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I think your drawings a little off( for instance, Aria is a bit closer to Ryu and I don't view the halls as perpendicular ) but I still think its a pretty good depiction of where everyone is in relation to each other. I'll be waiting for everyone to agree on this before I post but that's ok because I have to make some edits now.
 

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I didn't know the halls were perpendicular. I figured Davik just kinda ran past where Hausser would be standing. Talia would be following him and would stop at Hausser instead of going forward to where Aria, Lamper's dude and Tsu are. Am I totally off too? Lol
 

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Well I'm going with the two hall entrances idea. And I'm chuckin the perpendicular halls out the window. Now I believe I've waited long enough. If anyone has any issues with me going with the two entrance thing, then bring it up later and we'll discuss changing it eh.
 

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1. He fired six reflex shots. That seems like a lot, and it seems weird that they have such a high chance of hitting the target. @Ecclessey
So to clarify, although I think Lamper already had the jest of it, Davik is not by any means a (veteran) combatant. He's scared and he shoots six times because he's the kind of guy that shoots frantically in the direction of the threat and afterwards looks if he hit anything.

I wrote that at least one bolt would hit her, but I didn't mean they thus all were aimed well and one would be impossible the miss, I meant that only one bolt could be a threat to Aria while the others flew past them or hit the ceiling. Davik is by no means a master marksman. However, there's no way, to my knowledge and in the scope of my imagination, that Aria would know Davik is there, let alone shooting at her. What I'd suggest is taking one bolt in a non-lethal spot that only derails the attack on Lamper that she was already committed to.

My apologies if I was unclear.
 

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@Narsi Talia announced her presence before shooting. You can have your guy pause and not take any hits. You don't have to take damage and we can say she never fired. Since my dialogue would happen right as you begin to approach him, you can pause prematurely.
 

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I know but he was in a sprint so I thought it would be more realistic this way than an instant stop. @Sreeya
 

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I know but he was in a sprint so I thought it would be more realistic this way than an instant stop. @Sreeya

It's totally your call! I won't mind if you have him stop before the bolts fire off, since Talia would def give him a realistic opportunity to stop (or she wouldn't make the threat at all). Admittedly, I like what you did with them haha I replied btw.
 

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Tsunami brought it to my attention that I didn't really use the force when I deflected that shot. Do you want me to add a sentence in their to correct that real quick?
 

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Tsunami brought it to my attention that I didn't really use the force when I deflected that shot. Do you want me to add a sentence in their to correct that real quick?

Sure no problem. I also know you don't use it to deflect, so I wouldn't count it against you.
 

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I'm ok with the way everything has turned out but I got a question @Lamper
I think the "goofproof shot (awesome wording)" is ok and all but I find it unlikely that none of Aria's stabbing attacks landed. I don't think they need to do serious damage or anything, but at this point she is right above you. Wouldn't it be more realistic if she at least gave you a glancing cut before you fired an unavoidable point blank shot? You don't have to do anything but she should be very close to you and I think it would be more realistic.
 

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I'm ok with the way everything has turned out but I got a question @Lamper
I think the "goofproof shot (awesome wording)" is ok and all but I find it unlikely that none of Aria's stabbing attacks landed. I don't think they need to do serious damage or anything, but at this point she is right above you. Wouldn't it be more realistic if she at least gave you a glancing cut before you fired an unavoidable point blank shot? You don't have to do anything but she should be very close to you and I think it would be more realistic.

Imho Aibhne would be able to squeeze the trigger a third time before Aria could finish tripping. And since Aria finishes tripping and attempts to recover before she executes her attack, then she'd likely get shot before she executes her attack. So it all depends on how Aria takes the wound(s) that determines how her own arms (wielding the claws) comes down on Aibhne. I wouldn't determine that for RedneckLoves since that's her call. So I wouldn't write that in my post. But she's more than welcome to determine that for herself and we can see where that leads.

Now, if she is as close as you say, then it's just as likely that the bolt that Hausser deflected (the one that Aibhne just barely avoided) hits Aria depending on how she falls; whether its just before Aibhne or onto Aibhne. It could hit her leg if she slides onto her knee or idk there's dozens of possibilities.

But like I said, it's up to RedneckLoves to decide how all this happens to her character. Aibhne does have armor covering the areas that she's said to be attacking, so I don't know if it will make a difference in the grand scheme of things. If her attacks are disturbed, as we are saying they are, then I don't see them threatening Aibhne much to make this topic too big of a worry.

But you are 100% due the right to voice your opinion, and I respect it. We'll see what RedneckLoves decides to write. ;)
 

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I edited my post to include a hypothetical in a spoiler at the bottom to address this topic. I didn't mean to previously suggest that Aria's attacks missed. I just didn't think we were at the point that had decided that just yet without RedneckLoves' next post. Honestly my opinion is that she wouldn't be able to conclude her attacks and thus wouldn't land a hit, but I wasn't going to determine that for her.

So now you know how I believe her attacks would land (if they would land at all) in that spoiler. <3
 

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Yeah, so this is actually my first thread ever doing serious pvp with kill/maim/capture all go. I thought I knew what I was doing, but obviously that wasn't really the case. I'm pretty disappointed with how this thread is turning out, but nevertheless I know that I have learned a lot and in the future will write very differently when it comes to these open threads.

@Lamper you write in a way I've never seen before, so at first I was kind of ticked because it seemed like you were just ignoring all my attacks. But when it comes down to logistics and reality, I can understand how what you've written makes sense and how I still have chances to redeem myself or dodge certain attacks as well. Previously, it was always my thought that once an attack has happened you can only dodge or deflect those attacks, I never even thought it was a possibility to get in another possible attack move before the other character gains the distance and starts attacking.

So all in all I view this as a learning experience. That said, I will be posting soon and will more than likely be out of the fight from this point forward.
 

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I'm sorry if I came across that way @RedneckLoves. I hope this doesn't mean we aren't going to tgifridays together anymore...? :p

Seriously tho. I hope my intent to be fair and respectful is clear. I like you guys!
 

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Yeah, so this is actually my first thread ever doing serious pvp with kill/maim/capture all go. I thought I knew what I was doing, but obviously that wasn't really the case. I'm pretty disappointed with how this thread is turning out, but nevertheless I know that I have learned a lot and in the future will write very differently when it comes to these open threads.
I'm aware that our sudden entry into the thread is probably a big cause of the disappointment, but I hope you know that we have had no malice whatsoever towards you or Narsi. It was a story opportunity and for me also a nod to Lamper because he's done such an outstanding job writing 3vs1 and being a great (and good example) in the OOC as well.

If you have any question about PvP feel free to ask them or maybe try out something in the thread I'm NPCing for your other character. There's much less threat of bodily harm there ;)
 
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