Sofiya Pavlovna

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Sofiya Pavlovna
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Character Information

Gender: Female
Race: Human
Age: 31 years
Height: 1.8 meters
Weight: 58 Kilograms
Hair color: Blonde
Eye color: Teal
Sexuality: Bisexual
Force sensitive: Negative


Sofiya is a tall, strong looking woman whose right side of her face is covered in burn scars. She maintains a very presentable look at all times.



"S.P.E.C.I.A.L" attributes

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Sofiya is a very intelligent woman who can easily find ways to get what she wants from someone. Although she is not as charismatic as other senators, she uses her wits to whip others to her side.



Inventory & personal assets

Sofiya always carries a dagger sized vibroblade, as well as a blaster pistol on her.

The top 11 stockholders of the Fondor Shipyards make up the positions in the Fondor Guild of Shiprights (FGS). Sofiya currently is a member of FGS and was voted to be Fondor’s senator via this process. All members of FGS together control 68% of the Fondor shipyard stocks; the remaing percentage is controlled by others.

Housing: Fondor penthouse and complementary Senator’s apartment on Chandrilla

Liquid assets: 260 thousand credits (from saving up her royalty earnings)

Stocks:
11% of the Fondor shipyards (this was willed to her by her deceased father)
16% of the Fondor Mining Company

Income:
Senator = 5,000 credits monthly
Royalty earnings = 5,000 credits monthly



Personality
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As wise as an owl, and as witty as a fox. Sofiya is a mastermind of extortion. Not afraid to show force when needed, Sofiya uses her resources and assets to make sure you come back begging for mercy. Some would say Sofiya is a completely different person as a senator. As a senator, She is very likable by most and uses her words to sway others.
The truth is her self-centered motives drive Sofiya towards a thirst for power and money.



Political views

Rebellion​

FGS has had to see the current issues at hand. The Fondorian rebels are beginning to cause turmoil, the rebellion is causing tourism to plummet, and workers are beginning to strike. All of these issues have become major concerns for Fondor’s status.

Sith​

Although Fondor is not in any direct fear of a Sith attack, war mean a higher demand for war supplies. Sofiya believes that creating a massive Republic army/navy would create a large economic growth and would also eliminate the sith threats. In addition, this army could also be used to help aid the destruction of the Fondorian rebellion.

Jedi​

Sofiya sees the Jedi as a bunch of Ignorant cultists following the same practices as the Sith. She believes that in order to protect Fondor and the rest of the galactic planets the jedi should be removed from contact with the senate planets.

Border Aliance​

Sofiya believes that the senate should provide military assistance to the frontliners of the battle against the sith.

How to achieve these objectives?​

By enforcing a galactic draft we may create a force large enough to overcome the Sith and their forces. If the Senate could fund for development of Anti-force user technology the soldiers of the senate can overcome the major threats they would face.



Biography

Sofiya was born from a moderately wealthy family in Fondor. Her father was a shareholder in the Fondor mining company. After turning 20, Sofiya decided to attend the Fondor Academy of Engineering and design. She soon created a handful of patents that significantly improved the Fondor ships. Despirate to get ahold of these patents the Fondor Shipyard signed an agreement saying is Sofiya released the patents’ she would receive 2 percent of all income received by the Shipyard. Quickly agreeing to the deal, Sofiya began using her new income to buy stock in the Fondor Mining Company. Conveniently, her father died shortly after Sofiya received her royalty agreement. In his will he had wrote to give all of his stocks in the Fondor Shipyard to Sofiya. Together these two events allowed Sofiya to pogostick to the top of the Fondor Hierarchy within the next 7 years.
As a member of FGS Sofiya learned the hardships and dangers that a high valued member of society deals with. One evening someone broke down the door of Sofiya’s house. They ran in charging at her. Luckily, she was quickly able to fire a blaster at the attempted murderer. She soon realized that a FGS rival, who was hoping to remove a serious rival, hired the killer. Shocked Sofiya did the only thing she could think to do… She retaliated. She hired a bounty to eliminate the opponent. Sofiya was voted into the senate spot because the members of FGS knew she would do what she could not only for the company, but also for Fondor.


 
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I really don't mean for this to sound rude in any way man, just an observation. But i think the whole problem a lot of us have with Krass is how he unjustifiably has so much money. And i kinda see a trend with this character.
 

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I like this characrer, I think she has a great Bio and Personality, and it representing a fantastic planet that allows for you to generate a great dela of RP and stories for other players around her and Fondor. However, I then read this section of the Character:


''Sofiya always carries a dagger sized vibroblade, as well as a blaster pistol on her.
Sofiya owns a penthouse in Fondor City: valued at 700 thousand credits
Sofiya owns 42% of stocks in the Fondor Shipyard: valued at 463 billion credits
Sofiya owns 67% of stocks in the Fondor Mining Co.: valued at 370 billion credits
As CEO Sofiya receives control of all spending by the Fondor Shipyard. She also receives a 2% royality on every purchased product from the Fondor Shipyard. (40 billion credits a year)
Current Liquid value: 919 Billion credits
Current retailed value: 76 Billion Credits''

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As can be seen by seen by the gesture of the above Roman Emperor, this is bad. Quite simply characters can only start of with 1000 Credits, but of course there is some flexibility when it comes to Senators. Some. Giving your Senator control over the largest company on Fondor, alongside all of its money, and 919,000,000,000 Credits is obscene in the very least, and frankly not needed for a Senator.

I would strongly suggest that this is removed, so as to fall in line with the Character Rules, and to remove the concept of a Senator having total control over one of the largest companies in the Galaxy, as it basically makes your character an indie faction in their own right, which is not really allowed and/or fair at all.
 

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I really don't mean for this to sound rude in any way man, just an observation. But i think the whole problem a lot of us have with Krass is how he unjustifiably has so much money. And i kinda see a trend with this character.
mine is more reasonable though: I am the CEO of the entire Fondor shipyards and the senator of the entire planet so...>.> idk
Honestly no one "uses" money anyway unless you are an indie faction. I just had to place a number down for planetary purposes.
 

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As can be seen by seen by the gesture of the above Roman Emperor, this is bad. Quite simply characters can only start of with 1000 Credits, but of course there is some flexibility when it comes to Senators. Some. Giving your Senator control over the largest company on Fondor, alongside all of its money, and 919,000,000,000 Credits is obscene in the very least, and frankly not needed for a Senator.

I would strongly suggest that this is removed, so as to fall in line with the Character Rules, and to remove the concept of a Senator having total control over one of the largest companies in the Galaxy, as it basically makes your character an indie faction in their own right, which is not really allowed and/or fair at all.
This. I agree with this.

the character is sound, and i like her alot. But i agree with this point very much so.
 

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mine is more reasonable though: I am the CEO of the entire Fondor shipyards and the senator of the entire planet so...>.> idk
Honestly no one "uses" money anyway unless you are an indie faction. I just had to place a number down for planetary purposes.

I disagree.
 

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Could you clarify? It's human nature to disagree

I disagree. Not only does this wealth allow you a great deal of opportunities IC, being CEO also allows you great power and influence. Add on being the Senator and we have a Marry Sue of influence.
 

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I disagree. Not only does this wealth allow you a great deal of opportunities IC, being CEO also allows you great power and influence. Add on being the Senator and we have a Marry Sue of influence.

Agreed.
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I disagree. Not only does this wealth allow you a great deal of opportunities IC, being CEO also allows you great power and influence. Add on being the Senator and we have a Marry Sue of influence.
Agreed. A mini Krass if you will.
 

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As Fondor government is ran by the FGS (Fondor Guild of Starshipwrights) it is only natural for the planet to be ran by someone of the guild. I can reduce her stock ownership, starting funds, and CEO rights, but she will still have stocks in the companies (just lowered) and be a member of the FGS.
Does this fix the issue at hand?
 

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Agreed. A mini Krass if you will.
the only thing that Irks me at the moment is that other senators have the things not just krass and unless you are going to do this to everyone it is unfair to pick on a handful of members
 

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I would be more than happy to comment similarly on any other Senator you care to link me.
 

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@argutator hey yea just bring it down so it's know where near 1 trillion credits alright? My suggestion
 
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