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NAME: Cilia Tyrus
FACTION: Sith
RANK: unknown
SPECIES: Codeu-ji/Anzat hybrid
AGE: 300
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 1.524 meters tall
WEIGHT: 50kg
EYES: yellow/red with deep black pupils
HAIR: none
SKIN: Pale
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes
STRENGTH: 3/10 not very phisically strong compared to most her size.
DEXTERITY: 10/10 she makes up her strength with being extremely quick, agile, and flexible
CONSTITUTION: 7/10 here high regeneration helps her remain healthy and immune to most illnesses.
INTELLIGENCE: 4/10 she prefers primitive approaches over anything else.
WISDOM: 4/10 does not know much outside of her lifestyle other than tactics.
CHARISMA: 9/10 amazing sith general and assassin. Exceptional and gaining information by any means necessary.

PERSONALITY:
Like most Sith, Cilia is cold and dispassionate, and followed the commands of the Dark lord of the sith without question or hesitation, she decapitated her first master just in a duel for fun. She was unmerciful like most Sith, keeping prisoners alive only for the amount of time needed to extract the information she desired. Devoted to the Sith order as few, she held little regard for her life, as she Proved during her battles against countless jedi that she would welcome death when and if her time was complete, if such was the will of the Sith lord or her master. Despite her quick temper, she was very cunning and swift, allowing her to outsmart most foes. Cilia has a tendancy to be vendictive and inconsiderate to her fellow sith. She takes great pleasure in torturing others and relishes in witnessing it first hand. Being as cold as she was she was constantly calculating, and unafraid to commit unspeakable acts if that suited her agenda. She lacks the ability to control her emotions and has a tendancy to lash out.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
Cilia, stands 1.5 meters tall weighing 50kg lean muscle, has high regenerative capabilities resulting in a physical ageless appearance and an exceptional longevity, upon her face Lie Hidden proboscises that she drains her victims life Force from as she kills them. During a duel against a jedi master, he used her own force lightening against her causing her previous ships explosion which ultimately resulted in her nose being severed from her face and being permanently bald. She bares 4 arms, and all 5 of her senses honed to track jedi. She filed her teeth to a point and split her tongue to help instill fear when she is gazed upon.

BIOGRAPHY:
The female codru-ji/anzat hybrid known as Cilia Tyrus was born on the planet Korriban. At an early age she had a nack for combat, Being able to wield multiple (4)weapons at once. She caught the attention of the Dark Lord Of The Sith, once she was found to be a force sensitive.

Being kidnapped as a child by the sith, the DLOTS raised Cilia in the sith arts brainwashing her to hunt and kill Jedi, which resulted in her becoming adept in the dark arts of the force. Shortly after becoming a promising sith, she was able to carve her way through many Jedi simultaneously. Over time Cilia would become a well known sith carrying the name "the witch of pain", being described as having an insatiable desire for knowledge and power in the force. The "DLOTS" believed that it was simply youthful exuberance and eagerness, and she expected her to become a champion of the Order in no time. Overtime she grew proud of her talents, Cilia grew exceptional in combat, and had a history of being feared by all who came across her path both sith and jedi.

Cilia stood at her brothers right hand in the battle to assassinate the Jedi GrandMaster to which they failed and resulted in her loseing her brother. After her brothers loss to the lightside she grew more and more angry and hateful towards the jedi Order.

She vowed herself to the Dark arts, making a covenant to stop the Jedi and all of those who oppose the sith. Mastering the art of combat she wreaked havoc upon her opposers.

Her name carried far and wide grasping to a legacy Of terror. After she made her pact for the sith cause she fully committed herself to the dark arts after assassinating not only her parents but her village as well, showing her abilities and her devotion the the dark lord of the sith. Over time Cilia underwent a few body modifications, resulting in her tongue being split, and her teeth being filled to sharp points. Only, Simply for intimidation of her enemies as she tortures and kills them.

She bore a daughter Years later, and While Cilia was on a mission one of her brethren slipped into her chamber and killed her daughter while accussing the jedi order of the malicious deed. Out of anger Cilia shut out her brothers and sisters of the sith order, and only held her attention to her master and the sith lord Not to pay mind to any other.

Overtime she broke down losing her emotional connection to life itself, ultimately resulting in her willingness to accept death if it came for her. She fled deep amongst the planet Umbara, only to practice the Siths dark alchemy and magic to help her On her journey, to which she became known to some as "Sorceress Tyrus, the Witch of pain" recognized as the embodiment of the dark side and her dark magic, for her relentless desire to become one with the dark side.

FORCE POWERS/ABILITIES:
Formidable user of the darkside of the force. Cilia has decent knowledge of the lightside bettering her understanding of her enemies, and helps her get into their thought process to gain an advantage over them.

SKILLS:
amazing hunting and tracking abilities, Excellent tacticion and strategist.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS
Master of Ataru, Juyo, and adept in Trakata

GEAR:
Cilia carries 4 dark blood red curved lightsabers that can interlock at the hilt creating twin double bladed sabers, made by her own design. Her weapons are empowered by 2 crystals in each hilt that were employed in a bifurcating cyclical-pulse resulting in her whips being able to be used when wet. The hilts are made from an intertwining of mandalorian iron, Phrik, beskar, cortosis weaves, songsteel, and ultrachrome ONLY enabling it to take extreme amounts of damage.
Cilia created her Synthetic Crystals Amidst her sith masters furnace for several weeks, channeling her dark Force energy and fearce personality into the crystals as they formed giving them a blood red appearance with a dark black ora around the blade, making them unique in every way, including their color. Each of her weapons flaunted with a rugged elegance and a primitive beauty eched into the hilts signifying her Darkness within.

Cilia wears a black cloak over her dark battle scarred armor.

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Cilias ship was gifted tp her by the Dark lord of the sith. Its an All matte black, Highly Modified "X-70B Phantom Class Prototype" that was 100 meters in length, 117 meters wide and 25 meters tall, powered by 2 compact Sossen-3 ion drives aided by 2 sspo5 dual hyperdrive (one primary amd one emergency) to help move the heavily armored yacht. Armed with 2 quad-heavy repeater cannons in the front, 2 dual-medium cannons in the rear.

The hull was painted a dull deep black to blend in and not reflect any lighting, and was made of a prototype steath plating. The ship was outfitted with a LIMITED-use cloaking devise that allowed the ship to remain cloaked for 13 minutes but the ship was not able to fire its weapons, once fired the cloak drops. After a full use of the cloak it take an hour to recharge. The ship communicates with a prototype long-range holotransmitter along with a high powered sensor array.

The inside hull had been reconstructed with only 3 full master living quarters(for sith only), a cell to accommodate 6 prisoners, meditation room, training room, escape pod, bridge/ droid pilot, gunners stations manned by droids, full spa for the empress, a full jedi/sith holo-navigation/communication room, full lab, and medbay.

Ship history:
The ship is One of the most sophisticated lightweight starships in the galaxy, the X-70B Phantom is an experimental model designed to resemble a luxury shuttle while possessing the combat capacity of a heavy starfighter. Beneath the sleek metal exterior and the interior wood paneling is an unmatched density of sophisticated circuits, wires, cooling systems and other components, many never before used in a starship of this size. The X-70B shields its military-grade hardware from virtually all scanners, allowing it to travel unnoticed among civilian vessels, Its own sensor capabilities are formidable.

Maintenance work on the X-70B is extraordinarily difficult and expensive due to the super-compressed nature of its mechanics, making the Phantom-class an unlikely candidate for wide scale production. This difficulty is only aggravated by the fact that Imperial Intelligence refuses to share its ship specifications with the Imperial military. The starships of the Imperial Navy are the product of centuries of military research and development. The Empire designed its fleet to destroy the Republic as quickly and efficiently as possible. During the years of the Great War, however, the Empire refined its design strategies. Co-opting newly discovered technologies and revising blueprints according to lessons learned, Imperial engineers built a new generation of starships. First among these, Imperial intelligence commissioned the X70B Phantom the most low-profile, high-tech starship the galaxy has ever known. From its radar-resistant sleek exterior paneling to the next-generation navigation systems, the Phantom is so far ahead of its time that mass production would never be possible. This mission superiority is augmented by communications links directly into the Intelligence databases in both the Sith and Imperial capital. More likely, the experimental prototypes built so far will be designated for critical Intelligence missions, and entrusted only to the most professional and responsible sith Agents.
 
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Dakota

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Good concept to start, but it needs a lot of balancing; mainly in the area of abilities and skills.

Being an "unparalleled user of the darkside," a master of deception, unparalleled practitioner of torture and interrogation techniques, and a master duelist while simultaneously having knowledge of the lightside at once seems pretty OP for a Sith just starting out. That, and there aren't any weaknesses as far as I've seen. Like I said, love the concept, some of the ideas just need a little curtailing.
 

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Will do. Any suggestions?
 

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I'm only going to comment on a few things.

Firstly, Ditch the pictures other than the main one. It's super confusing looking through the profile to know exactly what i'm looking at. Every single picture is different. Its cool to have art, if it is consistent but in this case... the pictures have little to do with the character.

The biography... you build this character up to be second only to the dark lord of the sith... You killed the Jedi Grand Master. It's very jumbled and confusing, it seems like you are building this character to be some kind of powerful snowflake, rather than having an actual story.

The weapons, the next timeline is going to be heavily based on PvP. Those weapons you have, especially the lightwhip is going to make you a really easy target imo. Also, the inpracticality of using 4 lightwhips, if that's what you plan on doing. I just don't see that being a thing.

That ship has "2 quad-heavy repeater cannons in the front, 4 dual-medium cannons in the rear and 16 light cannons 8 on each sides. 2 hidden torpedo launchers, 2 hidden missile launchers and 2 multipurpose warhead launchers placed beside the bridge."

This needs to be toned WAY WAY down, this is a personal ship not a mini star destroyer.
 
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