Sara Nonomyth

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History:

My Short Autobiography. My Name Is Sara Nonomyth, I am a Hybird. And I am Daughter of Alexis Nonomyth, Sister to Alyssa and May Nonomyth, Sister to Tyler Nonomyth, Niece to Gen and Menkio Nonomyth. And Daughter to some dead man, Alexis Nonomyth Killed. My life in the Bogan Empire is short, as a Acolyte I am Limited to do very Few things, without getting in trouble. Even so, I will be given a Master soon, and my training will begin. And I will be able to Become a Crusader one day, then a Instructor. And then a Dark Master. I like it here, very much. I will be living very long time so I should make my stay here worth while. And to Be honest once I am a Crusader I will be training people Like I was before clueless and Unhappy urging to become a Crusader like me. But that's in the future. But as for now, I must tend to my Studies till later my Children of the Night.



Name: Sara Nonomyth
Species: Umbaran/Sephi Hybird
Age: 20(Appears 12)
Gender: Female
Affiliation: Bogan Empire
Current Faction: Bogan Empire
Rank: Acolyte
Gear: Blue Double Bladed Lightsaber, Stranded Acolyte robes and Clothing. White Clothing.
Has a Very small Ship capable of hypersapce.

Forms:
Form V: Shien / Djem So*

Hopeful-*
Padawan-**
Knight-***
Master-****
Council-*****
Grandmaster-******

Force Powers:
Telepathy*
Telekinesis***
Psychometry*
Force Sense*
Force Pull**
Force Push**
Force Grip*
Force Choke*


Hopeful-*
Padawan-**
Knight-***
Master-****
Council-*****
Grandmaster-******

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You need to stop with the Nonomyths dude.
 

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This

May i suggest you change the profile picture, for something different than Darth Nihilus?


It's a Girl Version of The Picture it's suppose to be.
 

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It's a Girl Version of The Picture it's suppose to be.

It has no breasts

It has no face

It has no hair

Dude its Darth Nihilus :bitchez
 

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It has no breasts

It has no face

It has no hair

Dude its Darth Nihilus :bitchez

It's supposes to be a Girl version, and a eight year old has yet to devolve Breasts.
 

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The thought of an eight year old with a double bladed lightsaber is both retarded and humerous at the same time.

Well played sir.
 

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Must... resist... killing... child looking character... Not... resisting... well.
 

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Must... resist... killing... child looking character... Not... resisting... well.

Child looking?

Dude, did you even look at the image of the profile? Does Darth Nihilus look like a child?
 

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Child looking?

Dude, did you even look at the image of the profile? Does Darth Nihilus look like a child?

Suppose to be a Child Looking version as well as a child Girl looking version.
 

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Must... resist... killing... Anner Tahnis... Not... resisting... well.

Stop spamming the bloody profile. Please, If you have no criterion to say, then don't post period. If you have criterion to say about this profile and what to improve then post please.
 

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Stop spamming the bloody profile. Please, If you have no criterion to say, then don't post period. If you have criterion to say about this profile and what to improve then post please.

Well, I suggest really not making another Nonomyth and just playing with the several you have. If not, make a bigger, more detailed, all around better bio. Get rid of the double bladed lightsaber maybe because you really have no business using it at "hopeful" level... maybe explain why the hell the character looks 8.

Oh and you should really take care of some of this spam.

:CSly
 

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Well, I suggest really not making another Nonomyth and just playing with the several you have. If not, make a bigger, more detailed, all around better bio. Get rid of the double bladed lightsaber maybe because you really have no business using it at "hopeful" level... maybe explain why the hell the character looks 8.

Oh and you should really take care of some of this spam.

:CSly

Youngish don't have a Detailed History, They will once I get into rp. Other then that thanks for your suggestions.
 

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Might want to add the gender:female portian into the bio. I know her name is Sara and you refer to her as "she" several times, but just looking at the picture one might assume that your character is EXTREMELY missinformed about their gender.

When you say "appears 8", do you mean she looks like an 8 year old child? If so I would have to agree with the others that you may want to look into changing your picture. The size and stature doesn't look childlike at all. Also I don't believe 8 year old children have the heighth to be able to weild a double bladed light saber, but I could be mistaken.
 
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