich only tires him out faster)
-kill first ask questions later
-is a little too reliant on force powers (block pain etc.)
-very impatient ( not willing to let things progress or run their course he will try to make things happen now which usually ends up badly or soth.)

Personality

Soth was a cruel boy growing up, laughing at the pain of others. Knowing full well the consequences of his actions he still did not care about anyone or anything. Carrying this trait into manhood he is now cruel to beings he believes are beneth him. Since he has knowledge of the darkside of the force he believes he has the upper hand on everyone he meets.

Biography

As a boy soth was always the mean kid, torturing animals and what not. His family was well off, a respected family in the community. His mother and father tried to raise him with respect and courtesy. they believe that the death of his brother is where it all started. The Nuevole boys were inseparable, always playing and joking around. Also the boys being only one year apart helped them become very close. One night while they were walking home from playing with the local kids the two boys looked into the night sky, saying how many worlds the other would visit when they were old enough.

Within a blink of an eye a man appeard from the shadows, blaster in hand pointing it at Soth and his brother Quillian. A bright light flashed from the barrell of the blaster, and Quillian crumbled to the ground. Time seemed to stop as Soth stared at the lifeless body of his best friend as he lay dead on the cold concrete. Soth didn’t see the man run off, all he heard was the scurrying of footsteps. Soth screamed so loud and horrible that you could hear it for blocks. Kneeling down and cradling his brothers head in his arms, tears streaming down his face, he knew his life would be changed forever.

Soth awoke in a cold sweat, remembering the dream. But it wasnt a dream, just a memory. As a man Soth knew that he would never be as vulnerable as he was all those years ago. He sought out to train in hand to hand combat, learning from anyone that would put time and effort into him. Soth trained with at least half a dozen mentors, all of them losing interest when they discovered all he was after was vengeance. In that time he had become very proficient in hand to hand combat, taking something from every teacher and combining all of his learning’s.

The night of his 22nd birthday, Soth was sitting at a table in a local tavern. He liked to be left alone so he sat in the back corner, the shadows clinging to his body as he scanned the room continuously. A sharp hissing sound caught his ears as Soth looked towards the entrance, the large tranparasteel doors opened up and a cloaked figure entered the establishment. Soth had never seen this man before and the strange man now held his full attention. The young warrior continued to watch the stranger throughout the night.

“i know what it is you seek”

Soth heard the words resound in his head but no one had spoken to him. He couldn’t explain what happened but he knew what he heard. Trying to figure out where the sound had come from, Soth did not see the cloaked figure approach him.

“Hello, i am Rin Kharr. You will do fine. Follow me”


Training


Months after meeting Rin, he had started to teach Soth how to use the force. Rin explained how he was a Jedi. He was banned from the order long ago for using force powers that were tied to the dark side of the force. Now he was trying to prove he could be a worthy Jedi.

Soth was shown how to use different force powers such as block pain, force push, moving objects along with how to use a light saber in combat. No matter how hard Rin tried to teach his student how to let go of his feelings, Soth had too much anger, too much hate inside. Rin knew that he was failing again.

Soth awoke slowly, putting on his gear like he did every day; he left his house to go meet Rin. Only his teacher never showed. This went on for days and Soth could not figure out what happened. He was so angry, so mad. The young force user went crazy, destroying everything in sight. It was that day that Soth vowed to find Rin Khaar and destroy him.

In the following years Soth searched for teachings of the force but found very little. He needed to continue his learning, loving the feel of the force flowing through his veins. The hate that Soth had only made him stronger, made his reflexes quicker, made his killing easier.
 
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Wit

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Nice start to your first character! A few suggestions. There is a huge gap between when he starts as a kid torturing animals and becoming a 22 year old young warrior. How did he become a warrior, did he ever do anything to attract the fallen Jedi? Also, you should add more details about what you mean by going crazy and destroying everything in sight. We try to keep overpowered displays of the force in check.
 

Outlander

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Hey! Good first character man! Just a couple things I wanted to address.
  • Is there any way to use regular capitalization? It's a bit hard to read with it all capitalized.
  • You might want to add some more tangible weaknesses. Right now, he seems pretty darn powerful, with his only weaknesses being stuff like how he kills first and how he gets angry.
  • Is he a Sith? You have him tagged as a Sith, and you've asked about the Sith faction, but he doesn't seem to be aligned with the Sith.
 

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oh ok i will take that off and sorry about the caps. sorry about the tag i will remove it. i just thought since he is a sith character i should put it. and ill work on the weaknesses. thank you for all of your advise it is greatly apreciated.
 

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i will work on this to make it better. i just put a gap to signify that he was evil even as a child. also when i said he destroyed everything in sight i meant physically not with the force. i will be more specific.
 
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Sure, no problem. If you plan to have him as a Sith and will sign him up for the faction then the sith tag is correct. Only need to change it if he's indie for now and will join the sith at some later point of time.
 

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Yeah I'd appreciate it if you got rid of the caps first. I also need to know if you are an acolyte or marauder
 
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