Sarok Magnarus

[Darth Magnarus]

NAME: Sarok Magnarus
FACTION: Sith Order
RANK: Sith
SPECIES: Zabrak
AGE: 32
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5.10 feet
WEIGHT: 154 lb
EYES: Hazel
HAIR: None (Species-Zabrak) Spikes
SKIN: Black and Red
CREDITS: 1000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A scar across my eye which was received in a sparring lesson
FORCE SENSITIVE: I am force sensitive

STRENGTH: Darth Magnarus is quite strong but does not no how much strength he holds yet
DEXTERITY: Darth Magnarus does not let his mass get the best of his agility and can balance a strong attack and fast reflexes without one overwhelming the other
CONSTITUTION: Darth Magnarus quite healthy
INTELLIGENCE: He is not the brightest sith but can make quick decisions in the middle of a war
WISDOM: He is the person you want to come to for wisdom
CHARISMA: He is quite charismatic when influencing others to trust him

PERSONALITY: He is quite cunning and can act quite quick when put in a tough spot. When angered he can be a foe you do not want to mess with. He has a way with words and doesn't need to even speak more than 2 sentences until he has his victim begging on their knees to help him in his conquests. Being such a fierce opponent can definitely throw people off when coming across him in a duel which can work to his advantage but may be a way to have them surrender before the duel has even started.

BIOGRAPHY: Darth Magnarus wasn't always so fierce he once had a soft side but it was soon diminished when he was brutally trained and taught to show no emotion under no circumstance. These words were drilled into his head for years until he could memorize them. His real name was Sarok and these teachings made him who he is today but he was showed the dark side of the force for the first time was when he felt this surge of power flood threw him. He consulted his father on what he felt and was then exiled as the Zabrak species did not want a uprising where the sith might return so he further discovered his powers by testing his limits and he has now started seeking for further guidance in his quest for power.


FORCE POWERS: He is quite powerful but only knows simple powers eg. force push and force choke


SKILLS: Skilled in the art of parkour


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Lighsaber: Red
Sword Form: Makashi

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Strengths: Strong, agile and able to with stand alot of damage
Weaknesses: Short tempered, Eager to impress at any cost

GEAR:
Scavenger armor; Legs body and head

Mandalorian armour (Scavenged from a ship) - Shoulders and arm pads



SHIP: An old smuggler ship from the old times barely works

DROIDS: none

PETS: none

KILLS: Malko (sparring battle back on home planet)

BOUNTIES COLLECTED: none


DUELING RING MATCHES: none


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: none

 

[Marf]

@Darth Magnarus

Alright, my main issues with this is that is almost no semblance of a biography, and the personality is barely scraping by.

Where was he born? What was his family life and childhood like? How did he join the Sith? These sections are going to require much more detail before he can be approved. Check out my Sith, Andromeda, for some ideas on how to structure your personality and biography. They don't need to be huge, just thorough and clear, so we can get a better idea of what your character is like and where he came from. Thanks!

 

[Darth Magnarus]

Okay thanks it's my first character so I will take your advice. I will rewrite it as son as I have time