Silence (Xim Toginchi's training)

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Xim raised his hand and began to build the energy like Master Sithis said, he could feeling the pressure in and around his hand increasing and when he felt that the energy was potentially adequate he allowed it to escape from his hand. This resulted in a powerful force blast which knocked the droid flying across the room. Xim dipped his head and his shoulders started jumping up and down as he laughed to himself silently.
 

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"Mute boy has a sense of honor?"He laughed as well, he can sense it. He sighed and then begun to speak." Your nearly done with training, But before we can more on you must relative a Crystal from the cave. Outside the road would be dangerous you are not to bring any sort of supplies or weapons. Only self a robe and yourself. If I find out you did bring something you would fail trust me I would know. Go to the cave and bring your self and crystals, And you are to wait further instruction here."He said slowly."When you come back you will resume lightning training. If you do not understand and do not know how follow orders I will demise you through seven walls."He said harshly but calmly.

(I want a three or four long paragraphs, three will do. If you can do more I'll gladly apposition it, You are to go to the cave kill the npcs you will be controlling grab the crystals and return back here.)
 
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Xim stood at the mouth of the cave. The cold damp interior almost matching that of the icy winds flowing over the Ando Prime snow planes behind him. As he entered he wondered if it was a good idea to follow Sithis’ instructions about not bringing anything to defend himself. After what had chased him out of a similar cave only a couple of days ago he had to use up all the willpower he had to come with nothing. The cave was not as Xim had expected, it was very narrow to start with but then opened up into a vast cavern. Peering over the edge of the walkway it was made clear to him how vast it actually was and from the bottom a faint glowing was emanating. Being a Miraluka he wondered what something like that looked like to someone with eyes.

As he made his way down the walkway he noticed the light was almost like water flowing slowly out into the open from the walls and floor. It was almost identical to aura he could see around any force sensitives he caught a glimpse of. ‘This must be coming from the crystals’ he thought, ‘I was expecting to spend ages looking for them.

He spent some time looking for the ones giving of the most vibrant rays when he approached them and he could feel a connection to. Then when he had picked a deep red one, a clear one and a couple of others just in case he could find another use for them, he struggled to break them loose from the walls but when he had done so he turned to head back up to the entrance, but was stopped.

His nose was pressed up against a rough surface that he was sure had not been there a moment ago. He took a couple of steps back and froze, before him stood the Gorog it lowered it’s large head and breathed heavily into his face. He tried to run but his legs did not respond to his command, so he pictured himself flying backwards and that is exactly what the Gorog saw, although the figure was very rigid and kind of hovered across the ground it was the most Xim could conjure under the circumstances.

The Gorog went charging after the projection and collided with Xim, sending him and the crystals flying. He scurry around picking them back up and began to sprint up the walkway. It wasn’t long before the Gorog found that no matter how many times it swipes at the motionless figure nothing was going to happen and its attention was turned back to the other figure now climbing the flight of stairs leading out of the cave. It’s strides made quick work of the distance between the two of them and it took a large swipe at Xim.

He narrowly avoided it and paused for a second as he built the energy to jump. If he did not jump now he was never going to outpace the Gorog. He then leaped up and over the large hand of the creature. Then cleared the rest of the climb in seconds. He turned to see it still gaining on him so he snuck into the narrow passage way and back onto the snow planes where he found Sithis waiting for him. He was not expecting him to be there so he quickly held out his hands to show what he had collected.
 
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Sithis stood, up and made his way towards the entrance of the Dome. He slowly then spoke."I guess he is alive after all."He said shortly before moving towards the outside, as he saw his student and handed him the crystals. He said"Keep them and follow me."He said after this was done he made his way, down a hall hoping for his student to follow among doing so he would then slowly, open the sealed door, and make his way, to the middle of the room waiting for his student to come forth.
 

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Xim clutched the crystals close to his chest and followed Sithis. He followed him all the way back to the temple and into the room. First he placed the crystals to one side and sat down in front of Sithis.
 
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"Stand, you will be designing your own saber. Or sabers. Among this are various styles. From what you are capable of choosing."He said slowly. He lifted his hand and through the force a shelf appeared opened as the the styles, designs, and other showed in the room."You may begin."He said slowly.
 

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Xim got to his feet, looked around the shelf. He spent a long time looking over the extensive collection of parts, but out of all the possibilities something was missing. He looked around and grabbed a couple of parts and placed them together, then looked around the room and back to the shelf, along the front was a thin metal strip which he got a hold of and pulled off. He looked at Sithis as he held the strip at the opposite end to the emitter. He was trying to represent a katana like blade, similar to the one he had on him the first time he met Sithis but have a light saber in the hilt.
 

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He pointed to another sealed roomed, the door sprung open and Sithis. Spoke."In there is what you will be looking for."He said slowly. Before sitting down and beginning to eminent.
 

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Xim entered the room, he was quite surprised his primitive demonstration had actually got his point across. In the room every wall was covered with various parts that he had never even thought could be made, but he tried to ignore them and went over to the area where he could see the type of blades he was looking for.

He picked up a couple of them and tried them out before picking one that had a black blade but where the bare metal was viable it was clear that it was red metal covered in a black coating. As he began to leave he noticed another section with some blades labelled tanto and he spent some time looking for one he liked.

He placed the blades on the work surface and pointed his hand towards the small pile of crystals, he didn't picture them individually but instead as one mass and began to build up his pull on them. The red crystal shot over at him followed quickly by the clear one and he caught them both. This showed him that they were the most connected to him with the force.

He laid out all the internal components out and picked out the external shell of the hill he liked. The two pommels were possibly the hardest to put together because he had to make several new parts so that he could attach the katana blades and also have a quick release in case the situation arose where he needed only to use them as lightsabers.

After many hours of work he completed the blades. He attached the blade covers to his belt and activated the sabers, the perfect hum echoed around the room. He turned to face Sithis and awaited confirmation from his master.
 
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"Good, your finally task, before a Mission and promotion."He said slowly."Fight me.If I find you have improved you pass. If you fail you will never pass."He said slowly before jumping a bit far from keeping his distance."When ready begin."HE said slowly.
 

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Xim deactivated the one with the larger blade and placed it and its cover to one side. He then turned to Sithis and pointed his saber at him.
 

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"Are you ready?"He pulled out his two green lightsabers."When ready Begin."He said slowly. Getting in a defiance stance.
 

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Xim pointed his saber upwards and placed his second hand under his first, griping the hilt firmly. He lowered himself slowly and separated his knees until they were shoulders width apart. He began slowly moving forwards and when he was close enough to Sithis he attacked.
 

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He moved his hand and tried to do a weak small push, if that worked he would be sent flying if not, he would block his attack.
 

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Xim caught the blast right on his chest but managed to remain up right. This time he used the force to jump forwards and landed it with a roll. This meant he was very close to the floor when he reached Sithis so he pulled his saber up to attack his master's chest.
 

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SIthis blocked the saber easily, and sent a more stronger force push hoping to send him flying to the wall, if not he would just block Xim's hit's easily.
 

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The repeat attack was easy expected and he quickly dodged to the left of it. Xim raised his saver above his head and brought it down towards Sithis' right shoulder.
 

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He smirked, as he now Vanished in a Blur. Appearing on the other side.Letting Xim's attack miss."Your dealing with a Master of the Force, and Combat, do you really think this will be easy?"He asked slowly.
 

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Xim's blade buzzed as it collided with the floor. Sithis had gone, he looked up to see him stood over the on other side of the room. Xim felt a little frustrated with the move but quickly cooled himself and thought of a plan.

He readied himself and began to charge at Sithis his saber raised his head. His speed was no where near the level of his masters but it was the best he could do. However before he got close he stopped and looked at the door, Iadel was stood looking in. Xim deactivated his saber and walked up behind Sithis as Iadel was probably looking for Sithis rather than himself.
 

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He was gone yet again, before turning and looking distracting his Saber and speaking."I see you are back. Isdal took a long strip did you?"He asked slowly.
 
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